ASYA FF : jo bheji thi duaa... note at page 21(26-10-2015) - Page 2

Originally posted by: pyaarasateddy

thank u i will try my best but u have to cope up yes zoya will be astrong woman but for first few chapters it will be painful

i dont mind dear. Make sure that asad get a slap from zoya. And pls dont make zoya marry any other man or dont make an entry of another man in zoya's life. I want her as a single mother. Update soon

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Concept is nice.

How can Asad do dis to Zoya after so much? He is a jerk who even traded her. Plz, make Zoya slap him. Don't just make her cry cuz in many stories Asad is shown as a jerk n Zoya as a weak. Plz don't make Zoya forgive him easily like always cuz its shown in many stories. Plz make Zoya not letn Asad meet their kids cuz he left her n thrm by betraying them for his own selfish reason. How can Asad do dis wid Zoya or anyone-playing wid her emotions, using her for sex n then throwing her like a dirt? Don't make make Zoya cry n forgive him in a second like she always do cuz Asad has turned out to be a asshole.

totally agree with u di. I m fed up with reading those stories where the writer shows asad as jerk who always hurt zoya and zoya as a weak, bechari woman. I want zoya as a cold hearted who destroyed asad's business empire and make him bank rupt for revenge and betraying her

Originally posted by: pyaarasateddy

thanku but for that u will have to wait coz as i told first few chapters will be sad . by the way tell me how do all of u think about niha(nikhat and haider as couple

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

totally agree with u di. I m fed up with reading those stories where the writer shows asad as jerk who always hurt zoya and zoya as a weak, bechari woman. I want zoya as a cold hearted who destroyed asad's business empire and make him bank rupt for revenge and betraying her

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Yaa, bankrupt idea is nice cuz insects like him only deserves to be on d streets. Dis vl be a unique concept. If Asad can be wicked then y can't Zoya?

exactly. If asad alwas hurt and take zoya grunted then why not zoya. I hope the writer take this suggestion and make story more interesting.

CHAPTER ONE

it was a beautiful morning in bhopal

morning 8 am
SM

zoya woke up early in the morning and smiled to herself as it was her sons 5th birthday. She then caressed her tummy and said

good morning princess kaisi hai aap aapko pata hai aaj apke bhaijaan ka birthday hai aur aaj wo paanch saal ke ho jayenge
then she felt some movement in her tummy and understood that the baby was also eager, so she got ready and tiptoed to her sons room she went near and said: GOOD MORNING ARMAAN AND A VERY VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

slowly the birthday boy opened his eyes and kissed his mom's cheek and said: GOOD MORNING AMMI AND THANK U.

zoya told him to get ready and come down because all were waiting for him
after some time he comes down and every one wishes him.

precap: ASAD GIFTS ARMAAN A NEW REMOTE CONTROL CAR
ASAD: iss baar birthboy ke saath unki ammi ko bhi gift milega
and he hands over the gift to zoya.
ZOYA OPENS IT AND IS SHOCKED TO SEE IT
for pms buddy me.
plz hit likes and comments.. 😃

Nice part. So asad going to give zoya divorce paper in next part. Waiting for next part. Update soon. And pls try to give long update pls.

Nice update.

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Nice update.

Asad is such a bas***d

He is playing wid Zoya's feelings for 6 years just cuz she is Gaffur's daughter

Hope Zoya slaps him n Haider kills him

Plz make Haider do d same wid Nikhat then Asad vl understand

totally agree with u di. Hope haider also done same with asad's pyari sister nikhat and both ZoHa goes back to NY and make their own empire to take revenge from asad