A Little Beat - A Poetic Drabble From Across The Seas - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41


thank u ao much Shreya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome!!!!
Yaar Aapu's Einstein!!!!
Great work!!!!
If I would hav known u 3 yrs back den I would hav got u to do my english own poetry writing projects!!
Maan jao yaar aur khud post karo!!!!
Thanks alot 4 pm Saima Aapu!!!


Three years back.

Hmm.

Khud post karongi jab khud kam kare toh!

This is a collaboration!

Sis Saima!

You have to edit and please tell them the FULL truth!

Please!

Mwahhh

Your Appu's Einstein??

Hehe

Mwahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Saima & Farz,

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This drabble is just too beautiful & heart touching. You both havedone a marvelous job, 👏. I mean it.


I haven't been on forums for days now but this one piece forced me to come up & appreciate it, because its worth so much praise & love.



<div><font color="#990099">"He was never mine, I was never his</font>

<font color="#990099">Then how did we get to this?</font>


<font color="#990099">I want him not, I want him still</font>

<font color="#990099">Is it now time I let off my will</font>


<font color="#990099">He knows me not, he knows me still</font>

<font color="#990099">Has he now come to make his kill</font>


<font color="#990099">My beating heart</font>

<font color="#990099">Fast-breaking</font>

<font color="#990099">It hurts so much</font>

<font color="#990099">Knowing its truth</font>


<font color="#990099">He marked me his</font>

<font color="#990099">But knows not he this"</font>

These are fav lines, u kno da types where you feel every word is written just for you. .


Okay now coming to Farz. You should be writing more so much more Dear. You're so v talented & Absolutely Fantabulous. So do post your works from now on, okay.


Lots of love..



Hey Sweetie

Thank you so so much

And I keep telling he ahe doesnt listen lol

love you Sis

mwah
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Of course it was a collaboration you thought, you wrote and I posted

Great team work

Mwah

You are more deserving than you will ever know Einstein


Sis!

That's just half truth.

Truth ada adhoora hai!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: farz_parachute



Three years back.

Hmm.

Khud post karongi jab khud kam kare toh!

This is a collaboration!

Sis Saima!

You have to edit and please tell them the FULL truth!

Please!

Mwahhh

Your Appu's Einstein??

Hehe

Mwahhh




I did tell the truth

Einstein its was youuu al youuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: p_s05

"I want him not, I want him still
Is it now time I let off my will"

"He knows me not, he knows me still
Has he now come to make his kill"

"He marked me his
But knows not he this"

This is beautiful! ❤️


Mwah!

Hayyeee...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


It sure is...and everyone of those words belong to Einstein 😊


Sis!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Oh my goodness!

Such overwhelming response!


You guys!!!


I'd like to reiterate!


This is a collaboration. See I'm not denying credit but that doesn't mean I take on full credit when it isn;t mine alone to take!

Come on!


Do you guys honestly think if it was really just me I'd make Sis Saima post this? It was most definitely a team effort!

And Sis Saima and I rock!


So yeah!

But LOVE YOU ALL!


Thanks so much for the kind words and appreciation!


Mwahh mwahh mwahh!!!



Get Over it Einstein

this is yours

dont angry me

😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Saima it was a lovely poem.
I love it.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50



Kya Sis

its the Truth

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