AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14 - Page 42

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Res
Unres

I know the unres has been quite late, so late that it has become the latest unres.😆
NO worries...I was away too so wasn't checking😉

This chapter (6th) belonged to the two Budhaas 😡 with mini appearances in person for Asya and a appearance in name for Ayaan.😉
Cant say lovely update with the oldies hogging all the limelight.
But it was a short and good update. No flashbacks too. No backstory yet. No asya yet. No Ayaan. Too many no's in this update.
But, now I am intrigued about Gafoor as well as Rashid's plans for their respective child.

But ur favorite Abbu was there...lol

His steps matched the determined look on his face, enraging Ghaffur further.
Good, let the both of them fight it out.

ANWAR..." Ghaffur called out for his man Friday.

Rivs, how could you, of all the persons - replace Wajid with Anwar ... not done.😆

Yeah...well Wajid is too special to be wasted here...he is my man Friday😳😆

"Hmmph" Ghaffur could not believe the audacity of the man standing in front of him.

Neither can we. That's the reason he has been put to rest (on a bed) in Qh.

Rashid sat down in a nearby chair, awaiting the reaction of his adversary.

Rashid trying to reduce the adversity of his adversary.

But I am guessing being her father, it would be upto you to get her to agree, wouldn't it?"Rashid raised a brow in questions as he stared hard at Ghaffur.

Rashid forgot to add "Just as I got my son to agree. We are two sides of the same coin."

Yeah...I should have totally added it

Rashid left right away, knowing well that his parting words will have the desired effect on his target.

Am still wondering what is Rashid's purpose other than getting one up over Gafoor. Sure there is some other reason.

Kuch nahi hai...woh sar phira sa hai...maybe he wants Gaffur's business and property too...😆

With his decision made, he spent the rest of the day putting his own plans in action.

Yeah, after all birds of a feather should flock together.

Lols

When Asad had made a delayed appearance and only conversed with the two men before making a hasty retreat

So hasty a retreat that I could'nt even spot him, neither in the story nor in the party..

The wedding was to take place within the next week, after which Asad and Zoya were to move to Mumbai.

TBH, the only line about the update I liked.

Pehle dulhan maan jaaye...

With all things set in place, the only thing he needed to do now was convince Zoya.

Its like trying to make kheer with only the milk missing.

"Zoya, beti..." he had started

"Beti mat bulaiye mujhe ...]" Zoya retorted as she let out a cry.

Whatever her mood, angry, sad, happy, Zoya will never let anyone complete their sentence.

She is special like that...has copyright over talking

When you are older and wiser, you will realize why a life with a man who can barely make ends meet every month is not the right person for you.

Spoken like a true parent. Really. These words make perfect sense. Any father, good bad, manipulative, selfish, or egoistic, would react the same way. Hope you dont' make Gaffoor as bad as Rashid.

Thanks for getting the point of this sentence. That there maybe other reasons for him not approving Ayaan, but the fact that he cannot provide for Zoya the way she has been raised is always a concern for a father. It is not always a bad thing. He just needs his princess to have the best.

finally gave her the ultimatum that he had not wished to use.

Which ultimatum -

- Do or Die

- Do or I will Die

There is another option too...

When he left, a bawling yet angry Zoya was left behind who had to make a very important decision that night.

Once again runaway before being a bride.

I don't think she will run away...but its a good suggestion.


Thanks for the comments Gita
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Superb part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

thanks😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Haiyee mere zoyaan <3 <3 <3 <3

Zoyaan for ever
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

hey rivs,

Hope ur son is alright now.
Congrats for ur sis's marriage.
It was a short but impressing update.
You know i dont how to suggest for future updates.
But i love to read both Asad & Zoya will be part of this marriage plan.
I wish to see their good bonding.
I love to read more .And i cant wait to read next update.
But i know u r busy.Pls update soon when you get time
Love you and take care😛

Yes my son is doing good...thanks for checking. Sis marriage is upcoming...super exicted

Thanks for the comments...I will try to update this week...as often as I can.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie

Wow di with every update im falling in love with this story <3

Amazing update
I hope zoe says yes
Waiting for the next update :D

Thanks Tanya...I hope Zoe says yes too...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Wonderful update!!!
Rashid gave his proposal!!
Gaffoor accepted it!!!
Rashid & gaffoor 's public meeting at iftari!!
Caused many whispers!!!
Asad 's meeting d duo & leaving soon!!!
Everything going according to plan!!!
Gaffoor trying to get zoya convinced!!!!
What will b Zoya 's answer???
Thanks 4 pm.
update soon

Yes the fathers have played their roles...now its the kids turn
Thanks for the comments
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitabaran

Nice update...😛

Eagerly waiting for next part when zoya and asad will come face to face...
Thanks for pm and pm me next update too.😊

AsYa meeting is still a bit away...
thanks for the comments
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

Superb Update..

What will be ZOya's decision?
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM..



-Mariam-

Zoya's decision in another 2-3 chapters...😆
thanks for the comments
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Awesome update Rivz. The convo between Rashid n Gafoor was good n definitely Rashid did have Gafoor thinking. Poor Zoya will have to do as her father says. Or will she do what she wants??? Hope she doesn't do anything irresponsible.

Loved the update. Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.


Thanks dear. I hope Zoya does the right thing too...😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is amazing...

totally luv it...
wonder wat gaffur told to zoya...
very very interesting...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thanks...I will let u know what ultimatum was given when I unfold her decision.

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