#WeSupportKSG |AsYa FF| Destinies Intertwined, Thread # 5 - Page 84

Hey Fari... That was a splendid update... Apologies for late comment.. I did read earlier but realized now that I had missed out commenting 😭 ...

Coming to the update... I have been telling you earlier also that you are a very good hearted person with equally beautiful thoughts which we get to see in your writing... 😊 ... The full shopping experience was lovely... I loved the scene were Asad got hurt because Zoya did not want him to buy her the necklace... Later Zoya realizing her mistake n the way she requested him to buy was adorable... I also loved the scene where Asad pitched in to take her measurements... 👏 ... Asad is ready to pay thrice for the saree which she liked... 😃

Finally the last scene ... Asad got to know that she does not want to leave... Cool 😊

On the whole ... A very lovely and sweet update...

Was trying to check about the update... Plz don't spoil your mood for unnecessary things...I have read this FF multiple times ... Am sure many of them agree 😊 ... So please cheer up.. Eager to read more...

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hey Juliet 😳

First of all, thank you for taking out time to skim through my thread. I find it quite a tedious task 😃

And yes, I am feeling low but it doesn't have much to do with that one comment. I am feeling low because I can't write these days 😕 I actually sit and stare at the few lines I've written for ages, then log in to FB, thinking I'll come back and complete it and when I do return, I'm still stuck. So yeah, that's what is getting on my nerves 😒

I really wanted to give an update this weekend but I couldn't write. It's like I WANT to, but I CAN'T and that frustrates me 😡

And yes, you're right. I know each chapter has its plus and minuses. Every chapter can't be brilliant, some are bound to be lousy as well 😉 And the thing is, even I want to end this FF now but I can't put an abrupt stop to it na. There are still days left in their one-month deal and I can't ignore them (Can you believe I've actually kept a count of all the days of this one month 😲)

So yes, I'm trying the best I can. I hope I don't ruin this FF when it reaches its end because that's like the worst fear of mine

Thanks for your comment!

Dear Fari,

This was longg and awesomeee!!!!!

This was awesome!!! Ur sooo good!!! Please update soon!👍🏼

Fari, where u 😡

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

@bold - sound familiar fari? 😉🤣

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Fari, where u 😡

Where is the update, now lala will not come to u now 😡😆

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Hello...i am one of ur silent readers because i always read from my phone ( i promise i always hit the like tab) thou i have taken the time to comment once or twice on what a wonderful story u have crafted and this story is one of the most popular stories on this forum and rightfully so. I was stalking ur thread hoping for an update when i realized that you are upset about your writing...but i wanted to say that writers always judge ourselves the most harshly and writers block and being unable to write happens to the best of us. So i just wanted to say if you can't write, Don't. Don't force yourself but writing is meant to be fun and enjoyable..and for students like ourselves, a way to relax.

So on that note, know that people love this story and wait for updates but know that you are a talented writer and words will come on their own.

Much love,

Reya <3

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Dear Fari,

We all go through such moments, Flustered Mind Blocks. Been there done that!😃 Still do it sometimes.😛 And no it wasn't lousy, the story still moved forward, We got to see Asad in a better prospective. His feelings for Zoya and how he got to know She didn't want to go. It was good, wont call it great. You have given spectacular great before so I only greedy for that.

But no I wasn't asking you to give an update cos you have to. This is your master piece you don't have to ruin it, You do justice to it the way you see it right. You can write it only once.

This is the way I write my stories, I write assuming tomorrow meaning sometime in the future, I will be able to pass it down to my niece or my daughter or a friends daughter who will call me aunt.

And when they read my FF they will be proud that what ever I wrote was not mediocre.

The brutal truth is one FF finishes a new one takes it's place on the forum but to a writer her writings are her manifests of imaginations that she has probably pondered for hours to present.

So it has to be perfect for the writer. This FF has to be perfect for you.

I talk too much! Oh Lord I do! I know! Shut up Juliet!

I like your honesty Juliet and how you write exactly what you feel 🤗 Even I feel the last few chapters haven't been that great but oh well 😉 I have to finish this story and not leave it midway and I know if I start concentrating on making every update perfect, I'll never finish this 😃

Oh I never thought like that 😲 That is such a good idea. Passing it down. OMG! I totally like it. I hope you won't mind me stealing it 😉

Oh yes you're totally right! The hours that have been employed in this FF are countless. I mean, apart from typing, there's so much to think of. So many times, the idea you have thought originally doesn't look that good anymore so yeah, it does take effort and time. And then there's the pressure of not disappointing the readers as well 😳

Anyway, I will give your story a try as well as soon as I have some free time on my hands. My mids are starting from Friday and I'm gonna be busy.

Oh I just think you just found out that I blabber even more than you? 😆