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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Seriously the anticipation is killing me. Wifi down so using phone instead of laptop. Now battery down .please reveal the secret before my phone and I die.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: NAVI55
I have read this +- 10 times...😆

I could kick myself now...because when I read it again...

It's like so obvious...

Thank you for putting me out of my misery and clearing cob webs of my mind...

Plus minus TEN times???

That's more than what I've read!!! Haha yeah, I read my stories. And was so confused myself. Yep even with inside info! Haha!

Love you so very much Navi for this!!

And I simply HAD to take you out of your misery! You're killing off my characters!

Haha!

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Plus minus TEN times???

That's more than what I've read!!! Haha yeah, I read my stories. And was so confused myself. Yep even with inside info! Haha!

Love you so very much Navi for this!!

And I simply HAD to take you out of your misery! You're killing off my characters!

Haha!

🤣🤣

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Nanni munni, Please reply to Juliet's comment...

She needs to sleep...

She has work tomorrow...

Reply to mine too.

I need to make dinner.

And i'm not able to think clearly.

(Yes you can say, If I could think clearly, i would've deciphered your Holmes level mystery by now)

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Reply to mine too.

I need to make dinner.

And i'm not able to think clearly.

(Yes you can say, If I could think clearly, i would've deciphered your Holmes level mystery by now)

I am guessing the deep pink in the end is the proof Asad is talking about.

The note Zoya wrote to him in the beginning when she said no to him.

And he keeps that as proof.

Their conversation ends with the pink and black draft.

Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Reply to mine too.

I need to make dinner.

And i'm not able to think clearly.

(Yes you can say, If I could think clearly, i would've deciphered your Holmes level mystery by now)

😆😆😆

You too...

I couldn't think clearly all day...

You just have to know...It's like OCD...

You cant let this one go...

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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

You most definitely are.

The first too might I add.

You had me jumping, quite literally. I was squealing to no end. It is such a joy when someone gets your story.

So it took only a careful second read huh.

Thank God you realised no one's dead. I read your second comment first only then the the first, so I knew I had to address both.

It's just that the pink part is not exactly a letter, but it was the proof Asad was talkin about..it's merely a piece of paper...but is Asad's most treasured item of belongings. Like he said, it gives him reassurance. Reassurance of what? Yes, that she might come back for him.

So I guess people reading this reply of mine would get the story too now!! Hehe!!

Although I must know one thing. Do you know why there was writing in the first place? Why do you think?

Edited:

And yes!! You like this style of writing?

Really?

Aww!! Thank you so very much!!

Makes me so happy knowing this!!

Mwahhh!

Love ya dear for making my day! Incredible feeling!

And thank you for taking the time to read and comment and RE-READ and comment again on my story!! I feel so very special...!!!! And sorry to have made you go through cracking it! Mwah!

I was right? OMGGG *Hugs herself with glee* I feel proud of myself! 😃

And the fact that I made your day makes my day! 😃

You have no idea how happy I am. Was literally stalking this thread to know when you replied to me! 😆

Also, I think she cant speak. She's mute, and hence the writing takes place. Explains the quotes and italics, I guess! Another guess, I hope I am right this time too! 😳

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: jasminerose
I don't know why I felt Zoya cant speak. she is mute!!
i.e. why she says in the end that she has to fight her demons on her own.
The pink notes and all. Asad rejected her first and then he got rejected.
u underlined TELL and the she mouthed the " i Love you" never said that.
in the end she says i will find a way to say that to you and I can always write that.

i dont know may be thinking too much

That's it.

You my friend. Has gotten it. Exactly as I've intended..

And you've explained it well too!

Yess! That's why she underlined TELL and well capitalised it.

Asad said she screamed at them when she lost her specs...and when she asked again if she really did, he had no answer. The "..." part was of him speechless.

Which means there was a time when she has voice.

And now that she has finally stop feeling sorry for herself and has come to terms with it..Asad goes and propose...she needs to figure things out, and yes FIGHT HER OWN DEMONS and not have to count on him to do it.

But The pink note part actually took place first, that is the proof Asad was talking about.

So the pink part was from the past.

So it was Asad that proposed to her and declared undying love. And she rejected him because she needs to figure things out on her own first, and maybe if it ever comes to it then she herself would come to him heart on her sleeves!

So she tries to do it as she said she would. She tries telling him the three words without having to write them. So she mouthed them. But he doesn't accept, but is now aware of what's going on, that she's back for him.

So when she asked him to hold her she tries 'saying' it. And that was the "hahehu" bit.

And when he realises this he was so overwhelmed coz she actually said it.

And then she was more concern about having to still go down on her knees coz she said she would, but is finding it really embarrassing to have to do it!

He continues to pull her leg reminding her of the challenge. That she obviously remembers.

And then the pink note was from that time. And it only has her part because only her part was recorded, i.e in writing.. He was speaking. And what he said can be guessed (I hope) by her answers.

Thank you so very much for reading it again and taking the time to comment again!

And Love you loads dear! For having guessed the one thing many simply didn't.

Mwah!

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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Shies at BOLD!

Am so happy!!!

Mwah!!

😳

Aww! I am a fan of your writings now! Have you written other stuff too? 😃

Edited by -ARLover- - 11 years ago

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Farz,
Main kahin nahin jane wali. Not anymore.
Maybe I was wrong. Jane wali, so it was not Asad.
Gosh, have to rearrange my ideas all over again.
Will come back tmrw with a new thought and idea.

At this point I can only 😊

I hope it was at least worthy of the time you've spent on it.

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago