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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice character sketch...
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Interesting prologue
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Hey everyone, here's the first chapter. I guess, not many people liked the concept
😭 Did I lack somewhere? please read it once and gimme a chance to entertain you all. I wont disappoint, I promise. 😊
This chapter is for all those who liked and commented previously..

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SILLY SUNDAY



It was a pleasant sunday morning for Najma ahmed khan till she decided to read on the paper.

SUPER MODEL ZOYA SIDDIQUI, ALL SET TO TIE KNOTS WITH THE BUSINESS TYCOON ASAD AHMED KHAN'

Stated the headline of Times. "What the f**k! These Media people should be imprisoned for life for publishing trash like this..and I don't know why is it always zoe all the time" She said, Frustrated with the news.

"yeah right, this has been the third time they have linked up zoe with a guy" said tanveer.. "And you najma, You are banned from coming to the kitchen!"

She declared. To say tanveer was fuming, would surely be an understatement. She was furious.

"And I am banned because..?" Putting the paper down, najma faced tanveer and saw red. Her raised brow and clenched teeth were certainly not a good sign! Boy, what a start for a Sunday!!

"Oh! Did they just tell you that they would publish rubbish about zoe if I enter the kitchen?"
she tried joking and forcefully flashed her 32!

"Its not funny" Tanveer stated. Clear and simple. "I have been looking for the coffee jar from past half an hour najma! Where the hell have you kept it..?"


"Tannu.."


"Don't tanu me ok? You were the one who made coffee last night and the poor thing got disappeared!"

Najma looked up at her. Man she was pissed. Stupid brain,' why don't you just remember where have you kept that damn thing!' She chided her brain. now summon up what you did last night..came to kitchen, made coffee and...and..common...and...yeah, went to brush my teeth!!

"Oh I remember! Its in the washroom cupboard!"

She jumped excitedly. Long live her brain! She looked back at tanveer hoping for a praise on her achievement! Man she should praise her, its not everyday her brain works! Wait, did she just insult herself? Pssht, ofcourse not.


"Tanu m certain that I didn't put the jar inside your mouth. You can close that thing. Or, should I recheck it?" She giggled. Exasperated, tanveer walked towards the washroom.

" if only she was not my best friend..!!"



Tanveer and najma were best friends since the time they learnt to walk. And from past 3 years, they were roomies as well. Zoya however, joined the group in 3rd standard and since then these three were joined at the hip. Inseparable as they say. Their group was fondly known as the tinky winky'. Zoya being the youngest was the most pampered one.



"I think we should go n meet zoe before she blows every thing up in anger!" Suggest najma, after taking the last sip of her coffee.

"dear najma, I wish you had real eyes. Its raining cat and mouse, how are we supposed to go in this weather? Who do you think we are..superman?"

Tanveer who was still mad at her, snapped back.

"Oh god tannu. Superman too gets wet you see. That red cloth on his back is of no use I tell you!"

Tanveer's eyes popped out. Was this girl for real?



...



Zoya sat at the corner of her room and listened to the rain. Oh! How she loved it. A cup of hot chocolate and rain, was all she could have asked for a Sunday morning. But today, it saddened her. The darkened clouds and their rumble, no more fascinated her. She felt as if even the nature was crying on her grief. She once again looked at the beautifully printed wedding card which had her name along with her would be husband. She sighed, again, and kept it back. this is no dream' she thought. Its her wedding tomorrow and there's no backing off.
It wasn't like she didn't want to get married, ironically, she was the only one who wanted to get married in tinky winky but only after falling in love with her price charming.
Zoya was a girl who was brought up like a princess and she lived a fairy tale life. She believed that some where in the world lived her prince charming who would come on a white horse and take her away. But obviously not like this. He wasn't supposed to come and right away marry her! Damn, where's the dating part? Hell, forget dating, she never ever saw the man who was going to be her husband in less than 24 hours now. But, being the best daughter, she couldn't refuse the only thing her abbu asked in her 25 years of life. She was ready to give up her dreams. she would marry this man that her father had chosen for her. She would try really hard to make it work. Yes she would. How bad it could be after all, being mrs. Asad ahmed khan.

common zoya, breath in.. breath out..'

She leaned out of her window stretching out her hands to catch the rain drops, preparing her self for this new phase of her life.


...


Asad came out after having a shower and picked his cell.

"Yes haidar, Fix my meeting with mr. meheta the next day I reach new York. "

"Asad, are you sure you want to do this?" Asked haidar, asad's right hand in business and his best friend.

"We have already talked about it. So please.."

"But why on earth are you doing this..? Why to bring the poor girl in this. Marriage is NO game asad. You would spoil her life!"

Asad smiled as he heard him. " Marriage IS FUN haidar. But don't worry, m not a monster. I wont make her suffer. She will be treated the way she should be.. and after m done with my deal, I'll divorce her."

He cut the call and headed for his break-fast. It wasn't like he wanted to get married, He had to get married. There was no other choise. He couldn't care less who this zoya siddiqui was, as long as she was gaffur siddiqui's daughter.


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Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
awesome dear.. 👏
Loved that tannu,najma,and Zoe R best friends...
Hmmm asad marrying Zoe,already planned divorce😆
And like Zoe dreaming abt prince charming...but I know asad v ll b way much better..
Cont soon😃
Edited by pinky06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Nyc update!!
Tanveer, najma & zoya are best friends!!
AsYa haven't seen eachother!!
Zoya marrying for her Abbu!!!
Asad for deal!!! would divorce her after dat!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...😊
zoya tamater n tannu r best friends grt choice 😆
lol asad wants to maary zoya n then divorce her 😲😆
gaffur is always bed man 😡
asad is going to new york 😃
update soon n thanks for the pm...😉
sorry for late comments 😃
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awesome update But too short...
Aww najma is soo cute... She forgot coffee jar in bathroom 😆
Zoya & asad didn't saw each other...why as ad want to marry zoya????
Continue soon
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Edited by arorasurbhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Oh so asad want to marry zoya for fun and just going to ruin her life by giving her pain and pain and hurt.
Then when is fun with this TOY over he divorce her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
They both dont know eachother great
It's going to be interesting
Continue soon n thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Nice update
Asya going for marriage even they don't know each other
Zoya is ready for her father but
Why asad ready for marriage.
Maybe something missing which will clear in next updates
He will start this marriage as deal but
Fall in love with zoya (think so)
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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