AsYa (KaBhi) OS: Different Shades Of Love

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: --Radhika--

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Aditi this was an S-U-P-E-R-B OS! I loved every bit of it! It doesn't seem like this is your first piece of writing at all! You write very well! <33
😆😆😆Anyway, I loved how you portrayed each shade of love and described it! It was all very well written!😳I was so angry at Asad when he broke Zoya's heart, but then later on I felt so bad for Asad because he was so heartbroken and in so much pain!😭😭Hahathe blood reports got switched up with someone else,feel bad for the other person. Continue writing more stories! I look forward to reading them.🤗

Thnk u so mch Radhika fr ur appreciation...i m really overwhelmed wid ur feedback...thnk u so mch again...n yes i ll continue writing fr sure...

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@nahsjdnusksmsj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Best os i have ever read...
Amazing

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Loved the title and the consistency of present with the past.😊

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Wow... It was awesome... Loved it... Keep wrttng... I must say.. Ur way of IF wrttng is vry gud..

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@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Long and very lovely! I love this idea, with the colors and "shades of love". Good job on this! <3

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Note: Please consider Karan Singh Grover as Asad here, because for me, he was the only reason to write a story on Asya, so it's a request to imagine only him as Asad here.

he will always be 👏