Asya SS: Prince Of Darkness. Part:2 updated page-3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Asya SS:Prince Of Darkness
Character Sketch:

Asad Ahmed: played by karan Singh grover

A business man of 27 year old, board member of "Excellence Computer"
Excellence Computer is a multinational company founded by Ayaan khan
Asad invested 26 billion dollar in the company and got 37 percent share of the company and a position in the managing board of Excellence Computer
He have various shades of character, no one can judge him properly
His red eyes always seems lost and whoever looks in those eyes gets hypnotized by the beauty of his eyes
He is a complex character and always talks limited stuff

His father died when he was born, his mother was very poor as property of his father was wrongly capture by his uncle firoz khan
His mother used to work as a servant in the house of other people to keep herself and asad alive but destiny has all the cruelty in store for asad only, when he was 5 his mother got paralysed and now little asad of 5 year old have to go to jungle and collect the small piece of wood and sell it in the market of his village,
Then when he was 10 his mother too died leaving little asad alone in the world


Zoya fatima:daughter of ayan khan and a board member of Excellence computer
Stake holder of 41 percent of the company as now a days his father keeps himself away from the matters of company

Nikhat khan:daughter of firoz khan who is uncle of asad, first love of asad



Part - 1
(Purani yadein)

Asad is taking a nap in the office and in his dream his childhood revived

He started woodcutting at the age of 5

Flashback
At 5'o clock
Ammi:utho beta asad utho lakdi katne nahi jana kya

Asad(5 year old) : Ammi thodi dair to chone do na Ammi thodi dair

Ammi:beta agar aap nahi uthenge to lakdi kaun katega aur lakdi kat ke aap nahi bechenge to hum dono bhukh reh jaenge

Asad:nahi Ammi asad ke hote hue aisa kabhi nai hoga mai ladki katne jala hu

Asad goes to the dark jungle

Ammi thinks that beta agar meri kaam karne ki halat hoti kabhi tujhe us khaufnaak jungle me nahi bhejti
Ammi cries


Asad woke up from the nap as some one knocked his cabin

Ramlal(peon) - sir meeting ka time hogaya

Asad: theek hai kaka mai abhi aata hu waise aapke bete ki tabiyat kharab thi na ab kaisi hai uski halat

Ramlal:"crying" ka batao bitwa bahut kharab halat hai uske dil me ched hai doctor ne operation ke liye 26 lakh rupee mange hai

Asad:kaka aap Fikar na karo sab theek ho jaega, aapka beta city hospital me admit hai na

Ramlal:ha bitwa

Asad:sab theek ho jaega kaka

Asad calls the head surgeon of city hospital

Doctor:doctor sharma here

Asad:its asad, apke hospital me ek ladka admit hai uske pita ka naam raamlaal hai, uske operation ki taiyari yaad kahiye payment pahunch jayegi aapko

Raamlaal: in a crying tone beta tum bhagwaan ho

Asad thinks in mind "kaka shaitaan ko bhagwaan mat kaho maine jo kiya wo mera far tha taki phir koi gareeb gareeb me andhere ka raasta na chun le"




X x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x X X

In the board meeting

Zoya:so we will shoot the new advertisement of our company in the jungles of bhopal

1st Board member:I agree

Asad:no and never I disagree

All the board member after hearing asad's opinion
We too disagree

Zoya:mr asad be in limit I hate u why always u oppose me and why u all always luck his boots hunh
Koi agree nai hora to mai khud apne crew ke sath waha jaunga aur advertisement shoot karungi

Asad:shut up wo jungle jaanlewa hai
Waha pisach rehte hai

Zoya:shut up asad in the 21st century u r talking about vampires what a nonsense

I as the daughter of ayaan khan founder of this company and biggest stake holder I use my. Veto power and our add would be shouted only in the jungles of bhopal

Asad leaves from there



X x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x

In the jungle of bhopal


Zoya is running and four human looking people having blood on face following her

They grabbed her and inserted his teeth in her neck
She prayed to ALLAH "ALLAH. Mujhe bacha lijiye Plz mujhe bacha lijiye in logo ne mere sath ke 490 logo ko mar diya ALLAH mujhe bacha lijiye ALLAH

At the same instant ek aadmi chehre pe naqaab pehen ke tree ke upar se jump karta hai, uske hath me ek talwaar(sword) hai and with in fraction of second wo un charo admiyo ko jinke mu me khoon laga tha unke sar unki body se alag kar deta hai

Ye dekh ke zoya behosh ho jati hai
Uske dhyan me bas wo admi tha jisne use bachaya uske dimaag me abhi bhi ye ghum ra tha ki kaise us naqaabposh aadmi ne jiski sirf ankhe, laal ankhe hi dikh rahi thi ek Jhatka me 4 logo ko mara par uski jaan bhi bachai



To Be continued...

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niharikap thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
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v. nice and i bet it was asad. cont. super soon. will love to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: niharikap

v. nice and i bet it was asad. cont. super soon. will love to read more.



Oh very intelligent
Lets see ki kaun hai wo laal ankho wala shaks ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice 😃 plz pm me for next part 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was very nice update...😉
Its a new type of SS ! and its a different from the show...😊
Sad to hear abt Asad's childhood...😭
I think it was Asad who saved Zoya...😃
Update soon and pm me...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting
plz update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start
Continue soon
Add me in ur PM list
Thanks


Bahut bahut shukriya apka
The next update will be here with in few hours

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Very nice 😃 plz pm me for next part 😉


Shukriya
I am amazed with the response this story is getting
Shukriya again
Bilkul I'll pm u all surely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

It was very nice update...😉

Its a new type of SS ! and its a different from the show...😊
Sad to hear abt Asad's childhood...😭
I think it was Asad who saved Zoya...😃
Update soon and pm me...😛


Thank you so much for such detailed comment

Yep its a dark story

Lets see who was that man who saved zoya
Yep I will surely pm u

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