2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1)

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Chapter 9 Updated. 😃

Tada!!! Look who is here. 😎 Any Guesses? 😳

Yep, Asad has finally come back home, jinke liye Zoya was waiting impatiently 😆

No cookies for anybody 🤣 😆 Cause Main Asad ki baat kar rahi thi, Apni nahi 😆

Reminder.

Blue part signifies the Present while the black part until now is Zoya's, who is reminiscing the past. 😊

Frankly,I did not enjoy writing this update at all. But I promise to make the next better. Pinky Promise. 😳 (Looks at Anku jan and winks 🤣) This was UTTER BAKWAAS according to me 😆 What do you guys think about it? Please please please let me know! 😆

p.s. @Sadie : MY ONLY BACCCHA!! I AM SWWWOOORRRIIIEEE. 😭 So very. 😭

p.p.s : Love to my Noddle Mum! Who always takes out time from her VERY HECTIC SCHEDULE just to proof the updates out. 😳 🤗

Thank you so much for showering so much of love and support towards this fiction of mine. I am so very overwhelmed with the response. 😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH. 🤗

Updates will be Once A Week, mostly by Wednesdays.😳

Suggestions will be highly entertained.

Do LIKE and Do COMMENT

Guys its a request that please do COMMENT at least. It encourages the writer to write the next chapter. I know most of you all are leaving or left, but please PLEASE please do let me know if you are interested in reading the fiction.

And Silent Readers, Better LIKE or else or else or else I will go ==> 😭

For Updates BUDDY ME. 😃

❤️ Ankie 😆😆

NOTE : AsYa for me never died. They reside happily in me, bickering with each other, living a content happy life without any intrusion by any kind of evils. 😳 That means, Yes! I will continue writing on AsYa until my muse stops co-operating with me. 😆 So please please please, Let me know if you are not interested in reading on AsYa any further 😊. Cause I'll make sure not to bother you with the updates on AsYa. 😊

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

asad and ayaan have a father and son relationship😳

ayaan so like a kid when he lost to asad😆😆

"Bhaijan kab ane wale hai?" Ayaan finally spoke up as Zoya fidgeted with the wiring.

"Jaldi aajayege Ayaan.." Zoya happily sang as if Ayaan was a little boy of 3.

"Okay!" Ayaan sadly pouted.

ayaan is like a child wanting his father to return with gifts and toys and zoya was like a mom consoling her son😳..i love this bonding also😃

asad has a dreadful past😭

ayaan is right he deserves happiness in his life

suddenly ayaan behave like a man worried about the family😆

u had written well his change of shade from a kid to grown up👏

poor asad want to manage to kids in his life😆😆

finally asad is here in present😃😃

well i hav to say that he entered as a thief😆

u really think this as utter bakwass 😡

have a checkup soon😆

bcoz this was beautiful👍🏼

Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago

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Aditi/Swathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Wow tht was awesome ankie..
I loved it..
Asad's past.. My poor baby..
He worth all the happiness in the world..
Loved ayaan nd zoya prt..
So beautifully written..
Continue soon..

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Hi Ankie...

i looved this update...

asad's past was so painful!!

poor guy

Ayaan and Zoya parts were superb!!!

and i really loved reading a little more about the present 😃

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: KSG_ki_Deewani
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dont be unhappy like Sadie. 🥺 No one understand how busy a person I am on Thursdays and on weekends 😭 U know na, I love you more than Abhimanyu, Armaan, Asad, Raghu and all of them 🥺

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

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Ankie.. That was awsome...Asad had such a painful past... and he has slogged all his life... Ayaan is so worried about his Bhaijaan ... loved their bond.. Ayaan sleeping on his bro's lap ... Ayaan .. the way he told Zoya and made her realize was also cool...😊

The whole Ayaan and Zoya scenes were good ... Asad and his OCD ...though he loved to see them get close and spend time... 😊

Finally Asad is home in reality... The way she held on to him and did not let him go initially was sweet...

On the whole a lovely chapter as usual...

Apologies.. wanted to write bada wala comment.. I was so very tired last night.. went off to sleep ... and now need to get ready and rush to office...

Take care Ankie and thanks for giving wonderful story.. 😊

Edited by DevikaRavish - 11 years ago

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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

it is a good update...

what i oved most is the presnt..

their bedroom.. they r together

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Okay give me a huggiee coz this is the first time im unressing my comment is such a short time 😆

Awww my Aapiee kisne bola ye chapter bleh hai... mainu toh achha laga 😃

Thoda aur lamba ho saktaa tha par because your exams are around the corner you are forgiven 😆

Haayeee mere AsYaan!!! I love you mooorrreee for this!! I missed their bhaichara 😭

Now Zoya has realized how precious a person Asad really is... I loved how Ayaan opened up to her👏

And Mona-Raabert!! Yaaayyy you gave me my demand yippeee!!!! 🤗🥳

Aur Asad ghar aa gaya

I love everything you write so stop over-thinking wouldja?!

P.S: Love you one, too, three, four, five..., infinity Aapuu 🤗

P.P.S: Ee kaisan gaana haigaa?? Kal se gaa rahe ho 😲

Edited by Madame_Noddy - 11 years ago

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#780

such a beautiful update baby ...
luvd d way ayaan n zoya gelled wid each other ...poor asad felt avoided
ayaan told zoya everything about asad's past ..n dat was just soo wonderful ...
asad roared 🤣
n present ...asad pampers zoya sooo much

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