Originally posted by: anushreemishra
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UnresOhk i read this update a while back but reserved my comment because I had so much to write that i needed a lot of free time...So since its a lazy sunday and I am free now my undivided attention is to update this comment😃😃"This is still not going to work. I'm still not signing those papers," Zoya murmured against Asad's lips, their passionate kiss fizzling down to a series of playful pecks as they caught their breath.Haha this is so typical of couples...Trying to get their way through payful intimacy but Zoya isn't ready to give in yet...way to go girl I can't imgaine how much self control you must have not to just give in to everthing Asad wants right now😉😉I love the playful pecks...they are so cute😳😳"You want to sign 51% of Dilshaad Constructions over to me... just to prove that you trust me?" Zoya probed, her voice breaking in the middle as emotions flooded her system. She stared at Asad in complete disbelief, yearning for him to look at her in the eye. But he didn't. He continued staring blankly at the ground, nodding once in response to her question.Omg so this is what were in those papers...Asad wanted to give zoya 51% of dilshad constructions...You know for a moment i thought the papers could be something related to business and properties but i didn't really pay a lot of attention but man signing of 51% just to show how much he trusts zoya is such a sweet and romantic gesture😳😳I am just as much in disbelief as zoya but man I am bowlwed over by Asad😳😳And i would be very emotional too had someone doen something like this for me so i can understand how zoya must be feeling...Before Asad could make any sense of it, Zoya launched herself into his arms, wrapping her arms around his neck in a bone-crushing hug.Awww😳😳😳This must be the first hug from Zoya that is purely out of love😳😳"Mr Khan, tell me what the other reason is," Zoya demanded with certainty, making Asad look up at her in surprise.I love how Asya's relationship has matured in the story...they have come to know each so well😳😳"If you sign these, you'll always be... around," Asad answered awkwardly, as he sensed Zoya stand up behind him as well. A long silence ensued, as Asad hoped Zoya understood what he was saying, and Zoya tried to understand what he was saying.
"In your life," Zoya finally completed what Asad had left hanging, as realization dawned upon her. Once again, she found herself having to guide Asad to face her, as she rested her hand on his upper arm. He turned a little reluctantly, his silence speaking volumes.
I had happy tears when i read these two paras...These lines are so freaking beautiful...I love how you never forget how complicated asad and zoya's characters are and how they never say directly what they really feel..But the way you make them express their feeling in each of your stories is so perfect and so much more beautiful that just a "i love you"...I see how they may never say i love yous ut their gestures and their complicated talks says so muc more than that..And this is something I love the most about your stories😳😳😳Each proposal is so unique,sweet and romantic😳😳
"Mr Khan, hamara nikaah hogaya hai. I'm not going anywhere, hamesha ke liye," Zoya assured him, trailing her hands away from his arms to rest on his chest. Asad found his own arms naturally finding their way to her waist, as he applied some force on it to pull her closer.
Chalo finally zoya says something she truly feels😳😳and man i love the way asad asks "sach"😳😳bring sout his insecurities and abandonement issues so well...
Little gestures speaking volumes,you are perfect at that😳😳
She felt Asad's hand cup her cheek, his fingers stroking her dimple affectionately before he dipped his head slowly and claimed her lips with his own. It felt just like a first kiss, one that didn't occur without the consent of the other, or in the heat of the moment, but one that was deliberate and slow, the kind that felt like it could last forever.
I was grinning ear to ear while i read this and i am still smiling while typing this and i swear my face is hurting already😆😆
The feeling of the first kiss😳😳Pure bliss and especially when you are in love
"I did last night! Remember? When we..." Zoya began to argue without thinking, in a bid to win their little battle of words. But saying that already left her on the losing end, as a blush began to creep across her cheeks, the memories of the night before flashing before both his and her eyes.
Haha zoya's foot in the mouth disease lands her in trouble yet again😆😆But man what a sweet trouble😳😳Even i am blushing remembering what they did last night...Waise since they are married in this story of yours how about a real SR😳😳
"Thank you Zoya," Asad whispered huskily, as Zoya finished signing, realizing internally that he wasn't just thanking her for obliging and signing the papers, but for coming into his life in the first place, and making it so much better.
First the nuzzling then his husky sexy voice..I am dead lol how is zoya alive man...she must be melting inside😳😳Man i love how beautifully you express what asad's thank you meant...I sw❤️ear no one makes words sounds sweeter than you😳😳
Haha man you just can't give an update without any twist can you😆😆So now Asad have proven himself to be a MCP and Asya are fighting again😆😆Looks like I will have to wait a liitle longer for the SR😆😆
Amazing update Green...It was the sweetest so far and that proposal or i would like to think it that way was just beautiful...Thanku for writing such a sweet and beautiful chapter😳😳
Love ya loads❤️
Anu!! Hahaha yes I try really hard to come up with like a huge confession scene and all, without either of them actually saying the word love even :p And I'm glad that the message gets through each time, like it did this time too (: Love you Anu, you're one of the main reasons I still wanna write (:
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