Asya ff: REBORN - ON HOLD

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Hey guys I'm starting a new forum which I will be writing simultaneously along with my other forum childhood friendship into love. Hope u guys will like this one!!
Prologue:
Zayd and zaara loved each other a lot. They both had no family other than each other.
One day:
Zaara: zayd, tumhe prove karna hoga ke tum mujhse Bahut mohabbat keparte ho!
Zayd: teek hai, par kaise?
Zaara: kal pure din tum mujhse baat nahi karoge, call nahi karoge, mujhse nahi miloge... In short kal there should be no mode of communication between us, ok?
Zayd thought for a while.
Zayd: umm... Ok!
Zaara: aur ha day after tomorrow, subha ko mere ghar aana. Ok?
Zayd:ok!

So tomorrow, for the entire day there was no mode of communication between them. Day after tomorrow in the morning, zayd went to zaara's house. He rang the doorbell a few times, but no one opened the door. When he twisted the handle it opened. He walked inside.
Zayd: zaara?
There was no reply.
Zayd: zaara??
He went to her room and opened the door. He was shocked at what he saw. On the ground lied a lifeless body of zaara.
He ran towards the body and picked it up in his arms. He burst out into tears. He saw a note lying next to zaara's body.

Mujhe maaf karna zayd... Maine tumse ek Bahut badi sachaai chipaayi! Aur wo yeh hai ki mujhe cancer hai. Mujhe yeh baat kuch mahine pehle pata chali. Lekin maine tumhe yeh baat bataana nahi chahti thi kyunki tum khamoka pareeshaan ho jaate! Maine socha ke jab mere ilaaj hojaayega tab main tumhe bataoongi!! Lekin mere cancer akhri stage mein pahunch gayi!! 3 din pehle Doctors ne mujhe kaha ki main ek, do din mein definitely Marne wali hoon! Isi liye kal Maine tumse kaha ki don't communicate with me agar tum mujhse mohabbat karte ho tho! Aur mujhe pata tha ki tum Aisa hi karoge. Tho how u were yesterday u will have to behave like that par farak sirf itna hai ki aise tumhe apne pure zindagi karna hoga!! Iss janam mein tho main tumhare nahi ho saka zayd! Lekin main tumse vaada karti hoon ke aanewaale har janam mein main tumhara ho jaaongi !!

Main hamesha tumse mohabbat karte rahoongi zayd... For eternity. With love,
Tumhara zaara...

He burst into tears once again and hugged zaara's lifeless body. He went to the bar and didn't come out until he was totally drunk. He sat in his car and started driving thinking about zaara. The. Suddenly a huge truck came in front of his car and he met with an accident. Zayd died on the spot.


Zayd and Zaara were reborn as Asad and Zoya . So will they unite in this life?



Thx guys for reading it... I know it's a short chapter but I could only type this much! Hope u guys liked it pls give ur feedback!

Chapter 1: above
Chapter 2: page 2
Chapter 3: page 3
Chapter 4: page 5
Chapter 5: page 8
Imp. Note : page 12
Note : page 14
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start lasya
it was a emotional beginning
update soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting!!!
Zayd Zaara reborn as Asad Zoya!!!
would love to know
Hw will dey meet??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome.
amazing.
spell bound
loved the concept.
plz
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plz continue soon.
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting...story pls continue soon
Pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds intrrestin waitin for an update soon.😃

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Chapter 2:
26yrs. Later...

Farooqui home:
Shireen farooqui is setting the breakfast table.she calls out for her children.
Shireen: Zoya, ayaan, haider neeche aao breakfast thayar hai!!
Zoya: aa Rahi hoon ammi!
Zoya came running down the stairs. She went and hugged her mom.
Zoya: good morning ammi
Shireen: good morning beta! Vaise tumhare wo dono bhaijaan kaha hai?
Zoya: god knows! Abhi dekh ke Aati hoon!
She went up the stairs. She opened the door to Ayaan's room. She saw him sleeping with his head out of the bed, legs on the pillow etc. etc.
She went towards his ears and screamed.
Zoya: abbu, Ayaan bhaijaan is still sleeping.
Ayana woke up startled and scared.
Ayana: nahi nahi abbu! Zoya is lying. I'm awake, I'm awake!
He turned to zoya who was laughing out of control.
Zoya: Bhaijaan aap abbu se itna darte kyun ho?
Ayaan: ha ha! Tumhare liye yeh Kenna bahut asaan hai Akhir ur daddy's girl na!
Zoya: vaise yeh Sab chodo bhaijaan. Aap na jaldi se thayar Jo jaayiye humein airport jaana hai!
Ayaan: kyun?
Zoya: Allah Miya, what's wrong with u? Bhulgayi? Aaj Abbu vaapas aa raha hai!
Ayaan: oh ha! What's wrong with me!
He said hitting his head.
Zoya: yeh savaal tho main apne aap se har roz puchthi hoon!!
Ayaan: Kya kaha tumne?
Zoya: shit!!
They both started running around the room like Tom and jerry. Hearing the noise, haider woke up. He came into ayaans room rubbing his eyes.
Haider: Kya yaar? Tum dono ke vaje se mere neendh kharab ho gaya!
Zoya: Accha hua me aap utgaye bhaijaan. Ab pls jaldi Thayar ho jayiye. abbu ko airport se laana hai!
Haider: accha fine!
Then he and ayaan went to get ready. They came down after a while. They had breakfast quickly and went to the car.
Zoya: gaadi main chalaoongi
Ayaan: nahi main
Zoya: main
Ayaan: main
And they both got into an argument.
Haider: bas!!! Gaadi main chalaoonga!!
Zoya and Ayaan made a face at each other. Zoya sat in front and ayaan sat at the back.
They left for the airport. After half an hour they reached the airport. They saw their dad Aarif Farooqui coming out of the airport.
Zoya: abbu
She screamed and ran towards him and Hugged him.
Aarif: tho how's my girl?
Zoya: awesome blossom, super duperbly fine
Aarif raised one of his eyebrows.
Zoya: Aap Jo vaapas aagaye ho!!
He laughed and walked with her towards Ayaan and haider.
He hugged both of them. They all sat in the car. Harder and Ayaan at the front and zoya and aarif behind.
Ayaan: vaise soya beans
Zoya: ha Dayan no.1
Ayaan made a frown.
Ayyan: I'm not Dayan no.1 or whatever ok!
Zoya: tho even I'm not soya bens ok!
She frowned and folded her arms.
Aarif: ayaan don't make soya upset.
Ayaan rolled his eyes and made a face. Zoya saw that.
Zoya: abbu Ayaan's rolling his eyes and making faces.
Aarif: accha? Ghar aao ayaan wahanpe time batata hoon!
Soya smirked.
Ayana: complaint box
He muttered under his breath. After an hour, they reached home. They rang doorbell. Shorten opened it.
Shireen: are aagaye aap log?
Aarif: ha
Then they all came inside. They sat down on the sofas in the halls.
Aarif and shireen talked about business matters and other boring things.
Ayana nudged soya with his elbow and whispered
Ayaan: pls abbu se bat Karo surf tum unhe mana sakte ho!
Zoya: hamesha main hi kyun?
Haider: kyunki ur daddy's girl! Duh!
Zoya rolled her eyes.
Zoya: abbu?
Aarif: hmm..
Zoya: interrupt Karne ke liye sorry!
Aarif: nahi beta it's ok, bataao?
Ayaan's and haider's jaw dropped. Whenever they interrupted aarif while talking , they would get a smack on their heads or an angry face.
Zoya: voh aapko pata hai na ki mujhe singing aur ayaan ko acting bahut pasand hai!
Aarif: ha, tho?
Zoya: wo ek movie ke liye auditions chal rahe hai! For singing and acting! Haider ke dost farhan uses film ka director hai. Tho he asked us to come for auditions! So Kay hum jaa sakte hai?
Aarif: afcourse beta tum log jaa sakte ho!
Zoya: wo actually, auditions Mumbai mein hai aur agar hum select hogayi tho jab tak film nahi bante humein waha pe rehna hai!
Aarif thought for a while.
Aarif: par beta
Zoya: pls abbu
She showed her puppy face that arid couldn't resist.
Aarif: ok tum log jaa sakte ho!
Zoya: yay! Thx so much Abbu. Ur the worlds best abbu!!
She hugged aarif.
Aarif: vaise auditions kab hai?
Zoya: agle hafte
Aarif: ok tho when will u go?
Ayaan: Parso ka flight hai!
Aarif: oh tho tumne tickets already book kiya hai!
Ayaan: ha because we were sure I'll say yes.
Aarif: agar main naa kehta tho?
Haider: Aisa kabhi nahi ho Sakta hai babu because even if u said no zoya apne puppy face dekar aapko mana Leti!
They all started laughing.


Hope u guys liked it. End of chapter. Next chapter asad's entry and asya first meeting. Hope u guys liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay i am first
jus lvd d zoya nd her dad bnd
ayaan nd haider brothrs yippeee
cant wait fr asad entry nd asya meetng
when wi b d nxt update??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamagvl45

Yay i am first
jus lvd d zoya nd her dad bnd
ayaan nd haider brothrs yippeee
cant wait fr asad entry nd asya meetng
when wi b d nxt update??

Umm... Probably at the morning!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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goin well cnt waite till they meet.😃

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