(KaBhi)AsYa Version of JAB WE MET Completed - Page 2

Ooh I can't wait to read this. Seem very interesting. 😳

Marriage preparations are going on and in the background qawwali is going on. A handsome young man with perfect features was seated in the midst of all these who was just sitting there with a straight face showing no interest at all in the marriage ceremonies going on. A charming lady comes and asks Asad, tum khush ho" Asad said "main yeh nikah sirf apke liye kar raha hoon ammi, varna main nikah ke liye tayyar nahi tha""Lady "Asad, that's because you are nervous, aur kuch bhi, aur yeh tho tumhari bahpan ki dost Tanveer haina, koi ajnabi thodi hai" Asad "ammi maine kabhi tanveer ko iss nazariye se nahi dekha hai, she was just a good friend of mine, par ab yeh nikah achanak se" Lady "Asad Tannu bohot achi ladki hai aur vo tumhe khush rakhegi, tumhari pasand na pasand sab kuch janti hai, issliye humne haan kaha" Asad "Teek hai ammi agar pane chuna hai tho vo teek hi hogi." They were discussing these things somebody came and shouted "yeh nikah nahi hoga, kyunki dulhan bhaag gayi hai, vo kissi aur ke bache ki maa bane wali hai, yeh dekhiye chitti" and he gave that letter to Asad. Asad reading that letter crashed on the chair, lady took the letter in her hands and the letter flew in the wind from her hands and lay on the floor.At that time Rashid who had gone outside to attend a business call came to the stage shouting "Dilshad Kya hai khat main? After reading the letter Rashid has a heart attack. Asad shouted "abbu" and Dilshad "Rashid"

Scene 2: At Delhi , IGI Airport.

A young girl looking in her early 20s came out of the airport wheeling her luggage and called Taxi "Allah miyaan whats wrong with this country, yahan tho ladkiyon ko aise goorte hai, jaise pehle kabhi dekha hi nahi, stupid people" Taxi came "Bhaisaab muje Dilli railway station jana hai, yeh rahi pre paid ticket" She sat inside and he drove away. Inside the cab "Driver kab tak pohunche ge, station,? Driver "ji jald hi, vo aaj traffic jam bohot hai varna it na time nahi lagta", Girl Ji apko pata hai maine zindagi kabhi plane miss nahi kiya, tho train tho bilkul bhi miss nahi karungi, vaise bhi India ke trains late hi hote hai" Driver was awestruck at her own conclusion. "Stoooppp" Girl Shouted . Driver "ab kya hua meri maa" Girl "Pizzza, thoda teheriye, main pizza leke abhi ati hoon" Driver waited for 20 mins. And finally girl came back with pizza and sat in the cab. "Ab chaliye, bohot der hogayi, pizza serve karne main 20 mins, aaj ka din hi mila sabko pizza khane ka, order main hi time lag gaya," Driver was open mouthed listening to her, Girl "Kya, aisa kya mooh kholke rakka hai, yeh pizza maine apne liye liya hai, ab app gadi chalayenge, lagta hain aaj meri train choote gi, Jaldi chalayena, aur samne dekhiye udhar udhar" She pointed out to the road. Driver took the steering and rode "Ajeeb ladki hai, khud late karti phir muje sunati hai"

Scene 3: Sometime back in the hospital

Doctors said that Rashid had a major attack and he is not going to survive. By this time Asads brother Ayan had also come who had gone to Mumbai for some meeting. Asad was not able to believe that Rashid is dying and all because of his childhood friend Tanveer on whom his family trusted blindly and she gave her humiliation and embarassement in return. Dilshad, Ayan and Asad was waiting outside the ICCU. Finally doctor came and said everything is over. Rashid is no more. Asad world crashed altogether. He silently got up and looked at his father's dead body being taken outside in a stretched. Media had been always flies when it was regarding Khans and news had already leaked out that Rashid had an attack. So media people were waiting outside to get the latest information. As soon as the family came out they were surrounded by media persons asking for Rashids information. With a heavy heart, Asad cleared that Rashid is no more. Then next questions were shooted about what about the business empire, etc so on and so forth and all questions relating to the new uncompleted projects started by Rashid. Asad was tired answering the medias endless questions and Ayan came into take him away. They buried Rashid at Delhi itself and thought to shift to Bhopal to their ansectoral house where Badi bi was residing. "Asad kahan hai? Dilshad asked then only verybody turned to look back and Asad was not there.

Scene 4: On the Road

Asad was getting calls from Rashids Office continuously he was didn't pick any of them as he was distraught beyond the limits. First Tanveer broke an entire family's trust and then now his father's sudden death and his legal obligations also. Asad needed a release from all these. He just went were his feet took him. Her phone was continuously ringing which made him broke the phone in despair. He walked through the lone streets and threw his tie somewhere. He loosened his buttons and took out the coat and gave it some beggar on the road. He was now bare handed and walking aimless, he heard train siren nearby soon he found himself standing in front of a train.

Scene 5: Railway Station

He got into the coach which was standing in front of him. Soon train started to leave. He was still standing on the door. And train started to move. He was staring outside and then he saw suddenly a girl wearing a white top and a dark blue jeans, she was running along with the train. She called "Hello, Mr, ...Aap, yeh pakdiye," she gave her pizza box and he unknowingly took it from her, then she gave her water bottle, then she gave her I pad, then shoved her shoulder bag and finally her big trolley bag. Asad was taking one by one things from her and was still staring at her beautiful eyes, she was running along with the train and tried to get in by all herself. Seeing her struggling Asad extended his hand and she took it seeing that the platform was coming to an end. And within no time Asad pulled her up and they were in an eyelock for some time. The girl told "Ab main andhar agayi hoon, ab tho muje chodiye, vaise maddat karne ke liye shukriya" Asad quickly jerked away and mumbled a sorry and the looks outside again. Girl saw her pizza box down on the floor and the collected all her belongings and proceeded towards her seat she was searching her seat and that's when Asad came back and sat on his seat. Girl rotatated her head and found Asad sitting there. She arched her eyebrows and saw the seat number. "Excuse me," You Mr... whatever, you are sitting on my seat, this is my seat, see this my ticket" Asad was not paying attention at all. The girl asked "Hello, kya app gunge ho, behre ho yah phir angrezi samaj main nahi ati, dikhne main to teek taak lagte ho, chup kyun ho kuch tho boliye please, main kitne der yahan khadi hoon apse baat kar rahi hoon, aap yah tho zaroorat se zyaada shy hai yah phir bohot batameez, oye Mr. Akdu, Main apse baat kar rahi hoon" and she waved her hand in front of him and he snapped. He shot up to look at her and just stared Girl said "this is my seat" showing the ticket. Asad simply got up without saying anything and shifted to some other vacant seat. After sometime conductor came. He asked "apka ticket?" and girl showed him hers. Then he asked Asad "ticket please" Asad raised his head at him which made him repeat the question. By this time the passenger beside Asad gave his tickets and he was checking them. Girl asked "vo ticket maang raha hai, dete kyun nahi aap?" Asad "mere paas tickets nahi hai" Girl stunned "kya ticket nahi hai" By the time conductor again asked "aapka ticket" Girl replied jee yeh ek problem main phas gaye hain, aur inke paas ticket katvane ka time nahi tha , yeh train khali jaa rahi hai, tho inka ticket abhi kat dijiye please". Conductor to Asad "kahan ka ticket katna hai?" Asad "yeh train kahan jaa rahi hai?" conducted jaw dropped and turned to girl Girl said "maine pehle kahan tha kuch bohot bada hadsa hua hai, tho aap akhri stop, Bhopal,Bhopal tak katiye" Conductor made the ticket and went away. Girls said "see, kaise main eek jhoot bolke ttr ko convince kiya, and you know I like to help everybody and you know something mere saare dost, mere paas apni problems lekar ate hai, aur main unki help karti hoon, kya karu main hoon hi aisi" Asad sat silently, staring at the chatter box in front of him. She continued "vo Kya hai na, main New York se aye hoon, paanch saal computer engineering padkar vapis apne shaher Bhopal jaa rahi hoon, main na apko dekh kar hi samaj gayi thi apko help ki zaroorat hai." Asad was still talking but girl continued "I love pizzas but you know I didn't get coke anywhere here. Weird country no coke here, But you know what I don't mind at all" Asad still dumb. Girl again "kya hua boss, kya baat hai, heartbreak, business loss, girl friend ditched, ya phir divorce baat kya hai," Asad was having a straight face still and was sitting keeping his both hands entwined together between his legs. Girl "okay tho job hi ho main apke mood teek karne ke liye, ek badiya shayari kehthi hoon, suniye, are irshad tho boliye" Girl looked at Asad intently hoping to hear something from him. "Aap chup chap kyun hai, kuch kahiye please, kya problem hai" Asad just spat out "aap, aap hai meri problem, apko samaj nahi ata ki main apse baat karna nahi chahta, phir bole jaa rahi hai, bole jaa rahi hain, muje koi interest nahi hai apki foreign return ki kahani sunne main, aur haan apko yeh mulk itni hi bura laga, tho chod kar vapis apne New York kyun nahi hai, yahan thoda kachra saaf hojayega" Girl looked at him wide eyed and said "okay, I got it you are very worried now and I was just telling you to share your problem with me so that I could help you with it, but you said Kachra..." Asad realized that he had over spewed in his anger and frustration. He said "sorry" vo main I didn't mean it actually, aise hi mooh se nikal gaya," Girl again went to her happy mood "Vo koi baat nahi hain, main aise hi hoon, you know main na logo ko na apni bakwas baton se itni bore karti hoon ki vo meri baton se irritate hote hai , jaise aap aur phir aap bhi anjane main bakwas karne lage, Its okay, I didn't feel offended at all." Girl said "I m going to sleep but before that my pizza" she was ranting on and on and Asad was sitting before her staring at her blankly. She climbed up and settled herself on the upper berth and then mouthed a Good night down below to Asad.

Scene 6: In the train

Girl opened her eyes in between and saw that Asad was not there. She also noticed that train has stopped at Mathura station. She had changed her top to a orange one. She went upto the door and saw Asad standing on the platform. Then she saw suddenly the train was moving. She shouted "Oh Hello, Allah Miyaan whats wrong with you Mr. Akdu, train jaa rahi hai, aap vahan khade khade kya dekh rahe hai, jaldi aye na" Asad was not at all hearing what she was saying. He was standing there staring into vacuum. Seeing Asad not listening girl alighted from the train and ran towards Asad. Asad was going to go out he saw her again "Allah miyaan whats wrong with you, train is going, chaliye, yahan kya khade hai?" Asad was blank and see the train again moving fast, she said "bhaad main jayiye, main jaa rahi hoon, bye" She ran towards the train but couldn't catch up with it as she ran into some chai wala and the chaiwala and his dabba with heself everything on the floor.The chai wala was blaming her again and again for his loss. Girl was running are koi roko train roko, meri train, roko please koi roko" she ran upto the end of the platform but in vain. She saw the train speeding fast in front of her. She caught her hair in her both hands and said "Allah miyaan whats wrong with me ?I missed my train, ab Bhopal kaise pohunchi gi, yeh sab uss akdu ke vajah se hua hai," She saw Asad standing there , she went upto him "You Mr. ..Akdu kahin ke, apki vajah se main train miss kardi , zindagi main pehli baar", Zoya glared at him. Asad was stunned to see a fuming Zoya but he preferred to walk out. "Jaa kaha rahe hai aap, main yahan apki maddat kar rahi thi , aur aap muje attitude dikha rahe hai, apke vajah se maine train miss kiya hai, ab apko muje Bhopal tak chodna padega, vo bhi mere ghar tak, samje, Zoya Siddique naam hai mera, aur main Bhopal ki bigadi hui ladki hoon. Got it" Zoya said this all in one breath and stopped to inhale and looked at Asad.

Scene 7: Outside the railway station

In no time Asad ran fast outside and Zoya too ran behind him calling "Rukiye kahan jaa rahe aap, muje aise chodkar, rukiye main apko nahi chodungi, jab tak bhagna hai bhagiye, main apke peeche bhagoongi" Saying this she reached outside the railway station and saw Asad standing near a car. He said "chaliye jaldi kijiye, hume Agra pohunch na hai train se pehle aur 45 minutes yeh train Agra station main hogi." Zoya ran and sat in the back seat and positioned herself in the middle between Asad and the driver .She was rolling her eyes at the driver when he started to touch and feel at the idols kept above the dashboard. Zoya said irritatingly "ab chalo Allah ne sab sun liye hai" And the driver started his car slowly and it set into motion. Zoya was watching her watch again and again and at the driver. She nudged "dekhiye Mr. Akdu, yeh gadi aise chalayega tho hum kabhi Agra nahi pohunche ge, kya baba adam ke zamane ka khatara gadi hai, aap koi aur gadi nahi mili" Asad rubbed his temple with his fingers in desperation listening to Zoyas banter and shouted "Stop". Driver "Ab kya hua" Asad got off by opening his door and was taking a round through the front side, Zoya said "aapko bhi abhi hi lagi hai, zaroori hai kya, kuch der tak pakad ke rakhiye, Agra pohunch kar kar lijiye, please she showed her puppy face to him and he shook his head and said "incredibly foolish". He opened the driver's door asked him to shift and took control of the steer ring himself. And the car sped. Zoyas eyes widened seeing the speed meter it was shunting between 110 and 100 only. Zoya was now really thrilled to have a drive like this. "Wow Akdu apto mast gadi chalate hai" but the driver was going on ranting "mere yeh pehle taxi hai, iska loan abhi tak chutka nahi kiya, dheere chaliye, main marna nahi chahta" Zoya said "chup raho aur unhe gadi chalane do" and she rolled her eyes at him and glared. The added "aur agar kuch hogaya tho, sari damages yeh pay karenge, kyun ab yeh inki zimmedari hai muje ghar tak chodna, tho uss main job hi kharcha pani ayega sab yeh denge so don't worry" Asad looked at the rear view mirror at her and shook his head indicating Zoya nonsense. Soon Agra station reached and Asad and Zoya was standing on the platform with the train too in front of them. Asad said "ab jayiye, apka train wait kar raha hai" Zoya said "thank you" by this time driver came running mere paise, Asad took his wallet out and paid him Zoya asked him too for some bugs she said "are maine wahan coke dekha, dilli main tho nahi mila, yahan se le loongi, paise dijiye" and she literally took some money from him surprising him and he gave her.

Scene 8 : At a railway stall

Zoya asks for a coke and the shop owner charges Rs. 35 she pays and sees the price on the bottle as Rs.30 when she lifts it to drink. "yeh kya hai, aapne mujse paanch rupaiye zyaada kyun liya ispe toh tees likha hai" Shop keeper "dekhiye madam, yahan pe issi rate main bhikta hai", apko lena hai to lejiye varna vapis kijiye" Zoya "oh really, main aap par case kar sakti, logo loot ne ke liye, main facebook main dalungi, tweet karungi, I will put my blog, apko itna bad naam karungi ki aap phir duakaam chalane ke bare mein bilkul nahi sochenge, aap muje jaanti nahi hai, main, main... ek vakil hoon. Ap case kar doongi, chup chap se mere paanch rupaiye dijiye abhi issi waqt." Zoya was getting on his nerves and he thought its better to avoid this girl than arguing with her. So he gave her Rs. 5 and she was now drinking coke relishing it and in the back ground train was going. She then realized that she had come to catch the train and now again missing it. She ran again with the train shouting "roko train roko" but train went past and she again dumped her head in her hands "phir se choot gayi, ab kya, vo akdu bhi nahi hai" she went out to see the driver in whose car they came here, but on seeing her call "oh bhaisaab zara suniye" he pressed his accelerator and sped away.

Scene 9: Station masters room

Station master was an old man with thick glasses and as soon as Zoya entered he looked up hearing her anklets and with his index finger slightly raised his glases from his nose. "Ab tho yeh train Lalitpur main hi rukegi, aap apna samaan vahan se lelijiye, vaise aap raat ko train main se utri kyun, aapko pata nahi ek akeli ladki khuli tijori ki tarah hoti hia, tumhe pata hai tumhare saath kya kya hosaktha hai?" Zoya butted in "aap yeh gyan chargeable hai yah free hai?" Station master "free hai" Zoya "good, kyun ki mere paas paise nahi hai issliye pooch rahi thi, dekho budde khusat abhi Lalitpur ko phone lagao aur mera samaan utarvane ke liye kaho baki mein dekh loongi' Zoyas eyes shoot him that she is going to eat him up. There was a bunch of people waiting outside for Zoya to come out. As Zoya walked out they all retreated but nevertheless followed her outside the station. Zoya saw them coming behind her and she was searching for help but she was in vain. Frustrated she went and stood outside and stood among a group who were in weird dresses and accessories. Soon a man came in a bike and asked Zoya to come with him for a night. Then only zoya got the point that she was standing with whom. She looked to her right and then to the left then said main vo nahi hoon jo aap samaj rahe hai" she fakely smiled with nervousness. Man "Are kya aaj ki raat ke lilye kissi aur ke saant plan hai, main double paise doonga" Not able to get out of the situation she started to walk briskly with the bikewala and others following her , she saw Asads shadow somewhere far and ran and stood in front of him and without taking any time hugged him tighly.

Scene 10 : Fight

Pls scroll down for more and please dont comment until I finish the first part.

i would love to read it with ASYA :)

i waited for AsYa Jab We Met since forever now :P

Ooh update. Great start, lol Zoya can talk 😆

sounds cool...i hadn't watched the movie...good...I'll directly read asya version...
update the first part soon

first part update ho gaya...
zoya shut up...poor asad!!!
it was hilarious anu Di...she is a nonstop chatter-box...
she missed her train twice...uff!!
fight...my favorite one...
continue soon

Originally posted by: Linsie

pm me... i want to follow

Originally posted by: B3ll3...

Ooh update. Great start, lol Zoya can talk 😆

I was like when will see shut up,

Poor asad

Tanveer😡 But what else can be expected go her 🤢