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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
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CONGO FOR THE THIRD THREAD! 🥳

Wooohooo!!!! 🥳


Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

@ Mina Di

You are someone who I talk to almost daily. It's like a daily routine which I can't skip. You are always ready to clear my doubts and help me out when I am stuck. You have recently become a spamming queen too. And you quote the whole chapter while pointing out your fav lines. I know you love me a loads big sister and I love you too.


And yes of course we are like Bunty and Chintu though we keep reversing roles.




Every word you said about me.. is true! 😉 And I too am gonna keep you forever and ever! 🤗

You are someone who I talk to almost daily. It's like a daily routine which I can't skip.

Almost? 😲 REALLY? 🤣



Indeed we are Chintu and Bunty with role reversals! ❤️



Well, My love note is 2 posts below this! I'm sure you've read it before and you will love reading it again! 😳



The Next 3 pages including this are waiting for you! 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Chapter 13:


Hello... I'm here with my comments!

Awesome Chapter! 👏

Ahaaan... *RK style*



Zoya is all strong... Yes!!! I love it! ❤️ This is how a girl should be after her break up!

"Phoophi, the SMF has a motto 'Others before you'. And we all are still a team and a storm can't wreck us because our strength is our belief in ourselves" Zoya announced with full confidence.

Haayee...



*Dil jeet liya kudi ne* 🤗

She is a True Leader! 👍🏼

Bloody hell that Razia and Ghafoor are poisonging Asad's brains! He is still worried for Zoya! Well.. Obvious! He loves her! 😳

Zoya and the SMF Team... Truly a MASTERPLAN!!! 👏



The turmoil within Asad and Zoya was Beautifully Expressed through the song and specially the last part where Asad realized his love and Zoya on the other hand ignored her love and worked on the plan! 👏

Asad panted as he reached the rooftop of their hideout. But the site that he met there was not what he had expected. Zoya was standing at the edge of the roof holding the key in her hand. His mamujaan was pointing his gun at Zoya while his mumani was threatening her.

*HELL WITH YOU ASAD AHMED KHAN* 😡



You are one hell of a Complicated Man! 😡



BRILLIANT UPDATE! ❤️ All the things are cleared now! I have no questions and no complaints with the chapter! 😃




This one ^^^ is for Razia and Ghafoor! 😛

The SMF Team would save Zoya! 😉

What the hell did you think? Mad people! 😆



*OKAY?*

Remember one thing Asad...



Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️

Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...



Bye bye...

xoxo

The Next 3 pages including this are waiting for you! 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Note:

As you said,

Why does cupid never grow up? It symbolizes that love never grows old. Why does he throws arrow to the heart? To remind that true love hurts.

I would like to add,

When you lose someone or something close to you, you feel that they've taken a part of you with them. Let this feeling of loss be a good one, that person or something meant a lot to you and that's all that matters.

Love is the most beautiful thing to have, hardest thing to earn and most painful thing to lose.

True love never dies, it lives on in the people who believe in it.

So yes, I shall sit back and enjoy this ride where Asad would woo Zoya and get back his love! ❤️

Protect her, love her, kiss her, hug her, hold her, smile with her, laugh with her. But don't make her fall if you don't plan to catch her.


So Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan... You have hell lot of explanations and wooing to do to get back your love! So work hard, strive harder till she forgives you for the sin you have done!



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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
My Love Note to,

My baby sister and one of my best friend ~ Mahima.


The non-biological crazy little sister who drives me insane! She has some crazy ideas and imagination springing in her head! We have a telepathy connection, she knows what I'm going to do even before I tell her!


We know each other for over 5 years and I shall be by your side forever baby! I love you heaps my baby girl! ❤️





xoxo

Mina di

*high five*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Chapter 14:

Yayyy me first!

Wooohooo!!!!

WOW!!!!!



This chapter was really heart wrenching! 😭 Zoya was saved from falling yet, was shot while saving Padfoot! 😭

The way you have portrayed everyone's condition through the song while in the hospital was flawless! 👏

Asad was praying inside the dargah and begging God to bestow death upon him but spare Zoya. He begged God not to punish Zoya for his sins. Not punish him like this. Tears flew out of his eyes as he prayed. A fakir who had seen Asad like this from morning till the night time now placed his hands on his shoulder and said "Tumhari dua Qubool Hai allah ko." Asad hearing this ran back to the hospital as he felt life returning to him. Without bothering about anyone who was stopping him, he ran inside the ICU room and saw Zoya opening her eyes. Relief spread through him and he thanked God as the doctors brushed past him to attend to Zoya.

This para took my breathe away! I actually had teared! 😭

I'm really enjoying Zoya's come back! The strong girl is back! 😃 And the way she is behaving with Asad!

Asad Ahmed Khan totally deserves this behavior after what he has done!

Rashid's scene with Asad was brilliant! 👏 *hats off*

Rashid who noticed this finally let out his anger. He held Asad by his collar and shouted "Get out of our sight this very second otherwise not even God can save you."

Asad who was expecting that sooner or later this would come just calmly replied "I won't leave, abbu."

"Abbu! Don't you dare call me that" shouted Rashid whose anger was increasing with Asad's stubbornness.

Asad with tears in his eyes said "I know it is too late but I am sorry for all that I did. I am ready to do anything to convince you about my honesty now."

"I want nothing to do with you" said Rashid pushing Asad out of the door.

"Stop" shouted Zoya who had been witnessing all this.


FANTASTIC! 👏

Our Zoya Captain allotted amazing jobs to each and every person! 👏

"Ayaan, Rashid sir and Humeira will keep an eye on Asad. Najma should do all research regarding the bombs and suspects. Nikhat will check all official records to find their whereabouts. Nuzzhat will get their sketches with various disguises made and distributed throughout the entire world. Asad will help you all in this work" instructed Zoya.

Dilshad smiled and asked "Nothing for me?"

"You won't leave me alone till I recover so how can you do something else" said Zoya.

"I love my job" said Ayaan with a smirk.

Zoya who knew Ayaan well said "And no violence."


I was sure Ayaan would love his job! 😆

Poor Asad.. I know he has committed a sin.. but, u know na.. I have a soft corner for that soul!

OMG!!! Asad and Zoya conversation was BRILLIANT!!!! 👏

"Zoya, Can we talk?" asked Asad with hesitance.

"What is it?" shot back Zoya.

Asad started "I wanted to apologize to you for all I did and that I lo..."

"You need not to. I know I was just a pawn in your plan. You are an extremely good player. But if you are here to get my forgiveness then I am extremely sorry. I have learnt that if a person betrays you once it's their fault but if the same one does it again then it's yours. Plus the person who you should actually ask for forgiveness is Dilshad phoophi. You broke her totally after all even before you were born she has been fighting against death for you" said Zoya without taking a single breath.

Ayaan entered to room to see Asad there and said "Leave! Now!"

Asad left without a word.


I loved Zoya's reply.. She should not at all give in easily! Way to go Zoya! 👏

And the BEST SCENE...

Dilshad and Asad actually made me cry! 😭 The revelations of the past was awesome! 👏

Asad has had a major misunderstanding about everything coz of that Ghafoor and Razia! 😡

Finally he is accepting Dilshad as his Ammi! 😊

Asad heard everything and just placed his head on Dilshad's lap and wept.

"Love doesn't come that easily. You need to fight for it. I have seen love for Zoya in your eyes. She is angry and hurt but you don't give up" instructed Dilshad.

Asad said "I won't ammi. I'll fight for our love even against death."




Flawlessly written Chapter! 👏

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next? 😳

Love the whole update! ❤️

Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️




Bye...



xoxo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Chapter 15:

Part I

Trying to keep my comments simpler than usual this time! 😊

Brilliant Update as usual Mahi! 👏

Asad's dream was so beautiful. The lines were so mesmerizing!

Asad held Zoya's hands with his and started "I won't say what I did was not a mistake as I had done it intentionally. I won't say I couldn't think straight as that is no excuse. I won't say it happened because I was brainwashed as that was my stupidity."

"What would you say then?" asked Zoya softy.

Asad with tears in his eyes replied "I would just say that you mean the world to me. Loving you is all I want to do now. I know it will not be easy for you to trust me but all I need is a chance to prove myself. Please don't separate me from you because if you do so then I'll die..."

Zoya on hearing this removes one of her hands from Asad's grip and places it on his lips. She then says "Don't ever say that you'll die because if that happens I'll be just a soul living with no heart as my heart beats only for you."

Zoya then pulls Asad into a tight hug leaving no space between them. Asad hugs her back with equal passion.



This was sheer flawlessness! Nuzzhat and Ayaan are being really rude! But I guess it's Asad's fault on the whole!

Nuzzhat shoved some pictures into Asad's face and questioned "Do you recognize him?"

Asad looked at the photos and was quickly able to recognize the person. He said "This is Raghu. He is Ghafoor and Razia's right man."

"Must be left because you were the right' one" commented Ayaan.


Ayaaan... Mere Asad ko aise bura bhala mat bolo! He ain't that bad! I love him! 🤗

Asad and Dadi's convo was amazing! I loved the way Dadi supported Asad and told him to be strong and not give up! 😊



Zoya pulled out Raghu's Teeth to get the truth out???? 😲 🤣

"You will be needed her. Take out Raghu's tooth if he doesn't cooperate. And for help I am taking Asad with me" announced Zoya.

"Asad! No ways" retorted Ayaan as Zoya's words sank into him.

Zoya gave a stern reply "Ayaan, I am leading this case and I know what I am doing."

With this without any further discussion Zoya left the room leaving Ayaan to simply gape at her.


Zoya took Asad with her! 😲 *mind dance*

Scroll down for comments on the Song Sequence... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Chapter 15:

Part II

Song Sequence...

Beautiful song chosen for the scenario. 👏

Their breakdown was so beautifully shown throughout the song. The way Zoya trying to avoid Asad and Asad trying to give her space alongside trying the get back.

When Zoya fell and expected to land in Asad's arms but unfortunately fell and then later dreamed of Asad giving her his hand..

The silence in the drive back home... 😒

Asad tried his dream to turn to reality but Zoya shrugged him off. It ain't so easy! 😭 The breakdown was so amazing.


Asad remembering his proposal to Zoya and sitting down on the beach alone. And the RAIN! 👏



Zoya trying to distract her mind from everything! I'm really sad for her! 😭 Flawlessly written Chapter! 👏

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Love the whole update! ❤️



Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


xoxo

Mina di! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Chapter 16:

Trying to keep my comments simple..

Brilliant Update as usual baby! 🤗

Asad gone somewhere! 😲 Dilshad sending Najma! 😊 Awww... Asad crying at the beach!

Najma consoled Asad! 😃



Beautiful Scene! Najma stood for Asad in front of Rashid and didn't let Asad get shoutings from him! 😳

Zoya at Khan Villa? 😲

Rashid noticed Zoya's red eyes and questioned "What happened to your eyes?"

"Something went inside them" replied Zoya not meeting Rashid's eyes.

Asad heard this and knew that Zoya had been crying. He was glad that the two had not spotted him yet.

Obviously she's been crying! 😭 Poor thing!

The flashback was so ADORABLE! ❤️ Zoya finished the case before anyone could come! 😆

She opened the door to let Asad in and remarked "Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan, I don't think your intentions are good."

Asad blushed a bit and after composing himself chided "I am not shameless like you."

"Me and shameless! You are the one who is in my room at 3:30 at night" said Zoya warping her arms around Asad's head.

Asad smirked and moved close to Zoya and blew air in her ears to which she turned crimson red. Asad then whispered into her ears "I need a first aid box."

Zoya who was expecting something romantic was startled and moved back. Then as Asad's words struck her and worry took over her. "Did you get hurt when you came here?" she asked as she moved to get a first aid box.

"Not me but you. I noticed few bruises that you got from the fight and hid smartly. I knew you won't tend to them at all and I couldn't sleep thinking about that" replied Asad looking at Zoya intently.

The flirting was too cute! 😃 Asad tended to her wounds! 😳 Really a super cute part!

Yayyy! Nikhat and Nuzzhat also forgave Asad! 😳 Awwwiiieee! 👏

Spinster's Part is Las Vegas! 🥳 Awesome! 👍🏼

Another Flashback! ❤️ Basket Ball reminds me of DMG! Loved the AsYa convo towards the end of the Flashback! ❤️

"Deleting from the memory of the pc was easy but how do I get him from my mind and heart" questioned Zoya to no one in particular.


It's impossible to erase memories from your mind! Flawlessly written Chapter! 👏

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Love the whole update! ❤️ Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps Mahi baby! 🤗 ❤️


xoxo

Mina di! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Chapter 17:

Not my usual comments.. 😆 Keeping it simple! 😛

I completely loved the update! ❤️ Road Trip from San Francisco to Las Vegas!

Beautiful view! The Death Valley was WOW!

The song sequence was brilliant! 👏 Nuzzhat and Nikhat's plans seem to be working! 😉 Humeira joined the plan too!

Asad ordered for Zoya and she didn't mind! 😳 Now Asad is gonna drive! 😃 The drive was beautiful! ❤️

As Asad drew the car he kept glancing at Zoya who was trying to sleep. As he noticed her shivering and feeling cold on her legs, he took off his jacket and carefully wrapped it around her legs to make her comfortable. Zoya immediately relaxed after this.

After some time as Zoya finally slept off and as the car jerked her head ended on Asad's shoulder which he dared not remove after he saw a smile on her face.


Haaaye!

The Grand Canyon looks gorgeous! Asad pulled Zoya to save her from falling! 😳

Asad looked Zoya directly in the eye and said "I know that you are a carefree person and are least bothered about when you die. But you don't know this fact that you will rest in peace but here people will die every day without you."

Zoya saw Asad walking off from near here and she was just left pondering on his words.


OMG!! The river rafting scene! 😳 So cute! 😳 Asad blew into her eyes to help her irritation subside.

The fountain show and then...

Zoya forgave Asad? 😲 But... But what? 😲

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Love the whole update! ❤️ Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps Mahi baby! 🤗 ❤️


xoxo

Mina di! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30


Happy 1st Birthday QH Team! 🥳

I'm so happy that AsYa gonna reunite!

Lalalalalalalalalala

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