Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14*

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madina12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Awesome update...
I read it all at one go ...
I mean u are really good...
So looking forward to ur next update

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Indianbuddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awe no please continue! I love this story! I love how asad gets affected by zoya. I miss that so much in qubool hai. I don't like the new asad though. I wish asad was still a little aggressive and angry. I liked that asad. I just love how asad is in this story and how he'll change probably change for zoya later on! Please update soon!

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Vrinda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

awesome updates

asad has been really cruel to zoya

now that he is realised this...

he allowed zoya to go

but why was in that letter from aryan that she cant do

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Hey sorry for the late comment

And once again an awesome udpate 👏

I loved it ❤️

What's in the letter that she can't do 😕

Contine soon please 😃

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Thanks for the PM suggestion! 😃

The prologue was Interesting! ⭐️

Will catch up with the chapters soon! 😳

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Chapter 1 was good! ⭐️

Love your depiction of Zoya and Aryan's relationship. ❤️

The narration of their childhood was heartwarming, him providing to all her needs and wants. 😒

Lovely writing! 😊

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Chapter 2

Great chapter! 😊

AsYa meet and there's attraction! 😳

Zoya drooling over Asad's abs! 🤣

There were 4 confusing factors in this chapter: 😕

The time of day of the meeting;

Where exactly did they meet for the second time in the house;

Where did Zoya get clothes from and;

What Asad was wearing when they met for the second time and the last scene of the chapter.

Nevertheless, interesting FF. ⭐️

Edited by Prashni - 11 years ago

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Chapter 3A:

This FF is dark but, Asad's behavior 😒

Hope Zoya brings out the human in him soon! 😳

Chapter 3B:

Anwar served Zoya milk in the room, why didn't he inform her that the room belonged to Asad?

AsYa's interactions in this part were really cute! ☺️

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Chapter: 4 Part 1

Good update! 😃

This is really interesting! ⭐️

But Asad physically abusing a women. 😲 😒

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Chapter 4: Part 2

Lovely update! ⭐️

I don't like Ayaan! 😳

Looking forward to the next update! 😃

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