AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: nilusoni
very nice
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

thanks Nilu for the comment

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@metoyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Look who is here...lost and found. I was getting bored at uni, so I thought why not spend my time in a better way. (You have to feel honored when I am saying this)

Okay lets get serious. Bhak bhak toh hoti rehti hain

Part 3

Another attempt at manipulating the situation in his favor (Acha, Rashid the manipulator)

Zoya Siddique is khandaan ke liye sabse behtarin bahu hogi (Okay...wow. Unexpected Rashid)

Ammi always told him to never raise his hands on anyone, especially on women and kids (I love his ammi, a wise woman)

sugah (typo!)

Hmm acha... Clearly, the Siddiquis and the Khans cant get along. Zoya is a victim of domestic violence? I mean, her abbu hits her and now even locks her up.

I bet Rashid has a selfish reason to get Asad married to Zoya. I guess he is the kind of man who can do anything for his own happiness, even if that means playing with/ruining the lives of his loved ones.

The dimple scene...lovely ending of the flashback. Very cute! 😳

👍🏼

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Swetha Natarajan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Wow!!!! Superb...update!!!
Loved it...
Oh poor zoya...gets hit by her father ...!!!!
Oh yeah !!!! They r friends now!!!!!
Wow cute!!! They both have dimples ...hehehe!!
Haha!! So the dad's are from 70s and 80s...haha!!!
Thanks for the pm.
Continue soon...amazing part

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Rivs that was an good chapter 😃

Gaffur hits zoya 😡 how cruel he is gonna be 🤢😡

loved the FB scene that was very cute 😃

Rashid is just a bandar he dosen't care or asad's feelings 😭

Kill that bandar rashu n send him away to some mental asylum 😆

he wants asad to marry zoya n she loves ayaan interesting 😆

ahh i loved the last dimple part 😳😆

update soon n thanks for the pm...😃

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Applef
awesome update..

loved the flashback part..

zoya is so innocent and pure..

her father dare to hit her??😡

update soon..

thanks darling.

Some men are just too much I tell you.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Surish

thanks

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: anopama
nice update
so they did become frenz in childhood nice
omg her abbu hits her so sad
rashid wants asad to marry zoya really but it seems that
the families never got along.
cant wait to see what will happen next
continue soon

Yes they did...lol...I loved that I was able to keep u guys guessing...lol

Yes the families never got along...so u can guess how horrible Rashid can be...

Will continue over the weekend...thanks for the comments.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: neenabinu
Hey Rivs... nice banner...
I liked the way u asked us to imagine the abbus as Amrish Puri, Pran etc 😆

So Rashid wants Asad to marry Zoya... why I wonder...

loved the update... the intrigue is building up..

thanks Neena...

Yes I am very filmy...very very filmy

Yes the why is important...it will come up soon.