AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
Amazing
Fantastic
Brilliant update dear
Continue soon
thanks for pm so sweet of you
Edited by sweet4shehzadi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Update Preeti..
Loved it..
Zoya's surprise was Superb..
AsYa will never forget to fight..
AsYa garden scene was Romatic..
I loved that BG tune..Loved that song..
COntinue very soon..
Thnx for PM...







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Posted: 11 years ago
An AsYa personified chapter - beautiful! ⭐️

"Back in his room, he went over all the events that had happened after Zoya's comeback. It hadn't even been an hour...and they had already fought. And surely the house would be back to being a zoo again. He grimaced imagining pizza slices and coke cans strewn all around the house. But then a very small smile tugged at the corner of his lips. She was back and she was going to stay...in her room, in his house, right opposite his room. For real."


*sigh* The essence of their basic characteristics.


"Zoya considerably calmed down in the safe heaven of his arms. She knew as long as he was there...she would always be safe, protected and happy. She trusted him. He was her pillar of strength. With him by her side, she could do anything. The whole day's journey had worn her out...and she slept in his arms. Once her movements stopped, he knew she was asleep. He gently lifted her in his arms and headed for her room. He put her on the bed, gently breaking her grip on his shirt. He tucked her under the blanket and stood a few feet away staring at her sleeping form. She looked so innocent and beautiful. He found hinself smiling. But it was very brief as his eyes fell on the mess all around the room. He shook his head and walked out carefully avoiding all the junk on the floor. He got the cups back from the garden, washed them and kept them in their proper places and then went to sleep with a prayer.

"Mere moula...please Zoya ko aur dard mat dijiye! Let every trouble fall upon me...but please keep my family safe and sound.""


This was simply serene - this made up for lost time - charming!


The prayer was Mr.Khan at his best. 😳


Dilshad and Najma were as adorable as ever. 😃


Lovely writing! 😃
Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...
Asya are so adorable. ..
Love their fights..
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

lovely update!!!
AsYa and their Nok-Jhok!!!
AsYa share a great bond!!!
Dilshad mom u rock!!!



Thank You!
And yes..AsYa and Dillu Momma rockkk
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Awesome part
Loved it

Aaahh there she is..
Jahapanaah musibat magnet..
Aate hi shuru..
Within one hour thy fought on sumthng
*sign*
Sch a beautiful prt it was
He ddnt expected her to be there but he was felt very hpy

Loved the dining tbl prt
Loved asad's expressions nd dillu there

Dillu.. Ab Sab tere haaton mein hi hai..
Liked the way he consoled zoya.
But asad.. U shouldn't hv asked that to Allah lolll
He gonna gv u pora trouble maker lolll

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm




Aww...
Thank you so much!
And I am sure Asad knows what he would get if he prays to Allah. And more trouble means...AsYa get closer. Just kidding. :P
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

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Awesome
Amazing
Fantastic
Brilliant update dear
Continue soon
thanks for pm so sweet of you



You have sooo many words...I have only two!



THANKKK YOUUU ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Amazing Update Preeti..</font>

<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Loved it..</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zoya's surprise was Superb..</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">AsYa will never forget to fight..</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">AsYa garden scene was Romatic..</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I loved that BG tune..Loved that song..</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">COntinue very soon..</font>
<font color="#ff0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thnx for PM...</font>
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Thanks Mariam!
And so true...fighting with each other is in their genes 😆
I love the song too...it gives all the AsYa feels! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank you! 😳
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Originally posted by: p_s05

An AsYa personified chapter - beautiful! ⭐️

"Back in his room, he went over all the events that had happened after Zoya's comeback.<font color="#9900ff"> It hadn't even been an hour...and they had already fought. And surely the house would be back to being a zoo again.</font> He grimaced imagining pizza slices and coke cans strewn all around the house. <font color="#9900ff">But then a very small smile tugged at the corner of his lips. She was back and she was going to stay...in her room, in his house, right opposite his room. For real.</font>"


*sigh* The essence of their basic characteristics.


"<font color="#9900ff">Zoya considerably calmed down in the safe heaven of his arms. She knew as long as he was there...she would always be safe, protected and happy. She trusted him. He was her pillar of strength. With him by her side, she could do anything.</font> The whole day's journey had worn her out...and she slept in his arms. Once her movements stopped, he knew she was asleep. He gently lifted her in his arms and headed for her room. He put her on the bed, gently breaking her grip on his shirt. He tucked her under the blanket and stood a few feet away staring at her sleeping form. <font color="#9900ff">She looked so innocent and beautiful. He found hinself smiling.</font> But it was very brief as his eyes fell on the mess all around the room. He shook his head and walked out carefully avoiding all the junk on the floor. He got the cups back from the garden, washed them and kept them in their proper places and then went to sleep with a prayer.

"<font color="#9900ff">Mere moula...please Zoya ko aur dard mat dijiye! Let every trouble fall upon me...but please keep my family safe and sound.</font>""


This was simply serene - this made up for lost time - charming!


The prayer was Mr.Khan at his best. 😳


Dilshad and Najma were as adorable as ever. 😃


Lovely writing! 😃




You know that you are very very adorable, right?

Thank you so much girl! 😳

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