Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14*

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

awesome update😊👏

the way u portrayed asad's point of view was really good

poor zoya had to suffer so much

i wonder whats there in the letter?

do let out the mystery soon

and plz dont stop writing i really like this story

continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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arorasurbhi

@arorasurbhi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Awesome update
Loved it
what was in that letter which shocked zoya?
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Hey m back !!!
:D
Sorry didn't comment for last chap .
I m busy .
Exams u know !
N ya dear if u won't EDIT YOUR TITLE ...
How a person not in ur pm list like me know about the update.
U cn edit the title as ..
Asya FF : the Dark Shadows (16+) part 4 *B* updated 27/2/14
So we poor ppl get to know about the update ..

N dare u even think of discontinuing it !
K luv this story m the other one too ...
So now about update ...
It was short this time but I understand how it feels not getting fare response @
Bt if we don't know how will we express our views ...

Asad caring about Zoya ...
Ayaan n Zoya bonding ...
I don't like Aryan ...
N what eva happen Zoya cud nvr forgive him ...
I just want asya to be together soon !!!

AMAZING UPDATE LOVED IT !
INCREASE YOUR FF TEXT SIZE DEARY !!! :)

N YA TRY TO EDIT THE TIT SO THAT EVERY ONE GE TO
KNOW ABOUT THE UPDATE !!
:)

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Interesting story ,,

Loving it soo far !

Want to know more about Asad sooon ,,

the '7 packs' scene was funny ,,

Hope u will update sooon ??

Thanks for the pm !

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MsGrumpyShumpy

@MsGrumpyShumpy

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Ill tell you why u r not getting comments and likes

1 - u need to send pms to ur readers with links whenever u update

2 - u need to mention it in ur title wen u update for eg - part 6 on page ... this way people will know wen u have u have updated.

If u do this im sure ur likes and comments will increase

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Ur story is so nice...

Interesting ..

Snd buddy request to ppl here..watever u like...

Thn snd the link of the story...

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

nice update..

wat was there in that letter?

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

hi,

nice story...

asad way of taking it out on zoya...🤢...

but nice pace... waiting to know more

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933624

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

lovely.. wonderful..

so beautifully penned..!!!!

but why asad behaved like that with zoya..??😳

anyways.. keep writing..!! stay blessed...

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

lovely update...feeling bad for zoya (bechari)...you write beautiful...

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