AsYa OS- It Was Just Another Day- 6/3/14

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TaiLung

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

wow loved it

it was awesome

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kals82
hi ankita miss,

i am sorry miss... that i came late here to come in here...
ok miss.. now to your story...

miss... u have beautifully explained the progress graph.. of relation between two quantity of asad and zoya...

let just say...it was a beautifull..

you have went back and forth like relative theory of Einstein... but the best part is i could easily understand like newton mechanics...

the electricty and magnetism.. between asad and zoya..and would love if you could take this to the third dimension under the astronomical stars... and moons...

i loved it like archimedes.. who ran shouting.. eureka...

love

kalyani

hi ankita,

an awesome update dear... love it.. and asad surpsrise of engagement.. loved it..

Hi Kalyani Di,

thanks for this lovely comment...i have never imagined that i would get a comment so much full of Physics...but it feels great to find the names of Einstein, Newton and Archimedes mentioned in it...😳
graphical analysis have always been a tough thing for me and i am happy that i didn't disappoint you in this ..😆 i hope it was an exponential one and not underdamped...😆

i am glad that you found it beautiful 😳

Pink: could you please explain this 😊 please tell me if there is any scope of improvement 😳

i am glad that my update was floating and didn't get drowned... 😆

love you lot!!!
really glad that you liked the story...
i am also feeling extremely happy to say that i didn't mess up my first romantic piece of work 😆

your miss

🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI
both flashback and present was mixed very well👏
zoya's antics when asad returned to bhopal was cute and adroble😳😆
and also during engagement when zoya wanted proper proposal😆😆
wonderful os

thanks a lot...i am glad that you liked it...😛
thanks for mentioning the parts you have liked...specially the fb one 😳

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome OS
Loved the way u wrote flashback & present scenes.
Thanks for pm

thanks a lot...
i am so glad that you loved it 😛
i am happy that you liked the mix up... 😃

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Ankita Grover

@HoityToity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

really loved it

enjoyed reading it

thanx for pm

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: gowtu
Wow it was so gud. So so so gud.. Loved it .. Thnks for pm...

hi Gowthami...i hope i have spelled your name correctly 😛
thanks a lot... i am glad that you found it so good 😃

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Loved the Pizza scene.. Absolutely adored the proposal..
In short, wonderful OS

Thanks for the pm

thanks a lot..i am glad that you liked it...😛

my pleasure 😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: melissa05
It was awesome!!! 👏
Totally love it.. ❤️
Asad is sooo loving and caring!! 😳 ❤️
Sweet!! 😃

HI..
thank you so much...
i am glad that you liked it...
yes, asad is really loving and caring...😛
any girl would want a person like him in her life 😳😆