~The Sunshine of My Life#2 AsYa FF~||Link to third thread PG 125

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Ankitha.. This was an amazing chapter to read...Very emotional and beautifully written... The first scene about Aanu calling Mi in her sleep which pulled Zoya's heart and made her realize what she would get and what she could give back to the family...was just WOW...😊

Moving on Zoya took care of Asad's wound was so sweet.. followed by her explaining Dilshaad's POV and making Asad realize what he should be doing was too sweet...😊

Asad came back and hugged her hoping to get strength... He has started depending on her emotionally without realizing ...though Zoya has realized her love for him.. Now it is waiiting for Asad to realize his love for her.. 😊

Thanks for a wonderful update Ankita.. 😊

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Anku, you just keep surprising me with each update of yours. The way you express, describe feelings of your characters is just out of the world

The way you bring an emotion out of me wgile reading your work is indescribable. Just brilliant! I just hope when Asad comes back, he is not as broken as I am expecting him to be right now but rather a stronger human being and supporting his family like he always have been. But yeah I know deep down he would be broken which I am sure only zoya can mend Cant wait to read further..

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Beautiful play of emotions.!! very well written :)

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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+ 30

Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Omg ahana call her 'ammi'..
Really amazing update

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aniha

@Aniha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

loved this emotional update
asad is changing hugs and kisses to zoya😃
upate soon..

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Mahera

@Maz8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Marvellous😃. Poor Asad😭

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

wowww...thisz amazing...n sooo beautifull...loved the way zoya handled the situation ..my baby is soo mature ...👏👏 ASYa r so perfect fr each other,,,,i wanted him 2 hug n kiss her ..n u made him 2 do that ..thanqq...ur updates always make me smile ...continue soon...n u didnt PM Me?

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#588

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#589

It was just awesome

Keep writing

Asad kissed zoya

Wa kya baat hai!!!!!!

Update soon

😃

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#590

This chapter was such an important step in their relationship. Asad is starting to let Zoya in! Will he start to fall for her slowly now? I can't wait to read the chapter where Aahana calls Zoya her ammi and I can't wait to read their reactions to that! I loved this chapter and am looking forward to the next. Update soon,please.