Asya / Kabhi TS | The Mistake Turned Life | part 4 up ! - Page 11

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Hello dear...🤗
Sorry for late responding.
I was quite busy last few days...
And now come to the TS...
This is awesome...
Loved to read it and the most you described it beautifully.
One mistake...changes Asad and Zoya's life...
And now they will be together, forever...
Thank you so much for PM dear...
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" You cannot walk out of someone's heart like you never existed it takes a lot of courage to do so and you still remain a coward ..."


- " By Me " Zoya's POV :

"It had been 7 months , 7 months since that night . I am at his house well it doesn't look like a house its a bloody mansion the house in which we spend the night wasn't this that was a small one but this i am treated as a queen here . I have many servants around me everytime when he isn't and when he is he never let me step a foot on ground "

That's my life from the past 3 months i am in my 7th month right now . I still remain quite but i know i love him i really do what can i say i loved him after i came to know about the baby it was such a soothing feeling to become a mother .

It's my b'day today but no one knows i even don't know my real b'day this was just a mere day when i was left at the orphanage and dilshad khaala named it as my birthday . I was settled on the couch watching Twilight for the 100th time . I love Jacob !! . He is so...

My thoughts were interupted by a ring on my phone seeing the caller i smiled . It was khaala ...


"Hello dilshad khaala ! " i greeted her .

"Hello ...kya baat hai meri bachhi bhut khush lag rhi hai ...maa banne ki khushi hoti hi aisi hai ..." said khaala

"Haan khaala ...mujhe itni khushi aaj tak kabhi mehsoos nhi hui jitni aaj kl hoti hai ...ptah nhi tab kya hoga jab ye bachha iss duniya me aayega ! "


" haa ! haa ! ...ye natural hai Zoya sab maaon ko aisa hi lagta hai ..jab tumhara baby tumhe pehli baar ammi bulaega ...jab tumhe pyaar krega tab tumhe special feel hoga !...Achha Asd kaisa hai ?''


"Umm...wo achhe ...the-theek ...ha-hai ! "


"Huh !...Zoya tum usse bta kyu nhi deti ki tum usse kitni mohabbat krti ho ?...kb tak sach chhupaogi ?..."

"Khaala please !!...aisa ..."

"mujhse jhoot mat bolo Zoya mai jaanti hu sab !...tum usse mohabbat krti ho aur wo bhi tumse mohabbat krta hai bas bolne se darrta hai ki kahi agar tume na keh diya tho wo tumhe kho dega aur phir usse apni zindagi akele guzarni padegi !..."


"Khaala aap ye ?..."

"Sach hai Zoya ...Sirf sach hai !...Asad ko haan keh do Zoya wo tumhe bahut khush rakhega mai jaanti hu ...Achha khuda haffiz !..aaj yaha kuch donaters aane waale hai mai chalti hu !..."

" Khuda hafiz khaala !..."


"kya khaala sach keh rhi hai ? "


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Asad came back from his work and immediately asked the butler even before stepping inside ...

"How's Zoya ?..."

"She's good sir but after lunch she is refusing to eat anything and saying she wants to meet you as you return from office ..."

"What ! she isn't eating !?...what got into her ?.."

Asad rushed to her room and opened the door hastily but the sight that greeted him melted his heart away . There was Zoya applying or rather trying to apply oil on her swollen feet her eyes a bit red and puffy due to the pain she was feeling because of bending asad came out of his reverie and rushed to her . Taking her swollen feet in her hand he spoke with concern ...


"Zoya...Tch ...how many times I've told you don't do anywork that hurts you please lie back i will massage your foot !.."

Seeing him she smiled and went back on the bed resting a pillow she sat and admired the great business tycoon massaging a girl like her's feet with utmost care and love ...

"Why haven't you ate anything since lunch ?! "

"I wanted to talk to you first ! ..."

"What ?.."

"Dilshaad khaala called today ! "

"What ?! ...why?! ..I-I-I mean ...w-why so-so suddenly ?..." Zoya sighed .

"Mr. khan ?..."

"y-yes ?.."

" Do You Love Me ? .."

"...*silence*..."

"Do You Love Me ?.."

"...*silence*..."

"DO YOU LOVE ME MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN ?!! "

"YES !!! ...Yes I do !!...I love you ! from the day you left me after that night that's the reason i came back to take you along with me but then I came to know that you're pregnant ...You refused to even stay with me how could in the first place i'd asked you to marry me you weren't ready to even listen me once ...I wanted to but..."
He was cuut off by her..

" WILL YOU MARRY ME ?! "

"huh ?..."

"Will you marry me ? " Asked Zoya with tears ...
"Please don't say no !...I will die !!...sob! "

"Zoya !!..shhh...shh !...quite !...okay its okay !...my god you are giving me heart attacks today one by one ..."

he said while taking her in his protective arms ...

after many mins ...

"Why did you even Ask for marrying don't you even know my answer from begining ?..."

"What !? you won't marry me ? " asad rolled his eyes and replied

"Of course I will marry you ...Stupid ! ..."

And with this they kissed each other like a couple in love ...❤️


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Okay guyss i m done with this last part !!
next will be an epilouge !! 😃
please hit the likes and drop a comment too...
and @princess101 see i updated ! ...
sorry for the delay !
read the note on my ffs for the reason of late update ! 😊
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nice part...superb ending!!
waiting foe the epilogue
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Waiting for the epilogue ❤️

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