A Little Beat - A Poetic Drabble From Across The Seas - Page 4

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

You tell her Zanu

She would not budge so I posted it for her took three days of trying to convince her but gave up lol

She does write amazingly

See Einstein you don't listen to me then listen to Zanu

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Thank you Gowtu😊

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Saima & Farz,

This drabble is just too beautiful & heart touching. You both have done a marvelous job, 👏. I mean it.

I haven't been on forums for days now but this one piece forced me to come up & appreciate it, because its worth so much praise & love.

"He was never mine, I was never his

Then how did we get to this?

I want him not, I want him still

Is it now time I let off my will

He knows me not, he knows me still

Has he now come to make his kill

My beating heart

Fast-breaking

It hurts so much

Knowing its truth

He marked me his

But knows not he this"

These are fav lines, u kno da types where you feel every word is written just for you. .

Okay now coming to Farz. You should be writing more so much more Dear. You're so v talented & Absolutely Fantabulous. So do post your works from now on, okay.

Lots of love..

Originally posted by: BeYourself

a thumbs up for both of you 👍🏼
loved it 😛

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Bola accha likthi hai..

Patha kyun nahi maanthi..

I loved it..

Originally posted by: BeYourself

a thumbs up for both of you 👍🏼
loved it 😛

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

He was never mine, I was never his

Then how did we get to this?

I want him not, I want him still

Is it now time I let off my will

He knows me not, he knows me still

Has he now come to make his kill

THIS.