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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: AMMY12
awsm update.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

Thanks gal..will do😊

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Tamara27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
Hun..this word is rinigng in my head constantly..all the comments had this word in common..n at this point I am not sure If I should be happy bout it or worried😆
As for the last para...Way to go Aashna...😆 I know that is the confusing one..but let me tell u there is not 3rd person happening there..its the actual person thinking...

Phew..u still like it...cos it will clear up..all this confusion.. be it the culprit..or the love factor...the story has only just started..so there's a lot more to come..so keep reading..n Yieee..ur onboard helping me keep my motivation going..cos I guess thats a fair ask..at this point..75 likes and 20 pages of comments..😲

No no, it's a good thing!

You've got the suspense going. We as readers want to know, but we are loving the suspense, so don't kill it. It might seem like we're annoyed by the confusion but it is adding to wanting to read more.

Forget all that... for me, even more than that, it's the chemistry between Asad and Zoya that has me hooked. Have they ever been this stubborn in any other FF or even in the show? Love it!

Ok, I've said my bit. Update soon soon soon. I literally stalk this thread! 😆

And I think I'll be recommending it to my readers, so they can stalk with me haha!

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: Tamara27

No no, it's a good thing!

You've got the suspense going. We as readers want to know, but we are loving the suspense, so don't kill it. It might seem like we're annoyed by the confusion but it is adding to wanting to read more.

Forget all that... for me, even more than that, it's the chemistry between Asad and Zoya that has me hooked. Have they ever been this stubborn in any other FF or even in the show? Love it!

Ok, I've said my bit. Update soon soon soon. I literally stalk this thread! 😆

And I think I'll be recommending it to my readers, so they can stalk with me haha!

Gal thanks..for supporting my cause...of this crazy suspense and confusion..its part of the whole...

n as for the stubborn duo..well they have a long way to go...before they have a chance to even think in that direction..but thorough that course..I will bring u many opportunities that allow them to get to know each other and start feeling the pull more conciously..so it will be fun...

Also...I left u a comment for the last 2 chapters..n will do so for the new one..so do chk it out...gal...u stalk my thread...😳

I am flattered..bas done..thats my happy comment for today...Oh n gotta tell u...u just rock at ur story..more already been said in ur comment..thank u gal for dropping by...cya soon..Fri should give u an update..for this one... it would have been earlier had it not been month end...but I will try for tomm...

SO stay tuned..😉

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
CONGO for the new thread (I know I'm late)😕
wonderful poem by --starstruck--...excellent work and it truly suits the story very well👏

CHAPTER 6

I'm a bit suspicious about rehaan...is he the wicked guy😡

well dii 2 fierce kisses in one update😳😳

poor asad had to stop her babbling somehow...what could he do...so he utilized the most efficient way heheheee😆

god that elevator scene...OMG ☺️

please dii don't stop writing this story...its truly very interesting and captivating...I'm really loving it❤️

god bless you

lots of love,

Komal⭐️

Gal u have so sincierlly left comments for each and every chapter...thats so sweet...I am flattered...n I am just very happy tosee that ur liking the story...I hope that continues...I have nothing more to say than thank u...n worry not I dont plan to stop writing.. Just keep the comments coming..I love readin them😊

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: Linsie
Humaira and Zoya
girls talk nice...

How the subject change to asad...
and zoya dreaming about asad... their
first kiss 😳

Thanks a lot gal😊

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Divya.S.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
Gal ur comment was treat to read..I mean look at u expressiong ur POV..I loved it..n m really gald that over all this update kept u on ur toes..I know u are very confused..n kinda feel like strangling me to tell u the story..but gal..stay with me..I'll make it worth the wait😉

N Me the queen of confusion NAHI🤓😭

Hehehee😆.. well I'm known to be a lil too expressional and gestural usually.. so couldn't help but add it to my comment too... 😆😳

Oh yes your update did keep me on my toes.. I infact refreshed the page thinking maybe outta somewhere another update might pop up.. 😆

please give the next update or i'll go bonkers

I'm excited to see what you'll show in the next one.. hope there'll be more of Asya..

Hehehee... well Queen of confusion.. because you have succeeded in confusing your readers more... in a good way.. 👍🏼⭐️

oh and Update Soon.. 😃

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
CHAPTER 7
that was seriously not good on zoya's part...how could she take such a decision under the influence of mere grudges😡

well something is changing between our dear ASYA😳

what is ayaan upto? I'm just not getting it😡😡

don't u think that zoya swears way too much😉

what happened to zoya????

Thanks again gal..n ya Zoya swears too much..n she has made Asad do the same..its jsut her way of showing frustration😆 it will go away with time..😛

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: sweety003
Amazing update buddy!!! loved it :)
what i liked the most is Confused..or more clear???😆 still confused weather I'm confused or more clear 😆

Thanks gal..that line..well I knew that was bound to happen..but I guess the confusion happened more...N ur come back..still confused...wether I am confused or more clear was genius..😆

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
CHAPTER 8
god I thought that zoya is in danger but the scene was totally different☺️

the lingerie fiasco was super funny😆

poor asad got hurt...zoya should put down some weight😉

is rehaan the guy who killed najma??? it's very confusing😕

I want to know everything fast but on the other hand I'm enjoying this confusion which is being created in my mind with each one of ur updates😊

god bless u

keep smiling😃

Thank u thank u thank u..n Phew..ur not pissed at being confused..😆 n gal..mazaa to suspense mein to hai..😉

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
CHAPTER 9
zoya-humaira conversation was good and it made zoya realize her true emotions about asad

ZOYA ASAD KHAN😳

now I'm pretty sure that Rihaan is the culprit...I knew it...or I'm just imagining 😕 anyways doesn't matter😆

asad aidn't like zoya kissing him...ooohhh...somebody's jealous😳

I think ayyan is just helping asad to get proofs...no?

Rihaan seems to b very innocent but I'm sure he is the mastermind behind all this...😡

is something going to happen to our darling zoya?

I loved ayaan-asad scene...both of them r too cute when together😳

god bless u dii

update soon please :)

THANK U THANK U THANK U...U r liking the story n thats all that matters...m glad u are all caught up with it...😃