DECEITFUL VOVES : Asya ss Banner update and A/N

DECEITFUL VOVES


Prologue:

Zainab siddiqui enterprise :



"You see mr. siddiqui, m not very pleased to come all the way from New York "

Sitting next to Gaffur siddiqui and sipping his black coffee, spoke the most influential man of the country. Dressed in a black grey three piece suit, Asad Ahmed khan was the epitome of perfection. A name that was to be remembered for ages in the world of business. He was the man of ideals and professionalism. Asad Ahmed Khan ; The Bachelor God as they say was an ingenious and cunning businessman. Business losses and rivalries were certainly not HIS cup of tea. He was the best, and he knew it.

" M sorry mr. khan. that you had so much of trouble but m afraid. Your arrival wont be of much help for ZSE sir. As you know, we are too much in-depth and are currently facing a major financial crises. Give us few more months and i'll repay Dilshaad constructions. "

Gaffur Siddiqui, owner of Zainab siddiqui enterprises, pleaded the man in black.. And of course, the callous man was loving it to bits. It had been ages since he was waiting for this day. GAFFUR AHMED SIDDIQUI at his mercy, pleading for his survival.

"And how exactly would you do that..? " He asked.

"ZSE is joining hands with mr. Rashid ahmed khan for a deal. And if everything goes well and we get the contract, m sure the profits will be high. "

" Siddiqui sahib, The old horse in the stable always yearns to run." The corners of his lips curled up in a devil smile, relishing the sweat beads on his forehead. " You know, I don't believe in 'If things go well' M always certain about my work and I would appreciate if you too follow this. and as far as janaab Rashid is concerned, he is not very clean with his records. I hope you are not at the wrong path. anyways, i'll give you three more months. Pay me 2 million dollars you owe or handover the company." His voice was calm and face, impassive.

"Thank you! Thank you mr. khan. M really obliged. I hope you have a great visit." Gaffur wiped his sweat and forwarded his hand for a handshake thanking him whole heartedly. Little did he know that it was the beginning of his doom. Asad Ahmed khan never obligated.

"Well, mr. siddiui, there's a small stipulation I have."

"M all ears sir. Go on. "

Asad smirked as he played his last card for the day

"Since I do not trust anybody except myself, I will be marrying your daughter zoya till you repay me"



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Hey folks,this side eshita. M pretty new here as I didn't know about india forums and got to know recently. ( No laughing 😛 ) And ofcourse, m a huge EX Qubool hai fan. No offence to raquesh or his fans, m sure he's doing a great job but m a ksgian since ages and its not good to ditch my poor karan. So to relive qubool hai, I have come up with new Asya concept and its a short story. As I have already said, i'll be keeping karan as asad but you are free to choose any one.

N yeah, kyunki m new, I have no friends here. 😭 but m sure i'll make great friends. what say guys? 😳

If you liked the prologue and you want me to continue, please please pretty please do leave your reviews and press the like buttons.

Saayonara! 😊


Character sketch : Page 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3897972/deceitful-voves-asya-ss-banner-update-and-a-n?pn=3

Chapter one : Page 5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3897972/deceitful-voves-asya-ss-banner-update-and-a-n?pn=5

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first of all, yayyy.. meee first...

now coming back to the updatee.
. it was amazing!!!
i reallyy liked the way u described asads power and personalityy...
and and and asad marrying zoya...
it was woww...
hope to seee ch 1 sooon..
if u do pms (Private MessageS) plzz add me also to ur pm list!!



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Hey amazing start. Do continue soon.

awesome update

Welcome to the forum dear...😃

loved it.

Very nice update. Concept is nice. But i hope u dont make it a dark story by showing that asad hurting zoya for some kind of revenge. Pls dont make it this kind of story. I m sick now with this type of story where every time asad hurting zoya and zoya forgiving him. So as a reader can i expect some thing new. I hope that i dont make u angry with my comment. If i made u then i m sorry. I know it is your story so u have every right to write it the way u like. I just give my opinion.

Wow, Nice concept... Do continue...
😊

hi😃