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i know sad track going to be long...

i hope did not offend u .. any where .. i just my opinion..
and if u want to strick back.. always welcum...

not to hurt u... i know ur topic is very strong...

but u have ur vision... which i want to link with mine...

no heart feelings...

went i read ur story... i need time ..

so thats y delay... ok

cool... thanks for the double pm...

to remind me... n i will always remember...

good day.. i know 2 more chapters to go...

later...😛 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

that was nice but don't mind me saying that zoya n najma are showing too much hatred... Asad deserves it. He has done many awful things to Zoya in d show so wats happening to Asad is nothing in front of it. He has done so much things dat no gentleman does to a girl.

for zoya it's acceptable...but najma...ya she surely cares for zoya but asad is like a father to her...i can't bear that much hatred on her behalf... No one in dis story is doodh ka dhula hua n so r Zoya n Najma. Yes, Asad is like a father to Najma but dat does not means he sud completely rule her life decide each n everything for her. Remember, he used to tell her many wrongs things as if he was tight. He told her not to make friends wid jeans wearing girls cuz they r bad. He used to decide even on her hairstyle. He once said to his ammi to tell Najma dat she does not need to go out to bring gift for her professor's retirement as he vl do it. Wasn't dat too much? He told everyone to be home by 7. Dat clearly means he was MCP n also clearly means he is against working of d wome outside d house. Over-protectiveness is not right. It only suffocates d person. As for Najma in dis story, she had to show her outbursts n frustrations someday. Najma has now lost trust, love n respect for Asad for wat all he did wid Zoya. Najma is justified in many ways. In real life, siblings rivalries r much worse. If in d show, Humeira can go against her abbu then Najma going against Asad is possible. Najma's hatred is necessary in dis story to make Asad realize how he went too far in d name of care n protection.

i think she should make asad realize his folly but in a subtle manner !! Najma also cannot be shown completely mahaan. She had too much wid Asad for his interfering n controlling everyone's life. If he always do dis then Najma vl never learn to take care of herself n she vl never know how to face d world on her own. Asad sud understand dis very clearly.

and ayaan n others r disgusting...even after asad repeatedly telling them that he was at fault...they're hell-bent on making zoya the culprit...how exasperating!! They vl be irritating for a long. Zoya is not type of d girl Asad wanted so they think dat she is @ fault. They love Asad too much dat they think dat he never does anything wrong which is very irritating.

continue soon


I know many r upset wid Najma's too much hetred for Asad but its part of sibling rivalry n distance which is common in real life. Dis story is to make Asad realize how his nature has made him lose 3 important persons i his life-Najma, Dilshad n Zoya. I vl try to change a bit but I can't make Najma stop hating Asad. She is too irritated wid Asad's behaviour n she thinks dat she had enough dat he always has problems wid even small things-he does not liking taling while eatingor any other time, dancing happily n freely, too much of OCD. Najma is also a woman so she has decided dat now or never. If she does not stand against Asad now then she can never do. After d divorce track, Asad vl reunite wid Najma, Dilshad n Zoya. He vl be a very changed man. Najma's hatred is also necessary to hv impact on him. Asad vl hv to realize who really cares for him enough to show him where he is wrong unlike his step-siblings who always follow him like his 'chamchas'. I hv read some stories where Najma starts hating Asad due to many reasons. So, I decided to show Najma hating Asad after much thinking😊.
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Originally posted by: Linsie

hmmm... about najma behavior is all about 50 - 50

1 st 50... she justify for zoya all the mistake he have done..
hmm yes asad did mistake but.. you must know...
he have wrong believes...
words sharper then knife...
he is a stone... 👏 👏
Najma is also a woman n she cannot forget wat all Asad did wid Zoya for more than a month. Zoya always tried to be his friend but Asad was always jerk to her😡. Najma vl be Zoya's support throughout d divorce track as Najma is standing for d truth n right😊.


2nd 50... throwing her relationship has a sister is to much
he has been pillar to his family...
well there is small reason.. for make sure
their safety... he did went little over board...
he wish women look like his mother...
quiet dress full long hair... sons always have this
vision girls look like their mother.. even sisters too..
😒

But how long can she support n love Asad wen he is wrong n stupid? He takes decision on Najma on every damn thing which is literally suffocating her. Sometimes, u learn a right lesson wen u lose important persons in ur life so Najma has to be against him.

i have bro .. he is open minded ... person but
went it comes to clothes ... he is very typical...
you will never belief .. he study aboard .. but with that mind set...
but he is not asad... my POV on najma facing asad..
Yaa, some people r like dat. I am not allowed to wear clothes outside below d knee but I am in western wear most of d times such as jeans, t-shirt, tops but I also wear shorts @ home😃.


in all this... asad realize his mistake but now he sound very
vulnerable man to his family...
😭
Asad vl be a very changed @ d end of d divorce track who Zoya vl fall in love wid😃.

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Amazing update Juhi Thank u😊
But i didnt get ur pm😭 Sorry, I thought I PMed u😃
Pls update soon

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