AsYa_KaBhi Drabble: You're The One I Need!

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Nice one. But i m confused. Is asad ghost now?

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Preeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
I LOVE your drabble Preeti and I love Gita's ending 😆

Thanks Tanvi. I loved her ending too😃

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GitaIyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks

RES
I am going to class. Will comment after m back. 🤗

UNRES

Did I make you cry? Like really? I am so sorry!😵

Oh! I love the last part! I am adding it to the main drabble as extension. Asad is really naughty & Zoya slept on their SR & she said Woh Actually...🤣

Okay, I have a big smile on my face right now & I am happy!😃🤗

Today is the official Hug day.😉

Keep smiling and be happy, always.

Thanks for turning your drabble into a happy ending wala drabble.😊

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Preeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA
Nice one. But i m confused. Is asad ghost now?

Yup...he himself didn't realise that he was dead until he saw the newspaper. That's how as per his POV, he tried his best to talk to her, but she couldn't feel his presence, until at the road, where she felt herself being pulled away from in an unexplained way as no one was around. She was missing him terribly and hence the breakdown.🥺

But if you want a happy ending, look at the edited story now.😉

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Preeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Today is the official Hug day.😉
Keep smiling and be happy, always.
Thanks for turning your drabble into a happy ending wala drabble.😊

haha. The credit goes to you😳

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Preeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: misshottytotty
lovely

Thank you😃

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Preeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...
Amazing (:

thanks😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

That was nice and a very good ending added later. Loved it.

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

beautiful!!
i am glad u gave a happy ending ...

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks

Yup...he himself didn't realise that he was dead until he saw the newspaper. That's how as per his POV, he tried his best to talk to her, but she couldn't feel his presence, until at the road, where she felt herself being pulled away from in an unexplained way as no one was around. She was missing him terribly and hence the breakdown.🥺
But if you want a happy ending, look at the edited story now.😉

i belive in happy ending. So thanks for the edited part