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Hmm. Yeo starstruck...I meant to say as you pointed out earlier. Well I want Tanveer to gimme some answers.

Hmm..could it be that Zoya is actually in the know?????

She's in love with Asad? And tries to seduce him? And pedo Asad jumps to the opportunity??


Yeo. Discussing a story at length..

We rawkkk...

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Hmm. Yeo starstruck...I meant to say as you pointed out earlier. Well I want Tanveer to gimme some answers.

Hmm..could it be that Zoya is actually in the know?????

She's in love with Asad? And tries to seduce him? And pedo Asad jumps to the opportunity??


Yeo. Discussing a story at length..

We rawkkk...

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Hmm, going on for quite a while.

We've predicted so much already! 😆

Oh gosh, never saw someone so desperate for Tanveer! 😳

Look, dawg, there are 2 possibilities that we have already discussed -

One, she's either dead,

or

Two, she left them on their own for reasons unknown (hey, that rhymes! 😎)

Or can it be that she was killed by the pedo himself, and Zoya is in the dark about it?

Sayy whaaat.

@starstruck...thanx for ur support & encouragement.
I too don't wanna stop writing. And I really don't wanna get happily strangled...

Totally different concept !!
I liked it !!
Its awesome ...
Update soon !!

That's just it right...The reason we're so involved in the discussion of the story..Yes it is disturbing to the highest level. And quite traumatising too. But you have a story to tell, and if by this story we cringe and be disgusted and be all disturbed then you must be doing it right.

I am for highlighting such social issue. To advocate awareness and realisation that we live in a world where such harsh realities exist.

Surely if you were to put someone else as the predator, and not Asad, people (me) would find it a lot more bearable. But that would mean you're not telling us YOUR story and that we (I) live in a state of denial. Because somewhere out there there are people like him and they could be somebody's Asad.

So yes. If you have a story to tell, we would like to hear it, though we cringe and criticise it so badly that you might think it is directed to you...if there comes a point where it is unacceptable we would stop. Reading. Don't stop thinking you're not a good writer. Sometimes we're not as open as we perceive ourselves to be.

And since you mentioned...WHERE is Tanveer?? I knew there was something about Tanveer. While you don't have to justify your characters, we the readers need to find reasons to why they are the way they are...and to voice out our dissatisfaction (though to you, but not ABOUT you)..

So it comes down to this.

Where is Tanveer?


He he.



Okay, really it comes down to whether you're up for it. I promise you it won't be smooth. The rest is for you to decide.


And thanks for not getting mad at us for the discussion. Well we did promote it...


And hello Sadie!


Zan, where you...

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_

@starstruck...thanx for ur support & encouragement.
I too don't wanna stop writing. And I really don't wanna get happily strangled...

😆 😆

okay i understand the age part... you going to reveal more