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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Awesome + cute os...👏😃

Just love it...😊

Want to know more about them plz update one more part about it...😳

Just love it really want to read more plz continue it...😔😉

Plz plz plz one more part about there relation or married life...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

zanutix, you are a very gifted writer. I love the characterization . Its fresh and original. Asya displayed sweetness and vulnerability. I am on the verge of stalking your threads! Do pm me!


Oh My God, that's high praise. 😳
Thank you so much for liking my characters!
And yay, I'm gonna get a stalker! 😎
I'll surely PM you if I write more.

Once again, thank you so much for reading and liking this OS. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: -Roshna-

Zanutix, this is just beautifully written and flows so very well. Loved reading this OS. Please, please do write more!

Thanks a lot creating this lovely story!


Thank you so much Roshna! 🤗
I'll do PM you if I write more.
You're welcome! And thank YOU, for reading and liking it! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Linnet

Awesome os


I really felt that I was

Enjoying the rain😭

Love it

Keep writing

😛


Thank you so much!
But why crying? Did not like the rain!? 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you! 😳
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Originally posted by: Prashni

Beautiful read! ⭐️


Thank you!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

loved it.simple and sweet


Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: SovaSana

awesome piece of work

it is very well written with so much meaning
if possible do add one more part


Thank you!
I might not continue it, I'm sorry!
Too busy this year. 😕

Anyway, again, thank you so much for reading and liking it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome + cute os...👏😃

Just love it...😊

Want to know more about them plz update one more part about it...😳

Just love it really want to read more plz continue it...😔😉

Plz plz plz one more part about there relation or married life...😊


Thank you! 😃
Oh My God, it'll be difficult to take out time for it!
But, now I'll have to think about it.

Once again, thank you su much for reading and liking it! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

This. This was what I was going on about yesterday!!! The whole morning dew and the first light at the break of down..drizzling sunshine! That. That was what I meant.

You weren't kidding about the surprise. You weren't.

I had an inkling when you described him that he might be autistic, the same way she felt something was amiss in the picture. There's no point raving about your talent when it comes to style and writing. It's evident.

So I shall continue to revel in drizzles and sunshine. 'Coz in awe I am of this heartmeltingly warm and fuzzy piece of sheer brilliance. No, there is no such word as heartmelting. But maybe by now you ought to get yourself a copy of Farz's Concise Dictionary. That word exists.

See what I mean when I say that I CAN discuss love, an discuss only, but you're the ultimate craftsman. Your craft is pure love. Wohi, faiz wala love.

I have in the recent past been recipient of beautiful dedication and mentions by amazing writers. However , I dare say, that, this is the first ever, a story in its entirety and wholeness is solely and purely dedicated to me, with my full chosen name mentioned. The human in me is overwhelmed with the special and most appreciated thought while the reader in me was more taken, or rather, was completely floored by the paradoxical title of this masterpiece, I knew from the get-go that this would be nothing short of a grand masterpiece (redundant, but most apt) and I was happily proven right. For this is a work of sincerity and blissful happiness (again redundant, but can you stop complaining).

You're not a cynic. You're not. Please tell me you're not. I need to know.

And no, my thug side is happily watching from afar. Ever since you've unleashed the human in me, it insists on staying. We'll see for how long.

But nutella stays. Coz chocolate love aphrodisiac fuzzy warm drizzle and sunshine they're are a team. A kick-ass team. The A-team.

Beautiful story by an even more beautiful soul in a beautiful body with a brain and a beautiful mind. I assumed the beautiful body bit. I highly doubt you look like Ursula (from The Little Mermaid, you doink) so yeah.

I love you. No, not the lal ishq type. Or the faiz wala type. This is the zehnaseeb kind. (no, nothing to do with Siddarth Malhotra). So now you know.

Asad is adorable or what. Does he remember her from the first time?


Kdone.


Smile. Blushes. *looks around* Mwah. *runs away shyly*


You know, the first thing that came to my mind when I read your comment was, that I'm glad I dedicated this Story to you, who got its essence, its paradox, and could read between the lines (like a true poet. Farz, admit it, will ya?)

I'm gonna keep my Nigga self aside, and it will be just 'Zan(u)' talking to you today.
YOU! You have made my human self come out too. And it won't go back any soon.

Just so you know, I already have a copy of Farz's Concise Dictionary!
So I get your vocab.

@bold - You wanna make me cry? I do not believe in coincidences. It was just a turn of events, that I happened to post it while you were in one of your moods. A play timed perfectly by the Universe. This is the primary reason as to why you could relate to it.
(If you know me the way I think you do, then you must be knowing what I'm talking about.)

I agree to disagree. This is not a masterpiece. But I do admit that it has left me pleased with myself. I never thought I could grow so much as a writer, from witty-go-crazy to a more calm-and-composed one. So yeah, it might be good, but I can still do better. Everyone can always do better.

You doubt that I'm a cynic? If yes, then you must know that I'm not.
Every character in my stories gives a sneak peek of a tad bit of me. Did you find Zoya cynical?

Nutella ain't no going anywhere Nigga. It's freaking immortal! (See? The thugget is back. Hail the Nutella.)

I'm no Ursula! And you are free to doubt my beautiful body! Let's just say, that I'm happy you assumed so! 😆

Asad knows, but finds it more appropriate to acknowledge her with the second name instead.

I love you too Farz. Thank you so much for leaving such an amazing feedback. Its not only overwhelming, but it's also inspiring. So thanks for that. Here's a mwah from me!


*Heart melts*

This one's for you -

Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago

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