AsYa (KaBhi) OS: Different Shades Of Love

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

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Aditi this was an S-U-P-E-R-B OS! I loved every bit of it! It doesn't seem like this is your first piece of writing at all! You write very well! <33

😆😆😆 Anyway, I loved how you portrayed each shade of love and described it! It was all very well written! 😳 I was so angry at Asad when he broke Zoya's heart, but then later on I felt so bad for Asad because he was so heartbroken and in so much pain! 😭😭 Haha the blood reports got switched up with someone else, feel bad for the other person. Continue writing more stories! I look forward to reading them. 🤗

Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was a beautiful OS, and indeed very very good for a first timer!

The past and then present were intelligently molded.

Love turned a ruthless businessman into a lovebird! 😃

Their first kiss was magical and so was their confession.

I loved the concept of 'different shades' , they were amazingly used.

Do write more in future, would love to read it!

👏

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

superb... didnt feels like u are writing for the first time

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Anu

@sweety003

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

This was superb...👏

its u r first piece of writing cant believe ...do write more

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome update..

that was so beautiful and colourful...

loved that their love moments with colour symbolizations...

happy with that ending..

I was shocked about asad at the beginning..

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Aww

Love the ending

Love it

Keep writing

Love

Linnet

😛😛

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

dat was fabulous..thnks for pm

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

It's a beautiful OS! Loved reading it!
If possible. ..do pm me for your next works on AsYa (KaBhi)!

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks
It's a beautiful OS! Loved reading it!
If possible. ..do pm me for your next works on AsYa (KaBhi)!

Thnk u so mch dear fr liking it
I ll surely pm ..js pls add me as a buddy

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Zanutix
That was a beautiful OS, and indeed very very good for a first timer!
The past and then present were intelligently molded.
Love turned a ruthless businessman into a lovebird!😃
Their first kiss was magical and so was their confession.
I loved the concept of 'different shades' , they were amazingly used.
Do write more in future, would love to read it!

👏

Thnk u ...thnk u so mch fr liking it