ASYATS: MOMENTS OF CELEBRATIONS (PART 3 - PG58

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Divi.C
superb... N plsss do write 2 nd part...

Thank you😳

2nd part all depends on the readers😉

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
this was so so beautiful but im waiting for suhagraat! 🤣

no i am not a sex addict but i still want the suhagraat and i want the update of ur other story as well! 😆

Thank you😳

How did I know that you will say something like this😉 maybe because we think around the same lines😆😆

I'm not a sex addict either, I really want to add a suhhagraat but my readers are not co-operating😕...We need to get to 40 pages for SR...I want to gift it as a valentines day present

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
That was so cute Navi.

Love the way you described both Asad n Zoya's POV's. Loved the little naughtiness in the story and the whole load of emotions.

Loved it to bits. Please do add a second part. Looking forward to reading more here.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

Thank you😳 I'm so glad that you liked this...It was my first attempt without any mature content...

2nd part will come depends on the readers😉

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA
OMG! OMG! OMG! What a superb story.

I just love the way u describe ASYA POV. Everything is so perfect.

Love the convo btwn ZoHu and the moments with Najma. So beautifuly written. Love the way u describe the functions in flashback with Asad and Zoya's POV. The moment when Anwar said those words to Asad is beautiful.

Zoya and her craziness a treat to watch. She get worried everyone. Pakka dramebaz. This story is full with little naughtiness and load of emotions. But i just love it.

Please continue it soon. Waiting for next part and ASYA SR eagerly.

Thanks for pm. Do continue soon.

Thank you😳

Your comment just made me so happy...😃

I'm so glad that you liked this...I thought I was going overboard with the emotions😕

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: halima_zaka
v nyc

Thank u😳

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome Os...👍🏼

Just love it...😊

Thank you dear😳

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: pinky06
res..

Unres

Wow navi this was beautiful😊

Just loved it...

Loved humi and zoya s convo...n tamatar is sp sweet...Allah Kare sab ko aise friend mile..

Wow this asad is so naughty...his tameez n tahzeeb went out of the window😆

And both asya R sooo adorable...

Aur,aur I loved the way dilu saud zoya knows karate😆

Buddhu Ahmed khan?😛

Totally loved this os...

And I want another part...hawt part😉

Love

Pinky😊

Thank you pinky😳

I'm so glad that you liked this one😳 Your comments always brightens my day🤗

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Alai123
Awesome OS 👏
Continue soon!!!

Thanks for the pm😉

Thank you😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

even i dont have a valentine thats why wishing all my friends here and everywhere!!

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Zanutix
Wow.
That was so beautifully written!

I could visualize every little scene, especially the Mehendi Ceremony's.

I wish the EXACT SAME things happen on the show as well.

Bravo! 👏

Thank you😳

You are such a sweety for saying such nice things😃

You are the first person that has said that they could visualise the scenes and that has made me so happy because it means that I actually did something right😳

The show will be soo much better than this😉 but feel free to watch and then comment again😉

Thank you for taking the time to comment🤗