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mhd72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Ankita, this update was absolutely fabulous!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

You, anyway, are a fantastic writer, no doubt, but this one was mind blowing, at least for me...😊

Two broken souls trying to mend their lives...knowingly, unknowingly help each other doing that...Their individual approach towards a particular event/situation in life...with the other one sharing his/her perspective,the one common thread of their lives...the one 'sunshine' in their lives..for Asad, 'Aahana' always was a part of his life, but for Zoya, these are some new feelings, new emotions...somehow should bind them together for eternity!! The depth of their emotions, & also the understanding between themselves has been portrayed beautifully in your writing...😃

Enjoying every bit of it!!

Continue soon,

🤗

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linta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

I just can't wait 4 the next update

Love it

Keep writing

Update soon

Smooch

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Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Aahana Zoya ❤️

But still she chose to see his hurt first?❤️

The hugs were so warming I love their bonding

" But when she caressed his back gently, he let his tears fall unrestrained, and he cried, cried in the arms of a girl he hadn't known for more than a few months, but who had suddenly become someone he knew he could depend upon. A girl he didn't know would become an indispensable part of his life."

"And he cried shaking with sobs, even as he tried to hold back. But Zoya egged him on, forcing him to emit all that he had suppressed for years. Helping him to deal with a phase of his life that had made him the man he was, so that he could leave it behind him and move on to a better, peaceful life, maybe with her, or so she hoped. " These were so beautifulll

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: gowtu
Wow wow wow..
Tht was fabulous one...
Nd an emotional prt..
Loved it..

So loved ayaan words tdy..
Thy were so r8..
Asad nd ayaan consoled ech other how sweet tht was..

Zoya concernd for dillu najma nd mostly for asad..
The way she consoled asad was lvly.. She took care of him nd family members very well..

Asya prt was awesome..
So beautifully written...
Continue soon..
Thnks for the pm..

Thanks so much, I am glad you liked the update. 😊

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: treasure11
This was sad but beautifully written !!!!😊
Asad and ayaan's relationship ...their understanding 👏
And that garden bench scene...He has become comfortable around her ...he needed her whn he was breaking down ...ahaaa I loved this scene soo muchh ...

He is getting there ...just a momenet of realization and thn acceptance is needed😉Just as he accepted his love for Abbu ...

She understood him ,so naturally he unconsciously leans on her when he is so weak. He sees her as a friend, can relate to her pain because he's seen all that himself too, so they bond. For him falling in love isn't hard, its the realization that will take its due course. Thanks so much <3

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: manognasai
Awesome update...⭐️
Loved it a lot!
Asad-Ayaan's scene was so cute,adorable and sweet!👏
Asad is always like a father to Ayaan!The way Ayaan spoke today tells how mature he has become!😃
AsYa convo was amazing!Zoya acts so maturely when needed...the way she talked to Asad and made him speak his heart out is awesome...Finally Asad let out his feelings that he is hiding inside from others and even himself!
Update soon.Waiting😊

Thanks so much glad you like it.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: nilusoni
emotional but gr8 part loved it
hope to see some asya and ahana parts
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Your wish is fulfilled in the next part and the ones after too 😳

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: PreetLuvKSG
super updt...👏
loved Asad n Ayaan scene
loved ASYA moment ❤️

Thanks so much 😊

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
a beautiful update
AsYa r emotionally bound to each other...
they're each others strength
n u so very well express their anguish, hurt n other feelings...
loved the update ... continue soon

Thank you :) I am happy to know you like it.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan
wow just loved each and every part of it :)
i just don't have words to describe it :)
awesome writitng :)
plzz update soon :)

Thanks a ton :)