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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Chapter 18:

Finally... I'm un-reserving my comments!


I knew Zoya won't forgive him so easily! I totally loved the conversation and Zoya's Past! Poor girl has gone through a lot of hardships in life.

I hope Asad manages to cheer her up a bit! 😳

OMG! Rashid-Asad scene was beautiful! 👏

Rashid made Asad look into his eyes and said "Not till now but you will if you don't get me Zoya as my daughter-in-law."

Well said Rashid! 👏

"Fear" said Rashid making Asad look at him and then he continued "Fear of an unknown thing is what you need to drive away from your and her heart."

True! 👍🏼 Totally loved the way you have written the dialogues in this conversation! 👏 ⭐️

"That was not your last case. You and Zoya are going to India to sort stuff out" spoke Rashid winking at his son.

I'm totally enjoying this! 😉 Rashid! 🤗 *BIG HUG*
Zoya shut Ayaan up! 😆

AsYa in India! 🥳

ArIya involved in case! 👏 AsYa in ArIya's House! 😃

Zoya scared of cockroach! 🤣



Reminded me of this scene! 😆

Awww.. Asad tried to talk to Zoya! 👏

"Ok so we act like friends, right?" questioned Asad again to be sure.

Zoya irritated now replied "Absolutely."

"We act like friends but what are we actually?" enquired Asad determined to get an answer.

"Acquaintance" was the curt reply that Zoya gave after pondering for a while.


This was so natural!

"Well we are not technically colleagues as you are still not back on the team. Friend is a word that defines two people who trust each other and can count on each other. Lovers was a never a word that defined us. And lastly I don't think we are strangers" replied Zoya not looking in Asad's eyes.


Asad looked at her intently and said "From what I see we are two people who love each other but are apart for a while due to some differences."


"So technically we have a relation that can't even be named" spoke Zoya hiding the fact that she knew that his words were so true.


Both stood looking at each other for some time lost in their own thoughts.


This scene was mesmerizing!

The whole song sequence was WOW! 👏

Zoya suddenly saw something in her mehendi which made her eyes widen. There was a beautiful A' calligraphed on her hand. She tried to hide it but Asad saw it nevertheless. He looked at Riya who winked at him indicating that she had got it done.

Kya baat hai Riya! 😉



Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...



Bye bye...

xoxo

minakrish thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Chapter 19:

Finally... I'm un-reserving my comments!


Zoya and Ayaan convo was cute. I know Ayaan is concerned about Zoya but he needs to let her take her decisions and not budge in her personal life too much.


"The equation has changed and I don't know where we both are headed though" said Zoya taking a deep sigh.

That was really well said! 😳 I'm happy that Zoya is taking a step but. Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan needs to work harder. 😊



Yay! Ayaan has bought a house for Humeira! 🥳

OMG! Asad sings so well! I loved the bonding between him and the ladies.

"We will make sure that we right A' in Zoya bhabhi's hand during the mehendi rasam day after" spoke Najma in delight.

Dilshad too like a kid said "Not just A' but the full name."

"That won't be needed" spoke Humeira earning a glare from the others except Asad. She continued ignoring the look others gave her and said "I saw Zoya's mehendi. It is very dark. It will definitely last till the wedding."

Asad blushed on hearing this and the girls started teasing him.


EEEPPPSSS!!! I'm so excited too! 🥳 *WEDDING TIME*




Rashid laughed on hearing them and said "I meant the next move to bring Asad and Zoya closer."

"Oh! That! We have it all set" spoke Humeira and various ideas flooded from the girls that earned a quick approval from Rashid and Dilshad.


Yay! The whole SMF Team other than Ayaan are on Asad's side!




Okay! uhhh.. The flashback left me aww-ing!

Zoya wiped her tear and said to her "I shouldn't let the old memories haunt me like this. Rather I should take them as a beautiful dream which was not real and shall never be."


Can I cry! 😭 Poor Zoey!




The whole song sequence was WOW! 👏 So romantic yet painful!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️

Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...



Bye bye...

xoxo

Mina di
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Chapter 20:

I'm really sorry for extreme delays in un-reserving my comments. But you know my genuine reasons.

Sheer brilliance Mahi. Asad and Zoya doing the play!

Loved it... ❤️

Hawww... Zoya told Asad to stay away from her if he loves her? What the hell is wrong with this girl!

Ohkay... Zoya wants to fix things!!!!!! HOW???? Continue soon!

Brilliant work Mahi baby! 👏

P.S.: My comments would be gif less and short as my net speed is simply superb!

Love you loads, ❤️

Mina di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Chapter 21:


Awww... Fawad is... ☺️ I love him! ❤️

Asad thinks that Zoya has moved on in life with Fawad? 😲

No way! 😛

I'm with Fawad coz he asked me:


And I said "YES!" 😳

ROFL... I WISH! 🤣

All plans going well and Zoya concentrating on Asad more than the case! 😳

OMFG! 😲 Asad got shot? 😲 😲 😲 😲

I want next chapter now!

P.S.: My comments would be gif less and short as my net speed is simply superb!

Love you loads, ❤️

Mina di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Chapter 22:


OMG! Asad in coma?

Poor Zoya.. 😭

Loved the song sequence where she went to pray in the dargah and Asad recovered! 👏

Asad left? 😲

AIRPORT SCENE WAS ADORABLE!

Finally they are together! 😳

Continue soon Mahi! 😃

P.S.: Apologies for my simple comments! My net speed is masha allah! And the only thing that I keep telling my net is..😡



Love you loads, ❤️

Mina di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Reader's Request:

I WANT RAIN SEQUENCE! BAS! ❤️




Ummm... On the song Baarish from Yaariyan! 😳
minakrish thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#37


Bas ho gaya... Finally done with posting all the previous comments! 😉

*FLYING KISS*


Edit the thread soon so I can read Chapter 23! 😳

I'm sad that this story is coming to an end...😒 But as it is said.. All good things come to an end and make way for new ones!

Love you Mahi! ❤️

Continue reading till the end of this page! 😉
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
minakrish thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#38
KSG says:




I say,

I promise to keep bugging you
as long as
you promise to keep tolerating me! 😉
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

THE ONE AND ONLY KARAN SINGH GROVER ❤️
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
minakrish thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#40
I know, I know... You would be now saying...

Mina diii...



I'm leaving now! 🤣

Bye! 😆
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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