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Originally posted by: rosamale

This update was freaking awesome👏

Eventhough Rehaan is a douche bag i am happy😉 as it will provide more room for AsYa😆

Why do i feel that there is more to him than it meet our eyes😉

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Aashna as promised.. am here with a bada wala comment.. 😊

Dilshad and Asad.. loved their first scene.. She is such an adorable mom.. She got to see the change in emotions in his eyes at the mention of her name.. cool.. lovely...

and he is an obedient son.. he helps his mom set the table.. well not bad to these days guys.. that is very cute Mr. Khan... 😊

AYaan and Humeira.. well we got to know their story now.. She feels he has ditched her and it was just his period of anger.. and he later lost her.. but he remembers Zoya all these years.. Great !! 😊

Asad got to know little bit of Zoya's past now.. and yes he will be interested to know more in the future.. Since Humeira has planned to drop by.. to see Zoya's Mr. Khan.. am sure the plot is gonna be very interesting ...

I think she rattled your calm, and even though you don't show it, she affects you..Dilshad stated confidently and Asad shook his head

This was cool.. Dilshad understands her son so very well...and he dreamt about Zoya .. which is interesting to know.. but he has disciplined his dreams as well.. OMG Mr. Khan and his habits..

😊

Alia..found her to be so very excited to meet Asad.. I am sure she will be a sweet girl who will understand later his love for his Ms. Farooqui.. hopefully...

As told earlier.. I loved the way Zoya dreamt and as she woke up, she got his call.. He is no doubt her protector and saviour... cool scene over there Aashna.. and his voice sort of eased out her tension ... 😊

The conversation about Shahid by other staff members which Zoya got to hear.. I guess that will be important later for her to track something interesting..

The doubt pendulum of mine swings between Rihaan and Shahid and hats off .. for keeping the suspense alive...

Asad and Zoya do great together in business .. cool.. they will be awsome partners going forward...

The last scene.. well.. good Asad handled it and yes eager to read more.. 😊

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 9..

Humaira worries for zoya...she want her to be happy
zoya been through lot...
and she want her to be in peace...👏

So humaira have a past to...
the mock convo... humaira and zoya share..
leads to asad...😳

and dreamy zoya... she actually like it...
and humaira cant stop teasing...and zoya little confession... wow 👏
now humaira must meet him😃

Wow.. zoya felt like a idiot... carry away... and bump into asad...
and out frustration... she mention her dreamy state to asad..
how embarrassing.. and kiss rihan to prove herself...😆

Originally posted by: Linsie

Asad ... the other getting all worked up... by the
intimate moment... he is getting jealous 😳 😡

ayaan saw this ..and what plan he made ? 😕

and ayaan complains made asad realize... about the
kiss... so funny she try to justify herself to asad...😳

so what are asad and ayaan plan...😕

so it is shahid ... in the office ...planning to take zoya out...😲
wow so is all for money.. he is after

Originally posted by: Komal_gill

it was simply wow

well I loved every bit of this chapter

wonderfully penned down dii

initially I thought that the story is running bit slowly but then u completely turned the tables at the end

lolz I'm yearning to read the next chapter

this story is getting mysterious with each n every chapter...and I'm loving it

I'm damn sure that the wicked guy is Rihaan...he's a jerk 😡

I just want zoya to blurt out her every fear to asad...and then I want to see asad consoling her

well waiting for the next update :)

god bless u <3

Originally posted by: _SmileALot

Did I tell u ever that I m in love with ur story...no I haven't said it until today...

Yep...I have been a silent reader until now...

Wow ...what an update...u have really built up the story quite well...n at one point of time u were thinking of discontinuing this one

Well...u leave an update at such a point...😳

Plz update soon ...

Eagerly waiting for an update...

N ya ...I think it's Rihaan n not Shahid ...the criminal...would love to see AAK being Zoya' saviour n beating hi black n blue...after all he is Jahapana six packs..😉

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Hello!

Finally got the time to catch up with this story.

I got busy and to top it I even lost interest on the forum now.Anyways here I am;)

Frankly I would admit that this story did have a slow pace initially but now you have made it so intriguing 😃

Im glad you did not give up on this story and took it as a challenge because you are a phenomenal writer di 😃

Okay about the update the bar scene was really very amusing and im looking forward to the next update.The heart to heart talk is due for long now and since zoya is drunk im sure we are in for some confessions and revealations as well ,like you said.

The old Zoya that is Zeenat's Zoya is locked up somewhere inside this obnoxious Zoya.That old Zoya is still longing for true love and she unknowingly tries to find it in Rehaan and is always disappointed. She channels her disappointment into swearing and shouting at other people.Your potrayal of this concept is fabulous.

Before I read this update It did cross my mind that Ayaan is not the culprit amd he is just looking for something else. Im anxiously waiting for humeira and Ayaan's meeting.

I do strongly feel that Rehaan has to be the mastermind because he was worried about his bag when Ayaan had been caught in Zoya's office and in thid update you mentioned that the bag is the lifeline of the culprit.

No partnership then why is Shahid on a revenge spree is a mystery to me.

I do remember the red file you had mentioned in the initial updates but im not able to establish the connection.

Also the culprit is hell bent on murdering Zoya only because Zoya is close to his secret.He can go to any extent well its about money and greed so that is expected.

Would love to see more of Dilshaad and Zoya and Dilshaad and Asad filling the void in poor Zoya's life:)

Gaffur would want Zoya to hold onto Rehaan but he wont create problems for Asya because he wants the best for Zoya right?

Too many questions unanswered but still a bit clear picture than before.

I probably should get going.See you on your new thread di.

🤗 ❤️