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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

oh so dat was the reason she hugged him

oh black saree nice choice

nd ayaan is playing the guessing games

waiting for the next part

do update soon

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

amazing as usual ...
m waiting for d day wen zoya forgives asad ...n m luving dese steps which asad is taking ...
update soon
thnx for pm

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Bubbyyy u r becoming lazier day by day ek toh you update so late and itna chotu sa update! Dont torture us like this! 😭

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Awesome update buddy 👏👏

I loved it ❤️

But i'm really looking forward for the party 😃

Update soon please 🥳

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

awesome update👏😊

asya scenes were so lovely and cute😳

jealous asad was a treat to read😆

zoya seems to be falling pretty hard for her mr. khan

and asad has become such a good husband

i am enjoying very bit of this part where asad is trying to pacify zoya

plz do continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

awesome as usual !!
asya's first hug...perfect!!
sehrish ...where did she come from??
waiting for the next update...
continue soon

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
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That was awsome as usual Bubble.. So Zoya is excited about the upcoming operation.. Cool.. The way she went to Asad to share her feelings shows how slowly their relationship is growing.. Asad was so very happy and that dialogues about 6 packs.. was cute...

So he gifted her a black saree for the party.. 😊 Sherish's phone call.. hmm. so the much awaited scene comes up in the party.. ok waiitng for it.. 👏👏👏

The letter was also cool .. The way he expects them to be together happily on next valentine's day .. and he is expecitng gift from her.. how sweet .. 😊

'Ya Allah ! My Akdu Ahmed Khan is changing himself for me.' She said dramatically while wiping off the not-at-all-visible tears from her face.

This line was very cute..
So Ayaan is all ready to confess and our Akdu has not realized that he is referring to Humiera.. .. !!

When will you be updating next ??
And I read that you plan not to write or upload any further FFs after this .. Not fair Bubble don't do that.. I understand studies comes first .. but atleast one chapter per week.. 😭😭

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

haha yah many thing are going to come in the party and I guess I will take 2 updates for it ,,

hope u guys won't be bored of a random party 😆

Ayaan not only confessed but proposed aswell ,, and our Poor Asad has not confessed yet ,,

Most probably on 18th ,, I will start writing now to make sure I am not late this time 😉

No Devika its not about studies ,,

its about KSG ,, I don't feel like writing sometimes ever since he left ,,

and as QH's story is progressing I don't feel like writing at all

thats why sometimes I think that I should stop writing but I am not sure yet !

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover
Loved it
Hayeee kisss and huggg
Best update ever
Plzzz update soon
And yeah i m not good at giving long comments sooo
But really it was awesome update

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

Will try to update soon 😉

haha its ok buddy ,,

long comments don't matter to me but comments do 😳

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: -Maliha-
no... i have doubts...
your fifteen minutes: our 1 n a half hour...
you surely live on Mars...
No
on cloud 9 with yo baby🤣

Yah I moved to mars with him ,,

Actually I want to throw him from here just for fun 😎 🤣 🤣