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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: BeYourself

actually 😲

i have never ever imagined Rihaan to have a voice that loud 😲🤣

Rihaan gives no effort in their relationship...and that is kinda good for us 😉

i like that too 😉

i would like Zoya to fall in trouble over and over again, only if Asad comes for her rescue 😉😆

🤗

😆 gal ur funny...I think Rihaan needs to be flushed in the toilet and forgotten before he gets too annoying huh...As is he is starting to speak up..now we wouldnt want that to lead up to other things huh😆

He is starting to make an effort..but I guess it mite be a lil late for damage control..

and worry not Zoya will fall into trouble over and over again..and hopefully...Asad will save her...everytime..hopefully😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: Amin21
Wow lovely update love it
So they think zoya is asad's girlfriend wow so sweet of them 😉

Hey thanks a lot...m glad u liked it..😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good update...

Thank u😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

😆 gal ur funny...I think Rihaan needs to be flushed in the toilet and forgotten before he gets too annoying huh...As is he is starting to speak up..now we wouldnt want that to lead up to other things huh😆

He is starting to make an effort..but I guess it mite be a lil late for damage control..

and worry not Zoya will fall into trouble over and over again..and hopefully...Asad will save her...everytime..hopefully😉

ha ha,,,thanks 😉😆

but the toilet will become ganda 😒🤣🤣

why hopefully?? 😲😲

instead just fulfill my hopes 😉😉😆

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: BeYourself

ha ha,,,thanks 😉😆

but the toilet will become ganda 😒🤣🤣

why hopefully?? 😲😲

instead just fulfill my hopes 😉😉😆

Dont worry..we'll check the flushing system before we dump Rihaan...that way he leaves no marks behind🤪

As for hopefully...well...I cant promise anything naa😆

Suspense creat kar rahi hu...

Hey Ankita..I read ur comment on my new story..will get to it soon..but just wanted to quickly thank u for it..u shared a lil about u n I quite enjoyed reading it..I hope I can give u a good story that can make u start giving love..and its counterparts..some more room in your life...😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
it was simply wow
well I loved every bit of this chapter

wonderfully penned down dii

initially I thought that the story is running bit slowly but then u completely turned the tables at the end

lolz I'm yearning to read the next chapter

this story is getting mysterious with each n every chapter...and I'm loving it

I'm damn sure that the wicked guy is Rihaan...he's a jerk 😡

I just want zoya to blurt out her every fear to asad...and then I want to see asad consoling her

well waiting for the next update :)

god bless u <3

Hey sweetheart...long time...but here you are now..with ur wonderful comment...

Thank u so much...I am glad u liked the update...

Thanks for being honest about the stories pace..I agree with u..but I am happy to turn that around..m keep my readers on the edge of their seats now...

Culprit I wont discuss..cos I guess by Ch 15..I'll try and get to it...so gal keep reading and liking an commenting..it truly makes my day😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
so u want 120 pages of comments :P
i'll do my best lolz😆

Aww so sweet of u gal..thanks😃

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: BeYourself
Heya Komal...i want the next chapter soon too 😉😉

Hey U got it gals...in the new thread 😉..btw where is ur partner in crime Ankita?? I mean Maha??😲

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wow a fabulous update...
asad n zoya are totally falling for each other...

luv it...

ayaan is nt that person he is only finding humeira...

guess its ritiesh who is doing all that because of the briefcase but shahid is also very mysterious since ayaan been talking about him...

totally interesting...

zoya is drunk n asad comes to the rescue...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

hey gal..thanks a lot for leaving a wonderful comment for me to read...I am really happy that u enjoyed the update...

N I love the fact that Rihaan is so insignificant in this story..that nobody tends to remeber his name or Shahids..its always mixed up...😆

Asad and Zoya..their story is starting to take form..so its just gonna get better from here...so keep reading...the next drunken update will be fun😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#810

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
Dont worry..we'll check the flushing system before we dump Rihaan...that way he leaves no marks behind🤪

As for hopefully...well...I cant promise anything naa😆

Suspense creat kar rahi hu...

Hey Ankita..I read ur comment on my new story..will get to it soon..but just wanted to quickly thank u for it..u shared a lil about u n I quite enjoyed reading it..I hope I can give u a good story that can make u start giving love..and its counterparts..some more room in your life...😉

okie...i guess that would just be fine 😉😆

oh...achha... 😆

suspense jo bhi ho...Rihaan to flushed out hona hi chaiye 🤣

no problem...take your time 😛

i just shared a little truth 😳

i don't know much about love...but would surely love reading that story of yours 😳🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago