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Originally posted by: --starstruck--

after such detailed discussions i will happily strangle you if you discontinue! I dont know about others but you have really spiked my interest and I GOTS TO KNOW! I dont mind mature stuff! And this concept is very new so i would love to read further!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

That's just it right...The reason we're so involved in the discussion of the story..Yes it is disturbing to the highest level. And quite traumatising too. But you have a story to tell, and if by this story we cringe and be disgusted and be all disturbed then you must be doing it right.

Exactly! If this story disturbs us, then that surely means that you are a good writer! You can actually get inside the readers' brains!

I am for highlighting such social issue. To advocate awareness and realisation that we live in a world where such harsh realities exist.

Surely if you were to put someone else as the predator, and not Asad, people (me) would find it a lot more bearable. But that would mean you're not telling us YOUR story and that we (I) live in a state of denial. Because somewhere out there there are people like him and they could be somebody's Asad.

Yeah, its like we are very very used to seeing Asad in a good light. So this all dark and sinful Asad is hard to accept. BUT, that does not mean that we hate your story or your characters! We just find them a lot intriguing.

So yes. If you have a story to tell, we would like to hear it, though we cringe and criticise it so badly that you might think it is directed to you...if there comes a point where it is unacceptable we would stop. Reading. Don't stop thinking you're not a good writer. Sometimes we're not as open as we perceive ourselves to be.

At least you have the ability to post such a different story and even have the ability to take criticism in a good light! That is so very noble of you. 😊

And since you mentioned...WHERE is Tanveer?? I knew there was something about Tanveer. While you don't have to justify your characters, we the readers need to find reasons to why they are the way they are...and to voice out our dissatisfaction (though to you, but not ABOUT you)..

So it comes down to this.

Where is Tanveer?


He he.

Oh, don't worry dawg. She'll be here soon!


Okay, really it comes down to whether you're up for it. I promise you it won't be smooth. The rest is for you to decide.


And thanks for not getting mad at us for the discussion. Well we did promote it...

Spammed it to the 2nd page of the forum! 😎

And hello Sadie!


Zan, where you..

I AM HERE DAWG! You must be knowing the reason of my delay..

IMY

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