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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: eshita.kabhi



most prbbly today...n if not... deffo 2mrw :)


Kk vl b waiting fr ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is totally fabulous...
luv it...
wonder why is asad treating zoya so bad...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hurya112

plz update soon😳



it will be up soon
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Posted: 11 years ago



FIFTY SHADES OF ASAD AHMED KHAN : PART 2

To say these days had been like any other normal days for asad, would surely be an utter lie. Inspite of following the similar schedule, asad knew he wasn't being himself. And he hated it. Apparently The reason for his sudden commotion in life was this certain 18 year old zoya farooqui. Asad didn't know what was there in this girl which always made his entire body tensed and rigid. He was not stupid to overlook the strongest physical attraction he had felt till date, for her. For heaven's sake , she was still a teen and 8 years younger to him! It made no sense.Such bizarre and uncanny feelings frustrated him till no limits. But in addition to his aggression was his fear.. Fear of not being immune to such feelings. Fear of being aware of the presence of his heart, which he thought no longer existed because everytime she was near, his heart missed a beat. And zoya's constant reddening of cheeks and her shy smile did not help either. Zoya , in such short span of time had become everyone's favorite in office. Though he maintained his i-don't-give-damn to -what-you-do persona, asad observed how her laugh had become infectious in khan enterprise. Zoya loved making people smile and was full of life. Asad was becoming an acute observant. Right from getting up in the morning till the time she was back in bed, whatever zoya did, Asad was fully aware of. His eyes would check out' zoya in-n-out n would spellbound himself everytime. She, despite of being 18 was beautiful and stunning. Her most beautiful outfit was her charisma., her prettiest accessory was her smile and the best pair of heels was her confidence. Asad was in awe of her' ? Well not yet, but Keeping the response his body gave aside for a moment, he certainly was impressed. The proximity at times would make asad go hard and he knew, he was losing it. He knew he had to get a grip on himself or else he would have his way' with her anytime soon., And the best way to do it was to change zoya. To curb her life, To take her most priced possession; her jovial and ebullient nature. Forcing himself to realize that zoya was no Special and was just a key to the success of his new mission and making zoya realize that he wasnt good. Instead, he's a fiend.

Eventually, asad turned himself into a frozen heart once again and the ruthless KHAN was back into action. He deliberately didn't let zoya come infront of him. Her mere look would create such havoc in him that his testosterones would run profoundly , making him guilty and angry at the same time. As days passed, things became worst! Asad felt this inexorable pull towards zoya and his sexual frustration had no bounds. He had dealt with many hot and s**tty bitches before but had never felt this way and the business loss which the khan enterprise just had, did no help. Asad in due course started blaming zoya for every thing. His belligerence just kept increasing every time he saw her. And that day, his anger crossed all the limits. But amusingly, his fury was not the sexual thwart' one as he would always refer, it was this sudden fire erupted inside him when he heard her murmuring about running away. He coundnt comprehend what his heart felt that very moment. The way he reacted, took him in surprise as well. Because Asad Ahmed Khan was NOT violent. Atleast not with women. He was a dangerously calm callous man.

Asad had not intended to slap her but it was too spontaneous even for him to understand. Later the night, when is anger caved in , asad went to the store room to find a hurt zoya lying on the floor, unconscious. Giving in for the first time in last 15 years, he went to her and cleaned her wounded head. "if something happened to her, Aryan would call off the deal" was the most rationalized reason that his brain could come up with to justify his act. Being the kind of man he was, asad however affirmed that no one would go to zoya for the next 48 hours. No food, no water. But he himself went to her every 2 hours after he was back from office. Not that he was worried, because he wasn't..he believed...it was just, she was needed in office! He would sit there for long minutes noticing and appreciating her features and waiting for her to get consciousness. But when after the 2nd morning, she didn't come up, asad sent anwar to give her a proper treatment .


It had been a week and things were back to normal. Except, for asad and zoya. Asad on one hand, was no more a physical torture' for zoya. Not civil, but not harsh too and zoya, well, she was now terrorized. Terrorized of the man with whom she lived under the same roof. Her all hopes of running away died. She had given up. Given up with her luck. Zoya was young but not immature. Aryan and her, had a rough childhood and situations had made her grow into a intellectual and mature girl. Her constant laughs and jolly approach towards life was not the mark of her infantile behavior. It was other way round rather. She always felt that life is too short to crib over past. Its all about moving on. She believed in goodness. Be good to world, and the world will be good to you' was something she always followed. But this sort of cruelty, she had never experienced. The hatred his eyes reflected that day, was too much for her to handle.It made a very deep blot and she could no longer stay normal with asad. Her only companion in the mansion was anwar kaka.



ooo




" Kaka, mr khan has given me off for a week. I really want to go to college today. Can i? Please?" Zoya pleaded. She needed to go out. This place suffocated her. She missed her life, she missed her friends..and...she missed bhai..

"Beta, ask asad. I can't let you go without his permission. You are not allowed to go any where except for office. Also, he gave you off because you are unwell, why don't you have medicine and take rest?"
Old man's heart went out for her. Her face that once had so much life had lost all its charm. She was pale, partly due to her illness and partly due to her misery. Anwar knew how much it was needed for her to go out and breath fresh. She didn't deserve it. But he was bound to asad. As much as he loved zoya, he couldn't let asad down. He loved asad too. And, the entire Staff was given strict instructions to not let zoya go anywhere.
"I really need to go kaka. Ok, you don't worry, I'll ask him."

ooo

Asad was in his study working on his project when he heard a knock.
"Come in"
Zoya quietly came in and stood beside the table, waiting for him to complete his work.
"What is asad?" He asked, without looking up. " Mr khan?" Zoya nervously whispered. Hearing her voice, asad looked up. He didn't expect her here in the early hours. Well, he never expected her to come to his door at any hour of the day. "Yes." He said.
"mr khan. Act. I wanted to go out and meet my friends just for few hours. Can I please go" Zoya spoke softly, fondling her fingers as her heart raced.
"N.O" Asad stated. Simple, and crystal clear and went back to his laptop. Zoya had no gut to question further. She silently started to go back when she heard him again.
"Not more than 15 min. miss farooqui"
"I promise sir."
"Take the car and 3 of my men will go with you. You better watch your steps."
"Yes sir"


ooo


" OMG ZOE baby! What has happened to you?"

Ayaan jumped from his bike the moment he saw zoya standing at the college gate and bear hugged her. She had called him from anwar kaka's cell and asked him to come. The only person she needed right now was her best friend. Ayaan and zoya shared a bond that no one could ever understand. They were not dating, but they certainly were a couple. Confused?

"Nothing, m just down with fever. How are you doing ayaan" She said, smiling genuinely after ages.
" Its all so boring without you . I was trying to contact you since so many days.. where was your cell?"

"Long story ayaan."

"zoya, I need to tell you something."

"Yeah say, m all ears."

"Not here. Your guards are keeping an eagle eye on us!" Now it was zoya's turn to get shock ed. She hadn't told anyone regarding her where about then how did he know? "How do you know?"

"Did you really think baby girl, that mujhe pata nahi chalega? Bhaijaan told me everything. But first come to our adda' where these junglis wont bother us! Man, they are huge! What do they eat? HUMANS?"

But hearing aryan's name, zoya's smile faded. No matter how much she tried to justify his actions, she couldn't deny that she was in this mess because of him.

"Listen zoya, bhaijaan wont be able to contact you. Its not safe. But he has given me this letter. Read it. It has all your answers. Just remember one thing baby, me and bhai are always going to be with you no matter what. Okay? Now gimme a hug and tc"

ooO

Zoya read and re read the letter. She coudnt do it! She just couldn't do it. No matter how bad asad is, she just couldn't do it!


...

NOTE

guys, I don't know why m not getting enough likes n comments?? is it that bad? Atleast tell me no where m lacking. I do not want to sound rude but if it continues, I may discontinue it. It takes 3-4 hours to make a good update, cant you guys give few. sec. to press the like button? I m grateful to those who have praised me. Its not about appreciating, its about encouragement people.

P.S

This is the first time I have done editing. Banner kaisa hai??Agar achha lage to do tell me.

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Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

brilliant update😊

my poor zoya😭..
continue soon😳
Edited by hurya112 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited :)
Awesome update!
Glad you added Asad point of view!!
Poor Zoya! She has to go through so much! I'm glad she at least has Anwar kaka!
Asad letting Zoya go was nice!
Zoya and Ayaan's part was sweet!!
Wonder what Aryan wants Zoya to do...?

Continue soon and thanks for the pm :)
Edited by ChamakChallo91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its a super update...you write really well...pls continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i would love to read more
it was new side of asad
this was totally different
banner s nice
thanks for pm
cont soon😃
Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love this so far, will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow
Awsum update

My poor zoe 😭
Asad is badly affected by zoya
I am so happy tht he alowed her to go 😃
Wht was in tht note 😕
Cont soon plz

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