A Little Beat - A Poetic Drabble From Across The Seas - Page 3

Originally posted by: Amulya9

Wowww...beautifully written ..loved it

Originally posted by: mooumi

wow...awesome one...lvd it... 👏 👏

This is really beautiful.. Each word had a deep meaning, and together it fit so perfectly..

Thank you for the pm Saima..

Heya! Thanks for posting such a nice poem. It was truly wonderful!😊

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Amazing
thanx for pm

Originally posted by: Azraa01

This is really beautiful.. Each word had a deep meaning, and together it fit so perfectly..

Thank you for the pm Saima..

Originally posted by: Zanutix

A rhythm so pure

A rhythm so divine

A little flutter

A little beat

That's all I need

To feel alive

I want him not, I want him still

Is it now time I let off my will

He knows me not, he knows me still

Has he now come to make his kill

My beating heart

Fast-breaking

It hurts so much

Knowing its truth

He marked me his

But knows not he this

It hurts so much

My beating heart

He never was mine, I never was his

How then did it come to this?

The entire drabble was beautiful, but these parts just kinda stood out.

Stood out a lot.

Amazing.

Oh Dawg, just admit it!

After reading The Dark Drabble, anyone could guess that it's your work!

Please admit it, will you?

Sis Saima, did she give it to you due to format problems?

If yes, then its acceptable.

Otherwise, I'm angry, dawg.

Why do you not come out of your cocoon?

Why do you not take credit?

Anyway, I love you for this, especially.

But this does not mean that I'm not angry!

Hmpffh!

Mwah!

Originally posted by: benaz

Heya! Thanks for posting such a nice poem. It was truly wonderful!😊