asya SS punishment of love #2 part 12-17....link to #3 - Page 36

Created

Last reply

Replies

749

Views

75.2k

Users

90

Likes

956

Frequent Posters

ToughStuff thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



hahahaha, YA ALLAH i swear if i will hand over sofia to u then u will kill her badly😆, poor she
har koi usse nafrat karta hai😆

shez Kamini nt at all poor!!
She separated 2 lovers!!
a husband wife!!
And father from his daughter!!!!
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

shez Kamini nt at all poor!!
She separated 2 lovers!!
a husband wife!!
And father from his daughter!!!!


i agree
challo is she not a poor ohkay
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

plz dnt do dis dnt separate dem again!! ok nahi to aisa karo!!! Dey should think dat either of dem couldn't cheat eachother!! They should doubt dat something is amiss nd trying to sort out everything!!! Yaar iss se Zyaada dnt drag it!!! Remove Sofiya nw!!! U can get a track of everything getting cleared!!! Sofiya out of their house & lives!! Zoya staying with Asad bt giving him a hard tym!!! Because he ignored her alot 6 yrs back!! plz pkz


ara u r taking me wrong
the story which i have in my mind is already set, dnt worry u want see sofia more thn 2-3 times from now until the story is over
ToughStuff thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



ara u r taking me wrong
the story which i have in my mind is already set, dnt worry u want see sofia more thn 2-3 times from now until the story is over


No baby I m nt taking u wrong!!!
Is just dat i cant see AsYa separate & pained!!!
I just want dat 🤬 Sofiya out of AsYa 's lives!!!
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet


No baby I m nt taking u wrong!!!
Is just dat i cant see AsYa separate & pained!!!
I just want dat 🤬 Sofiya out of AsYa 's lives!!!


i can understand affu
everyone want asya together but i have a story on the base of which i had write it na so i will move in that way only😃
dnt worry at the end u will love sofia😉
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
salam all, please look below for the next part... specially dedicated to ...adin... and akaswan😳
hope you all will like it...😃


Part 15;-

that day was going to be another best day of asad because after sidra it was his sister whom he got back, he never ever imagined that he will spend some nice quality time with his sister again but it happened... Asad Ahmed Khan had spend the best days of his life in last 3 days, he had smiled whole heartedly... he was the one who asked for sometime from court but he was'nt sure what will happen next, at first he just wanted to spend sometime with his daughter but now he is praying for more, he wants his family to be complete again with his zoya, his sidra, his tamatar and his ami... he knows he have to work hard for it but if there are chances to achieve what he want then he can do it... he had'nt even thought that what he will do now but he had hoped for the best and had given everything in the hands of Allah, praying for the best

next morning

it was so early when sidra opened her eyes and then checked her mama who was in deep slumber, slowly removing her hand from her neck she got down of bed and exit the room, then taking slow steps without making any noise she went in the living room, checking the no from her hand she called him and he also receive it in a bell 'where were you sandy i was waiting for your call from last half an hour' he said with annoyance 'sowwy sowwy rabert chachu, wo mama was not looking so sleepy so i waited for her to doze off properly, otherwise she would have noticed me' sidra explained 'acha so what's the plan?' asked ayaan 'ummm so as u told me yesterday in our secret phone call that daddy birthday is the day after tomorrow so then i was thinking for a plan and now i am ready with a plan but i am warning you do think before helping' she said in a warning tune 'ohhh warning, so do u think u can do it without my help' he asked in a calm voice knowing she can't 'ummm no but i can ask maddy' she suggest 'no no no not maddy i will help you and i promise i wont do anything stupid' he said horrified thinking what will mohsin do if he came to know about all this 'why not maddy' asked sidra confuse 'umm wo its a long story i will tell u later sandy but promise me sandy tht u will not say anything to maddy' he pleaded 'hehe chachu u got tense, no i can't, don't you know that i can't meet maddy, dadi, uncle anwar, aunty zeenat and hamza bhaiya till next week' said sidra laughing a bit 'ohhh han i forgot' 'hehe chachu u r so bhulakar, daddy had given you the right name' she laughed forgoting about her parents who were sleeping 'wait what bhaijan call me bhulakar?' asked ayaan and sidra placed her palm on her mouth in shock 'ooops i told you, chachu please dnt tell daddy about it, i request you pleaseee' she said 'ohkay ohkay i wont' 'thank you' 'so listen the plan' and she explain her childy plan to ayaan in which he did a lot of correction and finally it was perfect so they decided to work on it from tomorrow itself...then slowly without making any noise sidra went back in room and slept hugging her mama

at 12;00 pm

it was a day like yesterday... zoya went back to her room after having breakfast while sidra and asad were having fun outside, asad forgot about taking her to his office but sidra did'nt remind him intentionally...it was 1 when zoya joined them for lunch... she was silently having her food while sidra and asad were talking a lot... while talking sidra told asad that she love strawberry milk shake the most and then don't know what happen to sidra so she asked asad about zoya 'daddy do you know what mama like to drink?' 'diet coke with pizza' answered asad without thinking 'wow daddy u are right and mama do you know about daddy' she asked looking at zoya who was already lost listening his answer, not feeling comfortable in this situation she excused herself and went in her room, sidra looked at her retreating back sadly 'daddy why you and mama don't talk to each other directly, why you both are not like rabart chachu and humaira chachi?' she asked sad 'nahe my jaan, nothing like that, let me go and check your mama, i promise that she is just tense nothing else' said asad assuring her and then he went to her

she went in her room and sat on her bed with her back facing the door, she closed her eyes and let her tears escape out from her eyes, she cried silently, it was turning more difficult then she imagined, this was not what she thought, it was getting harder with the increasing questions of sidra, she can now see what is going to come next, what can happen when she will leave this house and how will sidra react when she had to leave asad, she was shocked when asad answered correct, it was visible that she did'nt expect him to be correct, after all six years are not a little time, there lives had changed and he still remember her likes and dislikes, the day she came to this house she is trying to stay away from these weird feelings which were silently doing there work in her heart, only she knew what's going on in her heart and even now she can't deny for that love which she have for him but she can't even accept because she know that he betrayed her, whatever the situation is now, it can't change there past but the thought which is killing her right now is what will happen after these 7 days ... she was lost when she heard a knock on the door , she thought it would be kamran with food as she did'nt had her food properly, wiping her tears she replied 'yes'

asad entered inside and saw her sitting on the bed, her back facing him, he cleared his throwt to grab her attention 'zoya' he said and her eyes widen, she turned and it was really him 'can i please talk to you?' he asked softly and she nodded in response, he came and sat beside still maintaining a suitable distance 'wo actually mai... woh' 'can u please be a little fast?' she said irritatingly again listening the old phrase 'yes sure, woh actually i want a favor from you' he finally said 'what favor'she aksed confuse 'actually only we both know everything but sidra she don't have any idea about our relation and what had happened between us 6 years back so can u please behave nicely with me till u guyz are hear... sidra is sad seeing the rudness between us and i... i want my daughter to spend the best the days of her life till she is here, i want to save these moments for life time, i want to see her happy only but i can't do it a lone, can u please help me, please behave nicely with me, please try to be happy with me' zoya was just staring at the floor while he finished what he wanted 'ohkay i will do' came a reply from her still staring the ground 'thanks' answered asad and she just shook her head and when he did'nt saw anything else coming he stood up and left... she saw him leaving and then she sighed in relief

'daddy are we going for some outing today?' ask sidra sitting on asad's lap looking at him 'umm, where you want to go princess' asked asad changing the channels of t.v from the remote 'what about an ice-cream then at the theme park and finally then at a dinner?' came a voice from back and they both turn to see zoya smiling, asad just looked shock even when he was the one who asked her to be like this while sidra got down from his lap and ran to her mama... 'wow mama its a great idea, lets go then' jumped sidra in her arms 'ohkay lets go, chale asad' said zoya first to sidra and then to asad but he did'nt answered 'asad?' called out zoya 'asad' once again 'daddy' screamed sidra in his ear when he did'nt answer bringing him back to this world 'yes what?' he asked horrified and sidra giggled 'mama had made a plan, lets go, first we will go to theme park mama and thn ice-cream and thn dinner' explained sidra 'oh, yeah sure, lets leave then'... and after that they left... that whole day they enjoyed the way they planned... for asad it was like old days are back and zoya for her it was not just a matter of days the way she thought but she was literally enjoying after all she had dreamed many nights in past six years to see her family like this... and sidra it was the best moment of her life

they returned home at 10 pm and were really tired, after relaxing a bit on the couch zoya stood up to leave 'lets go sidra, we should go to sleep now, i am very tired' said zoya 'mama i want to sleep with daddy' said sidra 'oh... ohkay then go and sleep with your daddy, i am also sleeping...' replied zoya 'no mama u did'nt understood i mean, i want to sleep in daddy's room with you both' said she 'we both but beta i don't sleep there, i sleep in this room right?' replid zoya shocked 'but why mama, ancle and aunty sleep in one room, and chachu, chachi also then why you don't sleep in daddy's room' asked sidra confuse 'sidra don't force mama let her go and we will in our roon' interrupted asad and for which zoya was thankful to him but how can sidra not be stubborn 'no mama please please please come and sleep with us please' she pleaded holding her hand requesting sadly 'ohkay, chalo' zoya gave up 'yayyy' she jumped happily

inside the room

zoya settled sidra on the bed and hesitantly lie down after her, soon asad came out of the room after changing in his night dress but instead of lie down on bed he went and sat on the couch opening his laptop 'what are you doing daddy?' asked sidra 'wo actually i have a small presentation to make, you guyz sleep, i will sleep later' said asad and sidra nodded but zoya knew why was he doing... soon sidra started feeling sleepy and zoya caressing her head to make her sleep peacefully... she started scanning the room, she had spend the best time of her life here, she missed it but what confused her was that there was nothing related to sofia and it again brought the thoughts to zoya she looked at asad and found him staring at her only and not his laptop screen, there eyes met and they both lost in each others gaze not knowing what to say... the remembered there past and the best moment they shared

zoya felt tears in her eyes, remembering the time when she was in this room but the difference was that he was not far away from her but here after her and she resting in his arm

jaane kis modh pe le aayi
yeh zindagi main jaano na

asad who was still having some hopes was feeling restless, he had loved this girl his whole life and when she was here in front of him, so close but yet so far it was hard for him to control his emotion

dhadkano ki yeh bechainiyan
aye humsafar pehchaanu na

taheri zameen tahera hai pal

they both stared in each others eyes deeply, trying to have any answer which will make there upcoming problems easy, is there any way?

mann mein machi kyun hulchul
chuubti hai mujhko kyun dooriyan

why life is so cruel with them?

koi na jaane majbooriyan
majbooriyan
kabhi na sukoon aaya
kabhi na qaraar aaya
jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya
kabhi na sukoon aaya
kabhi na qaraar aaya
jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya


they were lost in each other, weeping silently when sidra woke as she felt that zoya had stopped caressing her head and her sleep was disturbed 'mama why you stopped, please do na i love it' bringing her out of her thoughts 'hmmm, han ohkay' replied zoya and then sidra looked at asad who was staring them only with her hand across her chest 'had your work done MR.KHAN' she asked raising her eyebrows, asad who did'nt understood what she meant as he was not doing any work just replied a yes 'ohkay then come and sleep with us na' 'what... ohh, umm yes i am coming' he replied and shutting his lappy he went and lied after them... soon the three slept with asad and zoya hugging sidra and there hand touched... it was indeed the best night for asya after six long years

i hope that you all liked it...
btw i am sorry if the song i used don't suit the situation well, actually i heard it in some serial so wanted to use it in my story
sowwy
do share your views
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
akaswan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
REES

Unres 😃

I'm very glad to see Asad happy

He really deserve that

I hope that his mother will forgive him soon too 😃

LOL Ayan is plotting with Sidra 😆

It was time that they talked a little

This Sidare is very smart ⭐️😆

Very good part little Sis👏

Now i'm looking forward for the next update 😉

Edited by akaswan - 11 years ago
KaBhiKiBasanti thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Reshu meshu

Hey that was so cute
Aww adorable
Very nice
Lovd it
Aww i love sidra
She is so cute
Aww so sweet how he wished fr a complete family again
N u sophia bttr go to hell or i m coming to sloce in so small pieces that u cant even see ur self wid a microscope
Oww how smart is sidra baby
So cutely she wwnt out tricking her mother so cute
Owwie i lovd d conversation btw ayaan n sidra
So lovely
Adorable bond
Hehe she is quite intelligent
Aw lovd how they both planned so cute
She is so sweet , lovd d way she reacted wen she said ow i said it
she is admirable
oh so cute , asad still remebers each n everything abt her
So sweet
Zoya n asad loves each odr so much
Just bcoz of this chudail sophia.. yuck
Asad is a lovely father
Just fr her he went n talked to zoya
Sho shweet
N zoya agreed
I hope these seven days brings them together
Hehe asad was in trauma listening the way ya was talking
Aww lovd their bond
Un knw wen i read dis story
I thot f this that they both sleeping together
So cute
N it happened
Lovely
Aw ty reed
Lovd zoya as a mother
The so g sequence was very nice
Hope everything gets cleared soon
Lovely
Cute
Sweet
Adorable
Wonderful
Sorry boring u wid my comment
Update soonish

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
ToughStuff thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



i can understand affu
everyone want asya together but i have a story on the base of which i had write it na so i will move in that way only😃
dnt worry at the end u will love sofia😉


I Can Never Love Sofiya!!!!
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet


I Can Never Love Sofiya!!!!


opps okay😃😆

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee · 7 months ago

Theme - Theme 1 : The Bag (Graphicer - WildestDreams) The Weight of Love The rain drummed softly against the glass windows of the airport, a...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster · 7 months ago

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".