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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it!!! ❤️
Sweet! !!
Innocent!!!
Cute!!!
Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
awesome piece of work
it is very well written with so much meaning
if possible do add one more part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This. This was what I was going on about yesterday!!! The whole morning dew and the first light at the break of down..drizzling sunshine! That. That was what I meant.

You weren't kidding about the surprise. You weren't.

I had an inkling when you described him that he might be autistic, the same way she felt something was amiss in the picture. There's no point raving about your talent when it comes to style and writing. It's evident.

So I shall continue to revel in drizzles and sunshine. 'Coz in awe I am of this heartmeltingly warm and fuzzy piece of sheer brilliance. No, there is no such word as heartmelting. But maybe by now you ought to get yourself a copy of Farz's Concise Dictionary. That word exists.

See what I mean when I say that I CAN discuss love, an discuss only, but you're the ultimate craftsman. Your craft is pure love. Wohi, faiz wala love.

I have in the recent past been recipient of beautiful dedication and mentions by amazing writers. However , I dare say, that, this is the first ever, a story in its entirety and wholeness is solely and purely dedicated to me, with my full chosen name mentioned. The human in me is overwhelmed with the special and most appreciated thought while the reader in me was more taken, or rather, was completely floored by the paradoxical title of this masterpiece, I knew from the get-go that this would be nothing short of a grand masterpiece (redundant, but most apt) and I was happily proven right. For this is a work of sincerity and blissful happiness (again redundant, but can you stop complaining).

You're not a cynic. You're not. Please tell me you're not. I need to know.

And no, my thug side is happily watching from afar. Ever since you've unleashed the human in me, it insists on staying. We'll see for how long.

But nutella stays. Coz chocolate love aphrodisiac fuzzy warm drizzle and sunshine they're are a team. A kick-ass team. The A-team.

Beautiful story by an even more beautiful soul in a beautiful body with a brain and a beautiful mind. I assumed the beautiful body bit. I highly doubt you look like Ursula (from The Little Mermaid, you doink) so yeah.

I love you. No, not the lal ishq type. Or the faiz wala type. This is the zehnaseeb kind. (no, nothing to do with Siddarth Malhotra). So now you know.

Asad is adorable or what. Does he remember her from the first time?


Kdone.


Smile. Blushes. *looks around* Mwah. *runs away shyly*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg ok this was the cutest thing I've read in a while! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

OMG this was so good. Seriously a very well written os with so much meaning in every word. Loved it to bits n am off to reading it again. Can't get enough of it. Please keep writing n if possible please continue this into a TS.
Please pm me for anything you write. I love your writing style.


Aww, thank you so much! It really, really means a lot.
YOU'LL READ IT AGAIN? Oh, I couldn't be happier! 😃
I might not continue it, it'll be very hard to take out time this year. :(

I will PM you, surely!
Thank you so much for reading and liking it! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Beautifully written
Awesome
Thanks for pm


Thanks for reading!
And you're welcome. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: noesha

Loved it! soo cute! and somehow reminded me of mnik but wid ksg haha very good


Haha! Thank you so much!
I realised that it resembled MNIK when I was proof reading it. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divc

Omg this is soo beautiful and touching, it made me tear up a little ! I used to volunteer at this autism center and this makes me so nostalgic.😳 I totally chuckled at the part where Aapi banned her from stalking him😆. Brilliant OS ! x


Aw, I made you tear up? I'm sorry!
That is so very noble of you, volunteering at an Autism Center. 👏
Thank you so much for reading and liking it, it means A LOT!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahika24

Omg this is adorable! And so very different. I've never seen anyone write Asad in this way. Your writing is beautiful, I see the amount of effort and love you've put into it. I'd love to read more from you!


Thank you so much Mahika! 🤗
Yep, you got me there. A lot of effort! Had to research symptoms, behavior etc.
I'll definitely PM you if I write more! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Loved it!! It was so sweet and Asad is so cute 😳


Thank you so much for reading and liking it! 😃

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