AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 3- chapters 9 to 13 - Page 65

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Superb Update!
Loved it.
Aafreen and Farhaan lost in
each other and Asad comes in and disrupt their moment.
I loved their fight in canteen...it was hilarious and poor Najma was handling both of them.
Their dance Masha'Allah it was beautifully demonstrated.
their cute lil fight at the end was so adorable...i jst loved them.
Update sooon.



hi...
thanks a lot..
i ma glad that you liked it...
Aafreen and Farhaan are the love birds 😉 but asad does not understand all these things 😆
yeah..najma had to tolerate them for two long days before she lost her temper 😆
thanks again.. i am glad that you enjoyed the dance 😳
thank you for your lovely comment...will try to update asap 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

awesome update
loved it thanks for the pm



THANKS A LOT..
I AM GLAD THAT YOU LOVED IT..
WILL PM YOU WHEN I UPDATE NEXT 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

loved the update

thank you..glad that you loved it 😛

asad and zoya fight no surprise there haha
tht is common and he is a pain without her and she without him

yeah..their day just can't start if they don't fight 😆

so he finally agreed to dance for najma haha

he would have agreed to dance anyhow, but he didn't agree before 😆

and still no talking during rehearsals just stolen glances

his poor eyes just couldn't leave her 😉

loved how he stayed back to help her but he is not talking to her

he is a perfect gentleman in that case 😉

loved the song and dance it was awesome

thank you once again..it was a thing which the readers when the first event was organized 😉

so them totally clueless to their feelings

yes, but they felt something...now let's see what happens 😉


he waited for her and he usually waits how nice
cant believe they r arguing for each other now really these two

for a change, they fought for each other.. that's quite a development 😆


hope they sort tht feelings soon and know what changed

hopefully 😉

continue soon

will try to update soon...
thank you so much for this lovely comment..
i really appreciate it 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinita459

Absolutely wonderful update. Thanks for using that wonderful song. It's my favorite. Loved their nok jhok and defending each other. You re doing an awesome job. Update tge next chapter sooner 😊



hi Vinita Di..
thank you so much..
i am glad that you liked it 😃
i love that song too 😳
great to know that it is your favorite too 😳
thanks again for saying this.. it has motivated me a lot 😛
will try to update soon 😃🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

awesome part!!

dance scene was so cute!!
it was not boring buddy!!🤗
keep going until I get what I want!!🤣
and ya keep them fighting I love it!!🤣🤣



hi appu..
thanks a lot..
i am glad that you liked it..
awww... 😳 glad that you found it cute 😳
ha ha... i thought it may get a bit boring 😆
really?? 🤔
what do you want?? 🤔😉😆
ha ha.. they will... 😳😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

Beautiful update...!!!!!!

song was so perfect & the whole dance scene was so cute...
like the last scene...their fight for each other...
loved it...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊



Hey.😛
thanks a lot...i am glad that you liked it...
yep, the song completely suited their present condition 😳
thanks for mentioning the parts that you loved 😛
will try to update soon...
will PM you when i update next 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago


thank you 😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
comment update fr part 10 on page 19
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comment update


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