AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Nice update. Waiting to see if ASYA get married or not and what would be their married life like.

Please pmme for the next part.

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Hi 😃

Again an awesome udapte 👏

This story is just awesome 👍🏼

continue soon please 😉

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Awesome story
Asad as an angry young man & zoya love ayaan
They met in childhood & their friendship started
Then seperated bc of rashid decision of sending asad to boarding school
He is back after many years &
Rashid wants him to marry zoya
Angry he gone to same place where they met first
Plz add me in ur pm list
Continue soon
Thanks

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Res
Will unres on Monday

Just reminding you that its Monday.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: rajnid68
So Rashid decided that his grown up ..
and whom he should marry ..
Bet asad didnt know whether to cry or to laugh ..
Zoya being friendly ..
Since both are alone and have no friends ..
She hoped for his friendship ..
Asad ammi was there to protect him ..
But zoya ammi was not there to save her from her father ..poor soul
So he did accept their friendship ..
Thats an awesome update ..
Thanks for the pm ..

Yeah...Rashid is a jerk and I want him this way. Bas.

Yes they became friends.

Thanks for the comments Rajni.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Rivs, this is happening for the 2nd time in two days, another classic.
I asked for an update to this SS in my post and just then, got your PM for the update.😆
My reply and your PM must've crossed paths.

I know...we are getting telepathic...thats kinda crazy...lol

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

U think she is waiting for Asad? Yup fathers...right out of 70s and 80s hindi movies.😆

Thanks I love the poem too much to not include it.

well not asad...

fathers yup..😆 protective

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

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GitaIyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Just reminding you that its Monday.

I',m a woman of my words.😆

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nautanki_anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Ok Rivs, This time I actually imagined a Hindi film scene of the 80s where the father tells the son to get married to the girl of his choice and not to the girl he loves😆. I could not put a face to the names though😆. The update was too short😭😆.

Very well written and I'm sooo glad Ayaan wasn't mentioned... AT ALL!!!😆. I simply loooved the second meeting convo between the 2 kids. I felt bad when Zoya said that she's alone and there's no one to save her from her Abbu when he hits her .

Kids are sooo innocent. You cannot force them to love or hate anything/anyone. They have a mind of their own and will do as they please. As we have seen in a whole lot of movies, the parents will be the worst enemies but their children will end up being best friends/lovers and get married against their parents wishes.

Rashid seemed slightly bearable when he told Asad to get married to Zoya😆. But I wonder why he told Asad to get married to the daughter of a man who did not allow him to enter his house on his first visit and appears snooty and snobbish!!!

Can't wait for the next update now😃.

Edited by nautanki_anu - 11 years ago