~The Sunshine of My Life#2 AsYa FF~||Link to third thread PG 125 - Page 70

Originally posted by: fanraya

Abosolutely amazing, touched my heart, I am completely 🤗 You are really an amazing writer, so beautiful, Zoya and Asad's conversation was just so lovely, great work Ankita.. Can't wait for next update.. I am totally speechless..

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

" I do love him Zoya, no matter how hard I try to hate, but I can't.. I do love him."

"Who Mr Khan? Say it!" Zoya said.

"Abbu.." Asad said after a few minutes of awkward painful silence.

And he cried shaking with sobs, even as he tried to hold back. But Zoya egged him on, forcing him to emit all that he had suppressed for years. Helping him to deal with a phase of his life that had made him the man he was, so that he could leave it behind him and move on to a better, peaceful life, maybe with her, or so she hoped.

Main ro rahi hoon... THIS IS SO SO SO SO VERY BEAUTIFUL that I cant keep from crying. :'(

Y SO PERFECT ANKU :'( Y? :'(

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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I dont remember precisely if i have said this before, but I'll say again ---> UR FF SHOULD BE MADE INTO A DAILY. The society badly needs it. 👏

Originally posted by: amruta04

beautiful update Ankita..😊
how do u write soo well...👏
emotional update...loved Asad n Ayaan bonding
loving this side of zoya..missed Aahana today
waiting eagerly for next update
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm..

Originally posted by: Ishaqzaadi

The Ayaan and Asad moment was so emotional.. :( I'm so glad Asad did go in the end..

Also loved the little moment between Najma and Zoya! Even on the show, I used to love their bonding :'( so it's great to read this in your fanfic, which I believe is a far more brilliant attempt at telling the story the show was meant to tell!

Really, really enjoying the FF and how it's all progressing. you've always been a great writer; your artistic and creative talent is immense, but I really think this FF is bringing out the best in you. The story is so gripping and emotional, and you've captured the essence of the story and its characters so well.. I always feel like I'm actually watching it, not only reading!

The AsYa sequence was just.. Beautiful. The way they're coming to understand each other.. Sigh. I love them. :(

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Beautifully Written Update Ankie!
It was super duper awesome.
I really love the way Zoya handles Asad n make him eat n the way she leaned on his shoulder n hugged him was amazing.
I love how the story's progressing.
I jst can't wait to read what
happens next.

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Ankitha.. Thanks again for a wonderful and emotional update.. 😊 The scenes between Asad and Ayaan were just awsome.. Liked the thought how Ayaan was adamant and did not let Rashid's body to be taken till Asad came over.. 👏👏👏

Ayaaan should lot more emotional strength... Zoya is a sweet heart here.. Loved the way she handled Asad .. He becoming strong and weak in her arms... Was splendid...

The more I read .. the more I am loving this story.. Thanks a lot Ankitha.. 😊

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Another big step in their relationship! He trusted Zoya enough to cry in her arms! After this he will acknowledge that he has some kind of feelings for her right? I can't wait to read more so update soon! Please?

Originally posted by: piksg

Awww. :') I m sooo touched...lovved. it <3...pm me.pllzz

Originally posted by: jas91

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awesome updt Ankita👏

Zoya is taking care of every1 like a ideal bahu👍🏼

Aahana accepted her calling her Mi although unintentialy⭐️

today Najma said that she wishes Zoya 2 stay in KV forever😃

Asad is also opening up wid her😉

All these things r increasing Zoya's feelings 4 this family❤️

I hope everything becomes normal soon😲

U said nxt 4-5 updt will b happy wale scenes btw Asad-Zoya-Anu

I m looking forward 2 that

but plz make Dilu forgive Asad😊

cuz i want Dilu & Najma also 2 join in Asya's ride of happiness🥳

Thnx 4 PM & updt soonish🤗