~The Sunshine of My Life#2 AsYa FF~||Link to third thread PG 125 - Page 69

Originally posted by: BeautyfulDesire

This was really good and I love how Asad is starting to depend on Zoya as are the others. Are there going to wedding bells soon? :P Great update!

Originally posted by: sanasahel

Yah emotional... 😭

nice update. really Asad has started opening up to Zoya .

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

That was Superb,Amazing,Mind-blowing,Awesome Update..Loved it alot..You've written everyone's emotion very Beautifully..Superb..

Asad-Ayaan convo was AMAZING..

Loved the way they both fed each-other..

Loved how Zoya made Asad realize that he LOVES his Abu..

She made him cry for his lost..Lovely..

"she caressed his back gently, he let his tears fall unrestrained, and he cried, cried in the arms of a girl he hadn't known for more than a few months, but who had suddenly become someone he knew he could depend upon. A girl he didn't know would become an indispensable part of his life."

Loved these lines..

Once again SUPERB update..

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

Originally posted by: madina12

Awesome update as always...
Tis is really a emotional part...Pity asad,ayaan,dilshad & najma over the loss..
Love the bond between the brothers & ayaan really understand asad...
Even najma bonding wif asad is awesome...She is only worried how will her brother go through all tis...
Yes finally asad & zoya...Juz love the mutual understanding they have for each other & i cant wait to see them getting closer & more dependent with each other...
Not forgettig the cutie pie aahana...more antics & cuteness from her

Originally posted by: krati5

how can u describe such tough emotions, which i never thought would be there on first place & then, explain them so easily... brilliant

Originally posted by: lourel24

WOW! u write amazingly beautiful.I mean every sentiments,every dailogues were as if its made for that particular scene.no words can suffice to express how superbly u write.asyaan,asya,zoma each one of them were unique in their own sense.finally asad got wat he gave to ayan,a shoulder to cry.plz plz plz plz pm me

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

such a beautiful n emotional update it is ...
luvd d part of asad n zoya in garden ...
update soon
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: vinita459

Good update as usual. It was emotional but it was needed :(. Zoya understand Asad and his family so well. I hope when the time comes , he also does the same for her. Finally he admitted that he loved his father :). Like I said earlier too, you write beautifully and I always look forward to your updates :)

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Ankie its amazing update.

I like ASYAAAN ,ASYA' SCENES,ZOYA COMFORTING ASAD& HIS FAMILY.

Now she is an inevitable fact in their life

I cant wait more dear

Pls update soon]

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

u just touch my heart n im sure every reader's heart😳 u can just feel his tears n his words wen he says he loves his father his abbu😳