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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Hey tk ur tym.. But dnt stop it midway..

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

well still have points there... asad pov

and there culprit... sohib & rehan... chances
are quiet high consider ayaan... now

and the mystery continues...

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Hi Aashna,
first of all, thank you for keeping your promise and giving an accidental kiss in this update.. 😉
your idea of it was very much different!! 😳

as a reader, i am loving your story and i have full faith in your story telling!!

so just take your time...i am sure that whatever doubts you are having will soon be solved..😳

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Awesome... Loved the elevator prt... Continue soon..

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

oh wow kissing and lot of teasing(unintentional)...nice update Aashna!! eargerly wanting to know the shadow person

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

omg!! it was the cutest n hottest elevator scene i have ever read!! loved it...
glad to know that asya aren't able to get each other out of their minds...
well let's see when their paths will converge at a point!!?
why am i feeling that the mystery man is rihaan ??
continue soon

p.s - i donno why u r tensed up...i liked all the updates but yes it's way too slow...even u r correct...u can't miss out the details...
i don't know but i want to read it fully...n please don't leave it in between...u can take as much time as u want...
i am sure all the readers would wait...

Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 11 years ago

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Dear ,

Indeed it was a filler update,

But i loved it cause of ur writing.

I doubt who is the intruder ?Is it rehaan or Shahid?

And ASYA couldn't forget each other.

And you give the 2 wonderful kisses.

Both u described very good.And the lift kiss.Both are trying to control their feelings.It was awsome.

Dear dont make stress.I have full faith in u.😃

You are a talented writer.And u can give justice to ur story.👏

Dont stop it mid way.

You just update when u are fine.Ok.😳

Thanks for the pm

Pls continue soon

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Very nice update. I think its zoya' s husband.

I love your writing and have full faith in you.

Continue soon.

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Allah Im sure I died due to all the sexual tension in the lift!

its a res for now!

UNRES!

Oh my, my, oh, my! was it hot? or was it hot?

Both the kisses were AWE-FREAKING-SOME! Full of oohm and aah 😆😆

I literally died, went to heaven and came back again!

This was so so so better than what i had asked you to do i mean the desk one would have been too quick and small but this was WOWWW! ☺️ god bless such crowded lifts! 😆

here take this hug for writing such a wonderful chapter for me!