AsYa OS- It Was Just Another Day- 6/3/14

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Anu

@sweety003

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

it was just perfect 👏
nicely penned...i loved it

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Beautiful OS!! very well written😊😊

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Aww ankie did u really write all this romance ?? 😲😆

Great progress I must say ,, and I guess I don't need to tell yah how much I loved it ,,

it was undoubtedly beautiful 😳

and well described ,, specially the way u have played with FB and present is fantastic !!

My favorite scene was when he proposed her on engagement day 😆

and also the breakfast scene ,,

and obvio u know I loved the present track more for some reasons ☺️😆

and my only question is what happened next that night ?? 🤣

Thanks for sharing this story with us ,,

waiting for next update of ur FF !!

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awww...they were soo adorable as a couple, All the romance and all i jst loved it!
I loved his proposal and his words.

Beautifully Written Update.

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Loved the way u penned this OS..

Absolutely marvelous..

Keep penning..

Thanks for the pm..

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madina12

@madina12

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

So loving it...U are good...
Juz tooo sugary sweet... 😳

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: treasure11
Heyyy ankieee
Thank u buddy and ya i love to fight with u a lot😈

I loved how you kept switching to present and fb 😳
Asad was complaining and thn started to fb himself
😆

awww...They were soo adorable as a couple 😳
All the romance and all ☺️

I can nvr understand Asad why he fights his feelings in the beginning
Emotionally Challenged mann!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And their friendship ...
I thought they had already confessed
both were each others strength😳

I loved his proposal 😳his words 😳...
And also the thing that they lived alone in delhi ☺️

It was a happy happy love story 😳
I hope this is not a bribe for ur ff 😕
Is something bad gonna happen here ???

Hey Aishh...
you are welcome buddy 🤗
i love our fights too...they are quite entertaining 😈🤣
we had actually started fighting on swapno's thread for our first place in commenting 😆

thanks..i am glad that you liked it..it was the most difficult part for me to connect between the two phases...😳
asad and zoya both were too cute..😆😆

romance is a tough thing for me to write..i am glad that i didn't ruin it as miserably as i thought i would 😆
Emotionally Challenged is a synonym of Asad... 😆😆
there was just no need of a confession 😳their lives were oriented around each other always...😳
i wish my asad would also propose me like this, but i am not zoya, so i have no asad too 😆😆
why are you so happy about them for staying alone in delhi aish?? 😉😆

yup, i wanted to make it a sweet one...
no, this is not any bribe, it's just a compensatory work coz i am not showing any romance in my FF 😆😆
jaanne ke liye padhte rahiye Unrecognized Emotions 😆😆
🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

hi ankita miss,

i am sorry miss... that i came late here to come in here...

ok miss.. now to your story...

miss... u have beautifully explained the progress graph.. of relation between two quantity of asad and zoya...

let just say...it was a beautifull..

you have went back and forth like relative theory of Einstein... but the best part is i could easily understand like newton mechanics...

the electricty and magnetism.. between asad and zoya..and would love if you could take this to the third dimension under the astronomical stars... and moons...

i loved it like archimedes.. who ran shouting.. eureka...

love

kalyani

hi ankita,

an awesome update dear... love it.. and asad surpsrise of engagement.. loved it..