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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

okie sounds good ,,
because I thought she is saying that I am a very lazy author🤣

haha.. Ofcourse u r 😡 pehle tho aise nahi thi 😆

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

hey tis is amazing...

fabulous...

luv it...

asya are the cutest...

wow he gave her a sari to wear...

totally in luv with tis storr...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

oh so a hug and kiss on valentine's day...love their romance in hospital...nice update

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Bubble, Bubble Bubble!

Please No more trouble.

Let love raise in terms of Double.

Give us kisses, hugs and cuddle.

Asad and Zoya can giggle and juggle.

I really think it's time for them to Snuggle !😉😛

Update was Awesome and for that I Love you Bubble!❤️

( I am not giving you write ups for any scenes because I love all of Asad- Zoya conversations, Love the Valentine's gift and the promise for the next year)

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Read all the chapters in one go!
Loved them loadz!!!
U are an amazing writer!!
I really love this ff
The characters are so well described
The flow of the story is soo good
I was shocked at the part when asad called zoya "zoya asad khan" then in the next chapter I got to know she is married to him.
Wow!!
I really love ayaan zoya's convo in all the chapters.
I'm so happy zoya and asad's relationship is progressing
Asad's gifts and letters are really sweet.
Love the jealous asad as well😆
Zoya and asad hugged and he kissed her on her forehead yippeee that was the best part!!!
Ayaan proposed humera ahah lol I knew he loves her!
All the updates were beautifully written
Do continue asap
And plzzz pm me if possible :)

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rockstar_16

@rockstar_16

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

i loved it

my asad is getting better in romance day by day...nice..😉😳

please continue soon😉

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Dr Khan is hopelessly in love.. The red roses just proved it

As for Ayaan falling for Humeira.. Eager to see that relationship unfold.

Loved the update on the whole Iqra...

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

zoya in her excitement not realizing that asad does not have his shirt on..

and asad happy at this small achievement ..

six packs when she realizes about him..

he kissed her..she was confused

but expected the flowers and gifts from asad

so next year they are gonna celebrate in style...

thanks for the pm..

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

Zoya hugged Asad. Asad kissed Zoya🤪 time for double celebration🥳

Why this sehrish is agian coming into the picture😡

i have a negative vibe about it😕

Ayaan is in love with Humeria😳 he is dragging her sister in everything😆

i wonder what Asad will do now😳

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Amazing update...finally we get to see some hubby-wifey six-packed romance☺️😆...Zoya's so innocent and cute😳...Akdu is changing😃...loving Asad's notes🤗...

oh no,now what will this Sehrish do?...update soon😊

P.S.-I just saw your post stating this might be your last FF on ASYA😲...well,I just want to say that KABHI was,is and will remain ASYA for fans like you,me and many others...and stories like yours are the only place where I get to cherish them and relive those magical moments again and again...so pls keep writing dear...and if you are busy,we can even manage with one update a week...hope you will consider😊