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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update !!
loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 9..

Humaira worries for zoya...she want her to be happy
zoya been through lot...
and she want her to be in peace...👏

So humaira have a past to...
the mock convo... humaira and zoya share..
leads to asad...😳

and dreamy zoya... she actually like it...
and humaira cant stop teasing...and zoya little confession... wow 👏
now humaira must meet him😃

Wow.. zoya felt like a idiot... carry away... and bump into asad...
and out frustration... she mention her dreamy state to asad..
how embarrassing.. and kiss rihan to prove herself...😆


Thank u so very much for ur comment..
Very truly said...Humeira worries for Zoya a lot...n as of now she senses there's something about Mr Khan...in Zoya's head...and she sees how Zoya gets lost in his thoughts...
As for Zoya she is not in the mind frame to think about another guy, but her heart is beating for Asad and that's unconciously affecting her..hence the frustration...
Thanks for a lovely comment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Asad ... the other getting all worked up... by the
intimate moment... he is getting jealous 😳 😡

ayaan saw this ..and what plan he made ? 😕

and ayaan complains made asad realize... about the
kiss... so funny she try to justify herself to asad...😳

so what are asad and ayaan plan...😕

so it is shahid ... in the office ...planning to take zoya out...😲
wow so is all for money.. he is after

Asad didint like Zoya kissing her husband in front of him..and Ayaan's words made him reslise Zoya was showing off..or rather comparing...I cant say who it was in the office but it was one of the 2 so keep reading😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

U flatter me gal..early of late..ur comment jsut brings a smile on my face..This was indeed a special compliment...u stating that I am not making Zoya's attraction to Asad become cheap...Means lot... gal...again I am flattered...

as for everything else..worry not all will end well..Ayaan will find Humeira..DUh😆
Dilshaad will be the bridge between the 2...
Zoya will continue to mess things up and Asad will continue to mend things..
Zoya felt jealous..but she didnt realise it..cos that was not her place to feel jealous...I will get to it in the next update..
Other than that drunk Zoya and sane Asad makes for a good update😆
Keep reading gal..


I am glad that my comment could bring a smile on your face 😃😳

i remember you mentioning that before you started the story... you said that you won't bring any disloyalty, yet there will be AsYa 😳

Aha!!! Dilshad the bridge!! that's going t bee cool!! 😉

Already read and commented on your next update...Loved that ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

so I have read between cooking
so I am gonna reread b4 I comment
so see u in a bit

All good gal..take ur time😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

Read all the chapters in one go
Loved them to the core
All the chapters were awesome and beautifully written
zoya and asad's first meeting was just wow it was so unexpected to be that way
Zoya was married! I did not expect that but the way her relation is with her husband is just nothing..
Love the way asad and zoya get along as in their fights and how everyone thinks that they are best together
Really love it that way asad is always like "language" to zoya and her freaking out
I loved zoya and dilshaad's first interaction, and I really like that dilshaad understands zoya and finds her sweet
Ayaan loves humera and he is looking for her wow that's true love
And I was shocked that ayaan knows zoya from first
Who the heck is trying to kill zoya?? I'm very worried for her bt I donno why I'm suspecting that somewhere her husband is involved I donno why I feel that bt I'm happy asad is there to save her
Zoya is in the bar and insulting people lol wow and asad took her away
I'm really eager to read the next update
Plzzz do continue asap
And thank you so much for the pm
Hugs
Yasmin..

Yasmin..first of all thanks a lot for taking the time and catching up on this story...I am glad that after Turnaround..u liked this one as well...
I see a lot of unexpected things u came by..well I tried my best to keep some suspense in the story...
As for the dynamics of Asad and Zoya..its the focal point of the story...and I am glad ur enjoying that..even though they are not married...
Language Ms Farooqi..should go his way as well..cos it seems being around her for so long he has started to swear aswell😆
Dilshad..she's going to help a lot...and Ayaan and Humeira are the parellel story..that I will get into soon
As for who is trying to kill Zoya...only time will tell..cant say much about it...but hopefully Asad will be there everytime..
Thanks a lot for a lovely comment..hope to read more of ur comments with each updates..
tc😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

totally loved the update
there is no story u have written that I dont love
dilshad questioning asad about his had was nice
and him just trying to brush it off but the mere mention
of zoya wakes something in him
ayaan and asad convo was beautiful wow 4 yrs relationship
but she got scared bale and his ego stopped him from grovelling
loved ayaan thought on asad and zoya he definitely know they would
have hooked up if she wasnt married bcuz the 2 just light a fire under each other
She doesnt bother me .I think she does...I think she rattled your calm, and even though you don't show it, she affects you.
loved that line by dilshad and asad wondering about zoya dreams about him and he never
allowing his dreams of her further😆😉
wow dishad likes zoya she thinks she would have been just right for asad too bad she is married 😃
oh god another blind date for asad... Alia.
fight between the newlyweds oh oh...zoya convo with her dad is nice even he thinks asad is good for her 😊 but she is married and he will not let her quit without a fight
zoya dream wow and she says asad name he is in her conscience her hubby is right there
and when she tried to get his attention he just brush her off
talk about destiny asad calls just as she wakes up from her dream and he knows something is
wrong with her too😊
awww zoya foul mood and rihaan kissing up with dinner and movie and concert tickets 😔
loved the office gossip and the girls want to see their bosses date but some want asad for themselves
asad date arrives and zoya is not too happy about it and the exchanges that happen between
them😡🤢
y is it rihaan is never their when zoya is in trouble... the livewire absent...the airport pickup absent...the trip to Toronto
asya makes an amazing team working together they kick ass
who the hell is this culprit is it shahid he just came from india so h can know najma and he
works in finance so he sees the money and he keeps to himself and drinks on his lunch break😕
or is it rihaan he always have a meeting when zoya is not their and doesnt he wear glasses.😕
oh yea zoya is living it up in the bar 😆😆😆asad to the rescue again loved the way he
removed her from the bar and she grab a bottle on the way out
Mr.AAK the hot hunk from india who turned her life upside down loved her song 😃
oh we wouldnt share anything about ur girlfriend 😆😆
cant wait for the next update see some confessions and ??????
continue soon

Gal..Thanks a ton..ur comments just flatter me...n make me so very happy...I cant tell ya..u telling me that u have enjoyed every story I have awritten..is just such a big applause for me..😳
Thank u thank u thank u...
now to the update..WOw...I dont know where to start and what to say...
Well Ayaan and Humeira...that story will be said soon...
Dilshad knows the 2 click..and she is not afraid to say it..
Asad is not thinking about it cos he has other things to focus on..
Ayaan is wondering the same
so is Gafoor..
Its the marriage..thats the hurdle...
Dilshad's line was so true..Zoya does get under his skin..and rattles him..he just doesnt want to admit it..
The dream..I quite liked that part...its just reflected Zoya's subconcious..she is walking on the wrong path..and if she doesnt stop..it will harm her...but somehow her ray of hope is Asad..and Asad seems to be connected to her...so he is always there...when she needs him..
Rihaan realises he is being too dry towards his relationship..so he is trying to make it up...and hopefully he will...
Asad's date affects Zoya the way Zoya kissing Rihaan affected Asad...I guess both are territorial..
As for the culprit..lets not talk about it huh😉
Now for the bar scene..its jsut the start for a goofy night ahead..so go read the next update...I'll await yet another one of your wnderful comments😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -jawaria-

Awesome Update
Waiting for the next part 😳 continue soon.

Thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: life4me

I am loving it. Can't wait for the next update.

Please update soon.

Thanks a lot..I hop eu like the next update as well😊

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