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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

sounds cool...i hadn't watched the movie...good...I'll directly read asya version...
update the first part soon


I had said please dont comment since firts part not yet over
I couldnt upload the rest, because of net interruptions
But you hv starting commenting I wanted to give a pre interval and post interval 2 parts only
but see ms like that I have to give more parts to this now because of the break and continuity

thank you so much
glad you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

first part update ho gaya...
zoya shut up...poor asad!!!
it was hilarious anu Di...she is a nonstop chatter-box...
she missed her train twice...uff!!
fight...my favorite one...
continue soon


Oh you didnt watch the movie read Asya version straight, then I would advice to watch the movie after reading this.

You fill find similarity yet difference. I have adapted JWM story but I have retained Asya original here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Loving the concept 😳
Can u PM me this oneee
I'll read whn I find timee 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

I couldnt upload the continuation of the first part since I was experiencing net problems and here it is.

Scene 11: After the fight



Asad not able to believe asked "apne phir train miss kardi?" Zoya "yeh sab na apki vajah se horaha, kaha than a maine, chodungi nahi apko" Asad smiled at little hearing that. And then a wide one revealing his perfect jaw line and the dimple. "Chaliye" he said. And they both walked on the streets of Agra. Zoya "Agra ki galiyon ke bare main suna tha, ab jake dekh rahi hoon, abbu muje kahaniyon suna the the aur main hamesha dekhna chahti thi, aaj dekh liya, kitni sunsan haina yeh galiyaan, aur main Aggrrraaa ki galiyon main train choot kar ghoom rahi hoon apke saath iss andheri raat main," she flashed her dimples too. Asad "apko iss situation main bhi mazaak sooj raha hai, apko na museum main rakha chahiye, ticket lagne chahiye apko dekhe ke liye" Zoya irritated "Oh really, main aise hoon tho aap kaise ho, train main bina ticket ke chadthe ho, phir train kahan jaa rahi hai isska pata nahi, phir kissi anjaan station main utar jate ho, phir meri train choot thi hain, aur 110 mile ke raftaar se gadi chalak muje agra station pohuncha the ho, almost sabki jaan lekar of course, aur main yehan train main baitne ki bajayi Agra ki galiyon main ghoom rahi hoon, yah sab nahi hota agar aap uss station main na utare hote, ab vo train lalitpur main hi rukhegi aur vahan jaakar muje mere samaan bhi collect karna hai, aur aaj raat ke liye kissi hotel main rukh jate hai, apka wallet dekha main, paise hai uss me tho mana bhi nahi kar sakte, aur pls bahana mat banaye," Asad "teek hai aaj ke liye rukhte hai aur kal subah Lalitpur ke liye bus pakadthe hai." While walking they reached a hotel and they went inside

Scene 12: At the hotel reception


Zoya took the intiative and asked "Ek kamra milega?" Receptionist looked at Asad and then at Zoya. Asad butted in "yahan ka tariff kya hai?" Receptionist "jee matlab" Asad "ek din ka room ka bhada kya hai?" Receptionist " apko din ki hisab se chahiye ya phir kuch ghante ke liye?" Asad said "ek din" Zoya quickly retorted Allah miyaan whats wrong with you Akdu, " humare paas paise kam haina," she whispered in his ears and then continued "hum ek din ke liye kyu chahiye, hum tho bas kuch ghanto ka kaam hai" Asad "Aap samaj nahi rahi hai, yeh kya pooch raha hai" Zoya "main sab samaj rahi hoon aur simple baat hai, vo pooch raha hume kitne ghante ke liye room chahiye, hum thodi yahan holiday par aye hain, bas aaj ki raat ki tho bat hai, bas khatm, bhiayaa, suniye 2 ghante ke liye, " Asad "Dekhiye 2 ghanta," Zoya "acha teen kaafi hoga nahi, yah finalized teen, aram se phir hum fresh hokar nikalenge, kyun Mr..Akdu" Asad pinched the bridge of the nose seeing Zoyas banter regarding ours and how they are misunderstood by the receptionist and his expressions too. Asad extended "aap credit card lete hai" Receptionist "ji koi card nahi sirf cash" Asad paid while Zoya waited at a distance. Receptionsit asked "Kahan se mili?" Asad blurted out train main" Receptionist "train main?" his jaw dropped. "aaj kal train main bhi yeh log danda karte hai kya?" Asad did not hear that as he went away

Scene 13 : Inside the hotel room

Zoya was sitting on the bed with her legs bended and knee touching her chin. Asad entered and he closed the door. Zoya looked at him with piercing eyes. Asad "aapko kya zaroorat thi yeh batane ki hume sirf ghante ke liye room chahiye" Zoya "to galat kya kaha," Asad "aap bohot bewakoof hai" Zoya "Hi I m Zoya and you?" Asad "Asad" Zoya "Assad? Nice name" Asad came a little towards her and Zoya got terrified and quickly changed her voice and said "dekhiye aap samjte honge ki main ek awara type ladki hoon, kyunki maine apko vahan uss road par hug kiya, au yahan hotel main ek kamre... tho main apko clear kardoon main aise ladki nahi hoon, muje karate ata hai" Asad getting irritated "tho apko kya lagta hai, ki main apka rape karoonga, miss Zoya mera aisa koi irada nahi hai" zoya hai bhi tho main hone nahi doongi" Asad "aap karate jaante hi tho un gundo ki saath ladayi kyun nahi kiya, mujse aake lipat kyun gayi?" Zoya was now at loss of words, but quickly covered "vo main prepared nahi thi, aur ek saath bohot sare the, tho main thoda dar bhi gayi thi" Asad smiled a little at her innocent reply "ghabrayi nahi, main apko kuch nahi karunga, jisko life main itna bada dhoka mila ho dosti ke naam par nikah ke naam par vo kya kissi dusra ka fayda utagaya," Zoya "tho yeh baat hai, kissi ne apko dhoka diya hai, koun hai vo, girl friend?" Asad "girl friend nahi thi bas meri bachpan ki dost thi, maine ammi ke liye use nikah ke haan kiya tha, lekin usne hum sab ka bharosa thod diya, nikah din bhag gayi ek khat likh kar ki vo pregnant hai, yeh sadma mere abbu bardsassht nahi kar paye aur vo chal basse" Asad was sitting with his both hands on the head hung down. Zoya came near him and asked "do you have her photo with you?" Asad "lekin kyun" Zoya "batayiyena, hai ki nahi" Asad opened his wallet to show her a photo of hers which he had kept as his ammi had given him. Zoya "okay jala do, use apni life se hamesha ke liye jalado," Asad "what" Zoya said "I said burn it now, trust me you will feel good". Asad "kya bacho jaise baat kar rahi hai aap? Zoya "baaat bacho jaise hi hai, par karne maine koi burayi nahi hai, haina? Asad took the photo and took a matchbox and lit it he was holding it in his hand with his blood red eyes. Zoya "now go and flush her out of your life" Asad went to the toilet and flushed it and came back. Zoya "how are you feeling now?" Asad "vo actually you are right, feeling much better now" Zoya "dekha main kaha tha na" She widened her eyes and looked at a calm Asad now. Asad seeing her too happy asked her "vo aap Bhopal se hai yeh tho pata hai, par apke parivar ke bare main apne kuch nahi kaha" Zoya "mera parivar bohot bada hai, mere abbu Gaffur Ahmed Siddique ek jane mane society person hai aur college main professor hai, meri ammi Razia Siddique ek dum housewife hai, lekin she is talented too, like she knows home made remedies for all situations, then I have a younger sister, who is still studying but unlike me she is not interested in studies but she wants to marry" Asad interrupted her and said "kya tho aap nikah nahi karna chahti" Zoya said "main tho nikah tab karungi jab muje yeh yakeen hojaye ki muje mohabbat hogayi hai aur ek aise shaks se karungi jo sirf mujse pyar kare ,mere abbu ke doulat se nahi, aur haan main kahan thi, ji family, ek badi behen bhi hai, Zeenat Appi, aur phir unke NRI hubby Anwar jiju, meri aur jiju ki bohot jamthi hai aur phir bohot sare cousins jo hamesha ate jate rahte hai" Asad "kaafi bada hai apki family" zoya "aur apki". At that time they heard people screaming and running along the corridors and some are trying to put on the clothes. Zoya asked "yeh kya horaha hai? Asad said "shayad raid padi hai" Manager screaming "main peeche wala door khol raha hoon sab bhaag jayiye isse pehle ki police ki haath lage" Asad caught hold of Zoyas hands and started running along with others soon they were out of that hotel and panting and sweating they came to a bus stop and Asad made Zoya sit in it and he went to buy tickets.

Scene 14: Bus stop


Zoya said "Allah miyaan ab no more excitement this day I had enough now I want some peace and rest of mind. Train chootne se shuru hua tha, ab tak bhaag hi rahe the, ab jake baitne ko mili hai. Allah miyaan please" Asad came in and said "Shayad Allah miyaan ne apke sunli yeh bus adhi raat ko hi nikalegi tab tak hume yahan iss bus main bait na hoga" Zoya "kya adhi raat maine tho abhi kaafi waqt hai, ab kya karenge." Zoya viewed outside the bus and saw Taj Mahal. Zoya suggested why not they see Taj Mahal and Taj is beautiful on full moon days. Asad agreed but he had no more money but didn't want to disappoint Zoya as he felt somewhere she was in trouble because of him only. He looked at his hand and saw his engagement ring , he sad "chaliye Taj dekhte hai, aur tab tak bus bhi tayyar hojayegi" Zoya flashed her dimples. Asad too smiled in return. Zoya said while walking "apna smile karte hue bohot ache lagte ho, you know apko tho koi bhi aachi ladki mil sakthe hai, handsome ho, khate peeta ghar ke lagte ho, koi burayi nahi hai, apko tho koi bhi milege uss chudayil ankhon wali se achi," Asad laughed "chudayil aankhon wali, you mean Tanveer" Zoya yes" and Asad noticed something and said "aap yahan rukiye main abhi ata hoon"

http://sound6.mp3pk.com/indian/jab_we_met/jabwemet05(www.songs.pk).mp3

(imagine AsYa is going to Taj and seeing the Taj etc on this song and taking some photos there on full moon day, then doing some masti, Asad takes Zoya for a ride in a cycle, then they have some street food and see a dance troupe. Zoya dances with them and Asad watching her. They having ice creams, lollies etc, and go to palm reading perons on the road side being dragged away by Asad etc)


Scene 15: A Scene in the rain and a cottage


Asad and Zoya after having fun was coming back to the bus stop. Asad was coming out of the depression slowly by Zoya having on his side and also starts to enjoy her company. Both on the way back to the bus stop were heavily drenched in rain. They just took shelter in a nearby cottage which was vacant. Asad changed himself in a black shirt and Zoya into a pink saree. Zoya said "idhar mat dekhiye, please I have not yet done" Asad "Okay" She was chaning behind a curtain. Asad said "Have you heard of Rashid Ahmed Khan, the builder and owner of Dilshad Constuctions?" Zoya " yes vo tho bohot famous builder hai, actually unhone ne hamara Bhopal ka pushtaini bungla jahan ab hum rahte hai, usko remodel kiya tha, mere abbu hamesha unke kaam ka tareef karthe hai, lekin aap yeh kyun pooch rahe hai?" Asad "kyunki main unka beta hoon" Zoya eyes widened and by the time she had changed and with perplexed expressions came to Asad "Kya aap Asad Ahmed khan hai?" "The one and only Asad Ahmed Khan" Asad was happy at that statement of hers that she considers him one and only. Zoya said "the great Asad Ahmed Khan, the perfect designer of sweet homes as I have heard, Wow aaj main apke saamne khadi hoon, yakeen nahi hota" Asad said "yes and I am the same Asad you are referring to" Zoya said "No you are not that Asad" Asad asked "why, any change in my face?" Zoya said "not change in face but change in character, the Asad I know struggled hard to become a successful businessman but now what I see in front of me is a man who thinks everything in life has come to an end when his marriage broke with his childhood friend" Asad said "Zoya please don't talk about that, I really don't want to" Zoya said "but you have to, dekhiye kissike aane jaane sezindagi nahi rukti hai, lekin hum uss zindagi ko behetereen bana sakte if we live in the moment, iss duniyea har problem ka solution hota hai, apka problem ka bhi hai, simple, forget your bad memories and cherish good ones" Asad "yeh itna asaan nahi hai jaise ki aap bol rahi hai" Zoya "yes its very easy, pehle batayiye why were you so much hurt when Tanveer left you at the altar on the day of the marriage?" Asad "because I trusted her" Zoya "why did you trust her, I mean any special reasons for that?" Asad "she was always a homely girl and used to wear traditional dresses, she was very reserved, she used to help ammi in her house hold chores whenever she used to visit me and she always behaved very well with everybody and had reverence for all rituals" Zoya "What nonsense, you judged by her dress and her daily day to day routine activities. Is this want you wanted in your bride?" Asad said "yes almost like that only" Zoya "then problem is your view point of seeing Tanveer and judging her in the manner you wanted, you never probed to see what she was actually" Asad "may be par how are you justifying it" Zoya "seedhe si baat hai, dekhiye aap hamesha se ek gharelo ladki chahte the, aur vo aap ne Tanveer main dekha aur just took it for granted that girls who wear traditional clothes are very homely and you misjusded her with her outer appearance. Insaan ki aankhen uske dil ki baat keh dete hi and you failed to read her eyes." Asad "lekin use koi haq nahi tha ki vo aisa nikah se bhag jaye," Zoya " I think when you are in love, you don't see the consequences , vo bhi yeh sab pyar main kiya hoga" Asad "bakwas" Zoya "nahi main bakwas nahi kar rahi hoon, balki main tho yeh kehti hoon ki aap phir se uss hadse ko ek alag tareeke se nahi dekh rahe hai, vo chahti tho apki dosti ka faydaa utasakti thi, lekin usne aisa nahi kiya" Asad "matlab" Zoya "vo badi asani se apni pregnancy chupa kar, apse nikah kar leti aur phir apko batati ki vo pregnant hai, tab apko fanak thak nahi lagti, sab uss bache ko apka bacha hi samjenge, haina" Asad nodded in positive, "tho agar vo aisa karti tho zyadaa viswsaghaat nahi hota, apki kya izzat rah jati agar kabhi sabko yeh pata chalta, apke khandaan ki izzat mitti main mil jati, lekin Tanveer ne aisa nahi kiya but she chose to tell the truth but at the wrong time may be she was also forced into this, who knows? Issilye zindagi ko dekhna ka naraziya badliye, tab aap bhi mere jaise hojayenge" Asad looked at her in awe that she had a valid point. Zoya suddenly "hamari bus choot jayegi, train ke jaise." Asad said "Apna iss duniya main single piece ho, apke jaise koi aur nahi" And they both laugh.

Scene 16 Zoyas Residence Bhopal


A car screeched in front of the big house Siddique Mansion. Everybody screamed Zoya agayi, Zoya agayi. Soon Asad saw a battalion of persons coming towards the door. He told Zoya that now he has to go back and he cant come with her to her house. Zoya insisted that he should stay there for sometime and then go back to his family since he has helped her a lot. Soon the whole family was there to welcome Zoya, her ammi came first "are zoya kitni dino ke baad dekh rahi hoon, kitni patli hogayi hai," she took a bit of her kajal and put it on under her ears. Humera also hugged her "Baji maina na apko bada miss kiya" Zeenat came forward and she too hugged her "finally Zoya computer engineer bangayi, hamari ghar ki pehle engineer" Gaffur also came forward and kept his hand on her head and say "Allah tumhari har murad puri kare, khoob naam kamao" Then Anwars turn came, Zoya and Anwar had a different type of relationship. They both hi fied each other. Anwar saw that somebody was in the car. He asked "Zoya kya gadi main koi hai, tumhare saath koi aaya hai kya, bulao, koun hai," Asad himself came out of the car and they asked "Zoya yeh koun hai?" Zoya replied "Asad" Asad Ah..." At that time Asad said no with his eyes and she agreed to keep his identitly as a secret. Then Zoya said that she missed the train and he helped her to get home. Everybody warmly welcomed Asad to their house. Zoya beta inhe guest room dikado Gaffur said. "aao beta, andhar ano, isse apna ghar hi samjo"

Scene 17: Dinner time as Zoyas ResidenceEverybody was offering something or the other to Asad as a gratitude for helping Zoya to reach home safely. Asad was politely refusing everything but there was no chance at all. Food was shoved into his mouth turn by turn by everyone. Asad finally said "Jee khana bohot lazeez tha, aura b main aur nahi kha sakta, mera pet phat jayega, you know main tale huye cheese aur heavy food se door rahta hoon." Humera asked "Kya aap 6 packs ho?" Muje na 6 packs wala bohot pasand hai jaise ki Salman Khan, hayee kya body hai" Zoya shouted "humera mehmaan ke samne yeh kya baat kar rahi ho, bakwas band karo, yeh tumhare type ke nahi hai samji". Humera turned her mouth to the other direction and mumbled something inaudibly. Asad was having hard time in digesting the feast that he has intaken now. Zoya came to his room with a glass of milk. Seeing Asad in discomfort she asked "khana kuch zyaada hogaya kya, I m sorry, main apke liye jaljira lati hoon." Asad told "its okay Zoya, but today I saw that everybody in this house loves you so much, that a stranger like me also got attention who just helped you to reach home." Zoya said "yahan sab aise hi hai, sab bohot ache hai, aur har mushkil main saath rehte hai,maine kaha than a mere bohot bada family hai" Asad "actually I liked your family a lot "and thought "kash main tumse keh pata ki main tumhe bhi pasand karta hoon, par yeh sahi waqt nahi hai" Zoya said "tho aap sojaye hum kal milenge, phir main apko sara Bhopal ki sair karavaungi Shabba Khair". Asad also wished her good night.

Scene 18: In their garden


After the Bhopal tour Asad was finding Zoya unsually silent. So he broke the silence asking "zoya is anything wrong" Zoya "nothing is wrong actually the whole timing is wrong now" Asad "timing" Zoya said "Hmm long story suniye jab main choti thi, mere ghar pe ek ladka ata tha, uske gol gol baal the jo kabhi teek se nahi rakhta tha, aur vo hamesha muje chida tha, aur apni Salman khan ki bakwas kahaniyaan batata tha." Asad "tho" Zoya "vo araha hai" Asad "par kissliye" Zoya "mujse nikah karne ke liye" Asad just shocked to hear it as he never wanted to hear that from her he slowly asked "do you like him I mean love him?" zoya "no I don't and that's the big problem" Asad "Whats his name?" Zoya "actually I don't know his name too either but I used to call him Rabert becoz of his villanoius activites" Asad "what Rabert? What kind of name is it?" Zoya "its one of a kind" Asad "lekin apke ghar wale apke liye bura thodi sochenge" Zoya unknowlingly said "apki ammi aur abbu ne bhi apka bura nahi socha tha jab apka nikah Tanveer ke saath tay kiya tha" Asad was at a loss of words and seeing that Zoya quickly said "vo anjane main mooh se nikal gaya, I m really sorry Asad" Asad said "don't be sorry, what you are saying is truth only, Zoya "mere case apke jaise nahi hai, ab main kya batao, bachpan ki nok jhok ko gharwalon ne ek rishta ke naam dena ka faisla kiya hai, ab main unhe kaise samjaoon ki hum actually main lad rahe the, unhone isse pyar samaj liya hai, bachpan main hum serious nahi the, aur jawani main ghar wale serious hogaye, its complicated you know" Asad "tho ab kya plan hai, kya karengi aap mein kuch options doon" Zoya "shoot" Asad "option 1 Tell Rabert that you don't want to marry him" Zoya "I don't want to see him at all, bad option, next" Asad "Usse yahan se bhaga do" Zoya "option tho achha hai lekin, kaam nahi karega, next" Asad "apni choti behen ki nikah use kardo" Zoya " Kaide se mera nikah pehle hoga aur phir Humera manegi tab na, next" Asad "bhaag jao kuch dino ke liye" Zoya "excellent option, vohi tho soch rahi hoon," Asad was himself surprised at giving this option to her. Quickly corrected himself saying "vo last option mazaak tha, please don't try that" Zoya "pata hai, mazaak main hi sahi, lekin that's the best solution you have given." Asad was now perplexed about what a way he suggested to her, he was becoming like her with every going day.

Scene 19 Gaffurs room

Zoya walked into Gaffurs room . "Abbu main apse kuch kehna chahti hoon." Gaffur "kaho beta" zoya "main yeh nikah nahi karna chahti, please abbu aap baat ko samjiye, aur vo bhi uss Rabert se" Gaffur "zoya tameez se baat karo uska Ayan hai" zoya whatever abbu please vo sirf mera bachpan ka bichda hua ek dost hai, I cant see him as my husband and now most important I don't want to get married now." Gaffur "Zoya main samaj sakta ki tumhe kaisa mehsooz horaha hai, par jaise tum use milogi sab teek hojayega, aur tum yeh nikah kar rahi ho, vo log bohot takleef se guzar rahe hai, aur yahan Bhopal main bohot saal ke baad vapis aye hai, main unke parivar ko ache se jaanta hoon, chahta tho main yeh tha ki unke bade bte ke saath tumhara nikah tay karoon, par unka bada beta kuch din pehle ghar chodkar chala gaya hai, aura ab tak uska koi pata nahi chala, aur Ayan ke abbu ka hali main inteqaal hogaya, ab ayan ki ammi chahte hi ki vo settle hojaye, maine unse dargah main mila tha, tho maine hi tumhara naam suggest kiya, ab yeh meri izzaat ka sawal hai, tumhe yeh nikah karna padega, main vada de chukka hoon." Zoya was not all convinced and her father was not giving in also. She just walked out

Scene 20 A scene with Zoya and Humera

Zoya was telling humera about Ayan and show she dislikes him for his behavior towards her. Humera asked Zoya baji "aur koi baat nahi hai, nikah na karne ka," Zoya "humi tum janti ho ki, main nikah tab karungi jab muje mohabbat hojaye, aur muje yakeen hojaye ki mere hone wala shouhar sird mujse pyar karta hai meri abbu ke doulat se nahi" Humera "Lekin baaji , jab damad banega, tho apka haq uska haq hua na" Zoya "tho kyun na tum use nikah karlo, nikha bhi hojayegi, abbu ki izzat bhi reh jayegi aur mere sar se yeh bala tal jayegi, tumhe pata hai vo bhi tumhare jaisa Salman Khan ka fan hai, tum uss waqt paida nahi huyi thi jab vo yahan ata tha. Serriously tum dono ki Jodi khoob jamegi Trust me" Humera "main main tho use abhi mili bhi nahi hoon, main kaise nikah karoon, Zoya "ek baar milogi tho sab teek hojayega, apni badi behen ke liye itna nahin karogi, tumhare liye main US se badiya se badiya tohfe layi th na, please meri maddat kar de, iss baar" Zoya pouted. Humera "tho baji aap kya karne wali hai, kahin apko pya vyar tho nahi hua" Zoya "shut up humi, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai, bas main nikah nahi karna chahti." Humera "lekin baji muje tho aisa nahi lagta" Zoya "humera ki bachi, rukh abhi batati hoon" and she ran with a pillow behind her.

Song - preparations for the wedding (imagine Zoya dancing with all girls and Asad watching her and singing the song)

http://sound6.mp3pk.com/indian/jab_we_met/jabwemet04(www.songs.pk).mp3





Scene 21: Asad and Zoya in the sit out


Asad "apne muje yahan kyun bulaya, aur vo bhi itni raat ko, koi dekh lega tho kya hoga, bakheda khada hojayega" Zoya "relax Asad, main na aaj raat bhaag ne wali hoon, yahan se, aur yeh batane ayi thi, aur aap bhi tayyer hojayiye mere saath ane ke liye" Asad stunned "kya aap ghar se bhaag rahi hai, apne mazaak ko bhi seriously le liye" Zoya "aur koi raasta nahi hai, muje bhagna padega, abbu ne ultimatum de diya ki muje nikah karna hoga, aur aap jante hai, ki main abhi nikah nahi karna chahti, please meri maddat kijiye na please" She showed her puppy face. Asad "apka dimag kharab hai, bilkul kharab hai, aur issme aap muje shamil karna kyun chahti hai?" Zoya "viase aap yahan meri vajah se ruke hai, agar main hi nahi rahoongi tho phir aap yahan rehke kya karenge? Aiye baat samaj main" Asad "yeh baat tho teek hai, jab aap nahi rahengi, tho main yahan rahke kya karunga, Zoya "exactly vohi tho bhagne wali main hoon aap thodi bhagne wale ho, aptho yahan se seedha apne ghar jayenge, apke family ke paas ,they need you ,kitne din hogaya apko ghar chodke." Asad "you are right, you are going to elope but not with me, so I better accompany you and then we will part our ways, aap apne raaste main apne raaste" Zoya "Allah miyaan today nothing is wrong with Mr. Akdu, pate ke bat kahi hai apne" Chaliye, tho milte hai, ek ghante ke baad yahi." This scene was witnessed by Zeenat but did not hear anything what they said as they talked whisperingly only. "Yeh adhi raat ko Asad ke saath kya kar rahi hai, dal mein kuch kala hai, muje Zoya pe nazar rakhni padegi" Zeenat kept her hand under chin

Scene 22 : Zoya and Asad elope



Zoya ready "Asad ab chale" Asad "ji chaliye" Zoya stealthily comes to the front door. She had wore a hood on her head and a jeans and a top and quietly opened the door. But unfortunately Zeenat was witnessing everything and the moment she understood that zoya is eloping she started to scream ."Zoya bhag gayi, zoya bhag gayi." And this startled Asad and Zoya and they knew that they were caught red handed. Asad immediately took Zoyas hands and dragged her and said "udhar nahi idhar Zoya "rukiye, main vapis nahi jaoongi" Asad forcefully dragged her saying "aap pehle hi bohot baat ko bigad chuki hai, ab aap vohi karenge jo main kehta hoon, main apke saath bhagne ke liye tayyar hokar ek galati kar chukka hoon ab aur nahi agar hum pakde gaye tho, issliye muje apni izzat bachane ke liye apka saath dena hi hoga" and ran to the terrace and they both sat there. "Zoya "apke paas aur koi option bhi nahi hai" . Zoya "aap muje yahan kyun laye hai" Asad "aap bewakoof hai, abhi hum bhagenge tho pakade jayenge, lekin yahan hum sari raat guzar kar, jab ghar wale hum doondkar thak jayenge tab hum kal subah yahan se aram se nikal jayenge, voh sari sheher main hume doonde ge par ghar main nahi, samji." zoya "oh really Asad aap tho genius hai and she hugged him in excitement but Asad was feeling for her by this time and hence his hands automatically came around her and unknowingly he had fallen for her but he feared as Zoya hasn't told anything about what she feels for him. Asad asked "lekin aap jayengi kahan?" zoya broke the hug and replied "Imran , Imran Qureshi, mera saath New York University main tha, aur yahan se kuch door khud ka hotel chalata hai, Panchmani main. I will stay in his hotel for sometime and then return back when everything is sorted out." Asad felt a pang when he heard Imrans name from Zoyas mouth. Asad said "apko yeh sab mazaak lag raha hai,kyun khel rahi hai aap apni zindagi ke saath kabhi tho serious baniye pls," Zoya "kyunki zindagi is my favoutite game and I love to play with it ,aap zindagi main bohot serious thena, kya mila apko, kuch hasil hua?" Asad looked at Zoya intently and thought "pehli baar meine dil ki suni aur muje haar hi mila" Asad "Imran apka dost hai,?" Zoya "yah he is good friend par mere peeche deewana bhi hai, kitni baar muje propose bhi kar chukka hai, lekin maine abhi tak haan nahi kaha, I want to test him first, kya vo mera layak hai, if everything goes alright then, I may, you never know , when you fall in love" Asad saw his dreams shattering again as he never told his feelings for her but for Zoya he was happy. By this time everybody has started searching for Zoya and Asad and they heard screaming and lamenting noises of the women. Gaffur and Anwar took a jeep and started to search for them in the city. They came back and said they searched all bus stations, railway stations but they were not anywhere to be found. Razia "hayee meri bachi, abi abhi toh ayi thi vilayat se, teek se use dekha bhi nahi ki aur vo bhaag gayi phirse, maine pehle hi aapse kaha tha Siddique saab, ki Zoya ko nikah ke liye majboor mat kijiye, lekin aapne meri baat nahi sune, dekh liye anjaam, vo bhi ussi ladke ke saath bhaag gayi jo hamari ghar pe mehmaan banke ruka tha, ab yeh baat bahar fayel jayenge tho sabko kya mooh dekhayenge jee" Gaffur "Chup karo Razia, main kuch karta hoon." On hearing this Asad said "apko pata hai, yeh pura plan apka tha, bhagne ka, aap nikah nahi karna chahti hai, aap ka problem hai lekin main bechara beech main phas gaya, aapki baton main agaya, bhaag aaap rahi hai, mein apke saath bhaag raha hoon, sab yahi soch rahe hai ki maine apko bhagaya hai, aur muje pagalon ki tarah doond bhi rahe hai, lekin phir bhi ladki muje nahi milegi, isn't it weird," Zoya "aap bade selfish ho, nahi" Asad thinks "kash main itna selfish hota Zoya, tho aaj tum Imran ke paas nahi mera paas ati." They wait for the morning sun to rise.


Song :Asad and Zoya going to Panchmani, Asad driving a hired car, Zoya dancing and singing.





http://sound6.mp3pk.com/indian/jab_we_met/jabwemet03(www.songs.pk).mp3

Scene 23: Asad drops Zoya at Imrans hotel Panchmani.



Zoya says he should also meet Imran and she will introduce him to Imran but Asad says "Bye Zoya," Zoya "kya, aap nahi ayenge mere dost se milne" Asad "nahi, bohot din hogaya ghar chodke aur business bhi , ab muje vapas jana hoga, sab kuch sambhalna hoga, main chalta hoon Zoya, aap apna khayal rakhiye" Zoya "agar aap bhi ate tho acha lagta muje" Asad "its okay" Zoya "yeh mera number rakh lijiye kabhi koi problem ho tho muje contact kar satke hai, main chutki bajake, solve kar dungi" and she cliked her two fingers and showed a dimpled smile too. Asad smiled looking at her. "bye, aap jahan rahiye khush rahiye, aur hamesha muskurayiye. Be like this always Zoya kyunki zoya ka matlab hai zindagi, aur zindagi ka matlab hai khushi, aur khushi ka matlab ho tu" Zoya stares at him and he keeps his foot backwards and took 3-4 steps and then turned and walked away. Zoya stood there with tears in her eyes. Asad "shayad muje aapse mohabbat hogayi hai, lekin ekrar se daar lagta hai, kyunki aap mohabbat main yakeen nahi karte, phir bhi aap bohot ache hai, aur bohot cute bhi, apni meri bohot maddat ki hai, agar mera dil sacha hai, tho hum zaroor dubara milenge, uff main bhi kya gadhi hoon, main apna number tho dde diya par apka nahi liye. She whacked her head with her hands. "thank you for everything Asad"

Scene 24: Asad addressing a press conference


Asad came inside a big hall and everybody was seated and was staring at the walking Asad he came and Prasad asked him to take the seat on dias but instead he directly went to the mike. "I am sorry, I know I on the spur of the moment left everything and went away for some peace of mind. But now I am back and that too with my new project Zoya Homes. This is a small budget home that can be afforded by many middle class people who cannot afford luxury apartments. I will give the details of this later. But for now I know that market main mere bare main tarah tarah ki sawal ut rahe hai, kya Asad Ahmed Khan Rashid Ahmed Khan ke business ko nayi oochanyion me lekar jayega, kya Asad apne abbu ke adhure commitments pura karega, he was ditched by his childhood friend with whom the marriage was fixed in order to save the financial crisis that Dilshad Constructions was facing and many other things. So I want to clear the air now. Yes I was depressed so much that I needed some time to get over it and hence I took a long holiday but I guess now holidays are over and I should be back to work. I know there are many claims, outstanding debts, bank loans outstanding, unfinished projects, unkept promises and nothing worse can happen and so from now everything is going to be alright. Kyunki problems ki solutions use face karke hi milti hai, we cant run away from it and if we really believe in something it will happen. I will take this company to new heights where even my Abbu couldn't do it. I know you all loved my Abbu so much and hence had been with him in his diffifult times and hence I request you all to give me sometime to make good all the defaults till now. I expect the same co operation and undertansing from you all which you all gave to my father." So I m back with Zoya homes for those who love life and like to cherish sweet memories of it. Any more questions." Everybody clapped.

Scene 25 :Tanveer with Asad in a meeting

Prasad says that Tanveer wants to break the deal that was between her father and his father. Asad says "I want to talk to her". Tanveer meets Asad . "Asad I know ki maine bohot galat kiya, par I didn't have any other option too," she introduces her husband to him. Asad says "please to meet you and welcome to this company" Tanveer wonders why Asad is so calm after all the events happnened so she asks "Asad aaap gussa nahi ho," Asad said "main gussa tha, lekin ab nahi, kyunki maine zindagi ko jeena seekh liya hai and I don't have anything against you. But actually I would like to say that what you did was the correct thing to do, instead of being in a forced marriage and a loveless relation its better that you got your love and hence I don't feel it as a sin done by you. And regarding my Abbu, sabko ek na ek din jana padta hai, I guess you became a reason for that but still wont blame you, because it would have been more than death like situation when he sees his son in a loveless marriage with you because of his decision. So I guess you are not going to break this deal and I guess we both were friends and still can be friends. Tanveer surprised "Asad I am seeing a different side of you, kya hua, yeh achanak se itna badlav kahan se?" Asad replied "I have learnt something now that you if you have to live, you have love life and live in the moment forgetting the bad memories and cherishing only the good ones.My advice to you also. And Congratulations on your marriage" and he gave her a handshake too. And he walked out of the meeting.

Song (Asad playing guitar, dreaming about Zoya and him being together)

http://sound6.mp3pk.com/indian/jab_we_met/jabwemet02(www.songs.pk).mp3







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Edited by anura7281 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: treasure11

Loving the concept 😳
Can u PM me this oneee
I'll read whn I find timee 😳


pls buddy me for pms its difficult to select and send pms
Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awe that was pretty awesome.
A new Asad, facing his problems. I'm glad he forgave tanveer.
Wonder what allZoyas family must be thinking.

Great update 😆
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wow di..jab we met ...my fav movie...zoya... 😆 😆 she is chatter-box..blabber queen jst like geet...asad as usual sooo sweet.. 😳 lvd it thoroughly... continue soon di 😃
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Thank you so much
Continue reading
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Wow Anu its superb⭐️
I just wish to see it in vishual with my kabhi.
I saw this movie before and i like it very much
AND I LIKE THE CHANGES U DONE IN THIS STORY.
WELL DONE DEAR👏
Pls continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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amazing :)
plzz update soon :)

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