Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1002

fabulous...

amazing...

totally luv it...

zoya is getting jealous...

she wants asad attention on her...

very very interesting...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Prashni Singh

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1003

Pleasantly delightful chapter! 😃

The realization of Asad's importance is unknowingly establishing its existence in Zoya - That was very endearing. ❤️

Loved the little detail skillfully added to Asad and Zoya's interactions, along with the distinctive emotions. ⭐️

"Zoya was feeling ecstatic. Humeira didn't play and Asad was going to play. Whatever he played, she didn't mind."

Thankfully!, So was I! 😳 😆

Another poignant chapter, in respect of the portrayal of AsYa's emotions. 👏 Also loved the fact that a select few supporting characters add substance to the narrative, Dilshad, Gaffoor, Rashid and maybe Ayaan, I don't know - his sits on the borderline for now - he exasperates me. 😵 [I know I'm a vain AsYa fanatic, especially an AAK one - so my feelings towards Ayaan are natural 😈 🤣]

Thanks for the heads-up on ''Aaj Kal Tere Mere Pyaar Main'' 😉

Great choice on ''Chaudvin ka chaand'' - Just downloaded it! 😳

The picture! The good old golden days of the 1st Indian Television show I emotionally invested in.

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1004

oh my that was AMAZING!!!

i knw that something was to happen at Asad's party bt this was so unexpected...even zoya's reaction!!!!👏

Asad...u are definitely a killer!! WOW! i could imagine KSG singing that...n that was mindblowing!❤️

im a little confused abt ayaan...he flirts with zoya yet he seems very much interested in humeira! wats with him?😕

very eager about the next update!

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1005

such beautiful moments...loved d guitar asya moments..cant wait for more..loving it

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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1006

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Sparks of shyness play on your lips...

Is it 'Sparks of shyness'? Google tells me that 'Tabassum' means smile. Maybe, soft, shy smile here. Would you translate 'Bijliyan' as sparks? I was thinking more in terms of lightening - momentary like spark but a lot more powerful. I know this being poetical lyrics, we can't do literal translation. But, fleeting sparks of soft smile which appears one moment and disappears the next makes total sense. I was wondering why would the poet use 'tabassum' and then 'bijaliyan'? Your interpretation of 'spark' is better.

This line was accompanied by his memory.

Hmmm!

When you say you'll tell me tomorrow... did you mean an update...? or...I don't know!

No...no...no update. Just the memory. And...ermm...I won't be able to post it today. Give me a day or two.😳

Hmm, I know... There will be confusion. There will be hurt. And yes, separation.

But you're right. Forget all that for now. The sunset and moonrise are too beautiful to be forlorn over...

I'm just...sad.

But it's a good thing. I like being this way. It shows just how great a craftsman you are, that you're able to ignite sparks within me, tabassum if you may...and yes, that old time feeling of content.

😃 Thank you.

Reading you gives me that.

Sukoon.

Rahat.

Haya. *just added this for effects*

Haya for effects 😆 Glad that you brought her here. And, Rahat, too. They reminded me of the QH that I had loved. Rahat and Haya. And, now because I am late in telling about that memory, I will give bonus of an OS with Asad and Haya.

Have I ever told you that I...love you?

No?

Hmmm.

Coz I really do.

And for that, and so much more-thank you. Dil se.

Hugs!

Thank you, again! 😳

Shall wait patiently for you tomorrow.

Uh...oh...one or two more days - a memory and an OS.

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: Noe123

Thank you. Just took me 7.5 years. 😆

I had noticed that the color changed, but didn't realize the significance of teal till you wrote it. What shall I do? How should I celebrate? Shall I buy myself a teal colored mug? I already have a black one from ages.😛

Go for it, the teal mug should complement the black one.

Black and teal is such a good combo, and I wouldn't have known it if not for QH. Sometimes it helps to see the colors together.

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1008

Awesome update... Just love it!
Loved the photograph session of Asad and Zoya.
I am really liking the way Zoya is getting affected.. she doesnt like anyone else to be near Asad or even tease him other than herself...

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1009

WOW just amazing writing Noe.. even though I've read the book .. when I read your adaptation, I swear it doesn't even come across to me because your way of writing makes it unique. So Zoya is now starting to feel something different from Asad. Asad's new feelings are visible, oops not sure if its new, or its been there forever and has been left unrealized, or if he realizes it that is to be seen. Humaira seemed annoying when described initially. But now she doesn't seem annoying, but is rather intriguing. Ayaan is an interesting character too. But Zoya is the one whose got the most amount of layers. Can't wait to see what you do with the characters.