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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Its a nice update

Thanks for the pm


Thank you for reading and commenting!!! Mwahhh!!

And no problem on the PM!

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Farz...
My sweet lump of sugar...
We started with page 3 today...
and we are now on page 17...
How exciting this is...
Did I not tell you that people would love your writings...
Cos it's so awesome ...
and...
Unique...
And...
They actually got it right...
They understood it...
So much better than me...
Hats of to those fabulous readers...
and...
Kudos to you Farz...
For producing this amazing piece of fiction...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20


why so??
anyway I willunres and I have read in bits so i am already confused!!😆😆😆


Well join the club!! Navi is the President!

HAHA!

Why the ban? Uh, I happen to spend a lot of time on the forum. So that's why.

Not that the ban changed much. I come here still. All the time. Haha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg today juliet n navi, farz are spamming together??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute



Well join the club!! Navi is the President!

HAHA!

Why the ban? Uh, I happen to spend a lot of time on the forum. So that's why.

Not that the ban changed much. I come here still. All the time. Haha.

chalo its fine!! and i am joining!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


That's it.


You my friend. Has gotten it. Exactly as I've intended..


And you've explained it well too!

Yess! That's why she underlined TELL and well capitalised it.

Asad said she screamed at them when she lost her specs...and when she asked again if she really did, he had no answer. The "..." part was of him speechless.

Which means there was a time when she has voice.


And now that she has finally stop feeling sorry for herself and has come to terms with it..Asad goes and propose...she needs to figure things out, and yes FIGHT HER OWN DEMONS and not have to count on him to do it.

But The pink note part actually took place first, that is the proof Asad was talking about.

So the pink part was from the past.


So it was Asad that proposed to her and declared undying love. And she rejected him because she needs to figure things out on her own first, and maybe if it ever comes to it then she herself would come to him heart on her sleeves!

So she tries to do it as she said she would. She tries telling him the three words without having to write them. So she mouthed them. But he doesn't accept, but is now aware of what's going on, that she's back for him.

So when she asked him to hold her she tries 'saying' it. And that was the "hahehu" bit.

And when he realises this he was so overwhelmed coz she actually said it.

And then she was more concern about having to still go down on her knees coz she said she would, but is finding it really embarrassing to have to do it!

He continues to pull her leg reminding her of the challenge. That she obviously remembers.

And then the pink note was from that time. And it only has her part because only her part was recorded, i.e in writing.. He was speaking. And what he said can be guessed (I hope) by her answers.


Thank you so very much for reading it again and taking the time to comment again!

And Love you loads dear! For having guessed the one thing many simply didn't.

Mwah!


OK I am so so Happy!! 😃
It was definitely an amazing read.
You should write often.

That hahehu part was BEAUTIFUL
So the third part is the past!! Now the entire picture is clear. Loved it.👏
Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey Farz its really exciting to decode your story. Please tell me that I was wrong with my previous comment so that I can think further. I am just connecting dots on that basis only😆


I've explain in length in my reply to your previous comment!!

You need not decode anymore...but maybe...another one? Why do you think Zoya was rummaging her bag? And why did she cry?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


That's it.


You my friend. Has gotten it. Exactly as I've intended..


And you've explained it well too!

Yess! That's why she underlined TELL and well capitalised it.

Asad said she screamed at them when she lost her specs...and when she asked again if she really did, he had no answer. The "..." part was of him speechless.

Which means there was a time when she has voice.


And now that she has finally stop feeling sorry for herself and has come to terms with it..Asad goes and propose...she needs to figure things out, and yes FIGHT HER OWN DEMONS and not have to count on him to do it.

But The pink note part actually took place first, that is the proof Asad was talking about.

So the pink part was from the past.


So it was Asad that proposed to her and declared undying love. And she rejected him because she needs to figure things out on her own first, and maybe if it ever comes to it then she herself would come to him heart on her sleeves!

So she tries to do it as she said she would. She tries telling him the three words without having to write them. So she mouthed them. But he doesn't accept, but is now aware of what's going on, that she's back for him.

So when she asked him to hold her she tries 'saying' it. And that was the "hahehu" bit.

And when he realises this he was so overwhelmed coz she actually said it.

And then she was more concern about having to still go down on her knees coz she said she would, but is finding it really embarrassing to have to do it!

He continues to pull her leg reminding her of the challenge. That she obviously remembers.

And then the pink note was from that time. And it only has her part because only her part was recorded, i.e in writing.. He was speaking. And what he said can be guessed (I hope) by her answers.


Thank you so very much for reading it again and taking the time to comment again!

And Love you loads dear! For having guessed the one thing many simply didn't.

Mwah!

OH FARZ!
I won't call myself your fan, that is just lame, I am nobody's fan.
But you and your friend there, Zanutix, Both have made me cry on very different occasions. Her's was the Drizzling Sunshine!
You guys write so well that I feel ashamed to post any of my bull around as a piece of work.
This OS better get an award because if it doesn't, I will know this forum belongs to Ass kissers only.
I kind of guessed the mute with your TELL, but I don't like reading stories like this. I am too weak hearted so I objected that thought.
This was beautiful. This was the best I have read so far.
Truly Amazing. Especially the Hahuhu part! I didn't even guess that! It make me overwhelm and emotional.
Spectacular Sweetheart!
You should be very very proud.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

omg today juliet n navi, farz are spamming together??

Yeah...
Only you was missing my cherry blossom😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Farz,,

You naani munni! is driving me insane. Now does this have a code in it.
So what if only one side is heard. Eh, what?😉 I am totally confused.
No Navi didn't ask me to read it, I was browsing and I stumbled upon this,
I am not Haider fan so anything Asad& Zoya I do drop in to read if I am online.
Especially if you write.👏
Ban eh? Why is that? Was it your efforts on Navi's thread? 😆
Mere dimag kharab kar diya Nani Munni ne!


Haha the ban was for all...I get carried away here. Like most do...but main kuch zyada hi...

Yes the code is right there staring! Though by now you ought to know already!

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